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Salen
Posts: 452
Joined: Tue Jan 18, 2022 10:18 am
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1657
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Sun Sep 18, 2022 9:05 am


Thread Name: The Retribution Contract
Location: Genteven
Notes/Warnings: The Beginning to "The Fall of Dahlia Senerite" Plotline.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Spycraft: Keep Contract Information Confidential.
Spycraft: Bounties are a good source of information
Spycraft: Knowing the details of a contract
Spycraft: Knowing the whereabouts of hideouts and gatherings.
Spycraft: Attending gatherings.
Spycraft: Information is Power in Daravin's Politics
Loot: A Bounty Contract for Dahlia Senerite

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 2 (Ends 51st Ash and 34th Frost)
New Mageblight: None
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Salen
Posts: 452
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Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1657
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1686

Tue Sep 20, 2022 3:26 am


Thread Name: If Darkness Falls, Order will Prevail
Location: Genteven
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: I think Brand for Hugo? Not sure.
Injuries/Ailments: +1 Mageblight due to minor overstepping.
Requested Lore:
Salen
Remnant: Phantasmal Reckoning - Producing a cage
Remnant: Overstepping - Can damage the mind
Blunt Weaponry: The grip of a hammer
Thrown Weaponry: Bouncing a hammer upwards with the right momentum of force thrown.
Unarmed Combat: Remain in position.
Unarmed Combat: Ensure blindspots are always checked before engaging.
Unarmed Combat: Disarming a heavy weapon from an opponent.
Interrogation: Remain calm
Interrogation: Sometimes confessing is your best option
Psychology: Sentimental items taken can be heart wrenching.

Hugo
10x Generic Lores

Loot: -1 Companion NPC for Salen. Tiberius is defined as dead.

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: +4
New Mageblight: +1 (This one won't go away until the 34th of Frost)
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Salen
Posts: 452
Joined: Tue Jan 18, 2022 10:18 am
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1657
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1709&p=7409#p7409
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1686

Wed Sep 21, 2022 7:59 am


Thread Name: Mourning
Location: The Badlands
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: Yes Nightfall for Salen
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Salen
Nightfall: Volley - Altering Umbraplasm to create Sharp arrows
Nightfall: Volley - Altering Umbraplasm to inflict Blunt Force
Remnant: Voyage - Can be used on waking targets.
Remnant: Voyage - Trance-like state when used.
Remnant: Falsification - Altering small details of a memory.
Remnant: Falsification - Requires a consistent cause-effect chain in the narrative of the memory.
Remnant: Falsification - Used to erase a particular part of a memory,
Necromancy: A necromancer kit
Necromancy: Used to perform healing surgeries.

Vassilios
Pending...

Loot: A Necromancy Kit for Salen, originally the property of Tiberius Ela'Dallis.

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 4
New Mageblight: None
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Salen
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Location: Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1686

Fri Sep 23, 2022 11:40 am


Thread Name: The Curse of a Corvo
Location: Genteven, Hugo's Home
Notes/Warnings: Based on the interactions of Necessity and Learning Written with permission.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
Spycraft: Listening to surroundings
Spycraft: Observing fighting techniques
Spycraft: Observing a person's way of thinking.
Spycraft: Observing potential 'threats'
Stealth: Using Shroud to Sneak Around.
Stealth: Loud Noises can be a distraction.
Loot: (If applicable)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 5 (Searing at this point)
New Mageblight: None.
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Salen
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Location: Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1686

Sun Oct 02, 2022 3:27 am


Thread Name: The Night of a Hunter's Moon
Location: Genteven, Rene's Mansion
Notes/Warnings: The First Thread for the "Fall of Dahlia Senerite" plotline. A combination of self modding and character implementation have been used.
Collaboration: Yes,
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Salen
Remnant: Phantasmal Reckoning - Illusory clothing
Remnant: Phantasmal Reckoning - Changing aspects of appearance.
Remnant: Voyage - Going into another's dreamscape whilst awake.
Remnant: Voyage - Hugo's MIndscape
Spycraft: Analysing Engramic Structures
Spycraft: A subtle use of Voyage can unlock hidden secrets within a mind.
Spycraft: Analysing surroundings.
Spycraft: Smell and taste for poisonous or narcotic contents.
Spycraft: Chaotic Environments are easier to blend in.
Spycraft: A creation of a scene can prove beneficial as a distraction.

Vinsue
Larceny: your not very sneaky when high
Larceny: high people are less likely to notice
Larceny: high people are less forgiving
Unarmed Combat: how to battle a snake
Unarmed Combat: pay attention to your opponents location
Stealth: being short makes it easier to hide in a crowd
Physics: balance is off when high
Physics: drinks disappear when high
Physics: why being high makes you happy
Physics: time slows when your high

Jared
Investigation: Searching for marks in crowds;
Bodybuilding: Resisting effects of Purgatory;
Larceny: Slipping objects into another person's pocket;
Dancing: Waltz in crowded place;
Acrobatics: Moving through crowds;
Acrobatics: Light Footwork;
Running: Moving quickly through crowds;
Stealth: Not drawing attention;
Cooking: Detecting foreign smells;
Cooking: Detecting foreign taste;

Hugo
10 Generic Lores

Loot: (If applicable)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: (Current Level)
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Oct 10, 2022 4:52 am


Thread Name: A simmering in the ashen air & preparations for a gala
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Nil
Requested Lore:
  • Stealth: Avoiding Patrol Routes;
  • Nightfall (Compass): Creating Piercing Needles;
  • Larcerny: Destroying a lock with Umbralplasm Needle;
  • Climbing: Bouldering;
  • Investigation: Finding suitable clothing stores for Upper-Middle to High-Class events;
  • Acrobatics: Tumbling;
Loot: Suitable clothing of mainly blacks & purples for a gala event;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Mageblight: 3 - Light Mageblight
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Oct 10, 2022 4:59 am


Thread Name: Rougish Grit & Recovery
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Nil
Requested Lore:
  • Negotiation: General Conversation with Lowborns;
  • Medicine: First-Aid
  • Medicine: How to apply dressings;
  • Medicine: Basic Wound Care
  • Investigation: Finding a healer's hut;
  • Deception: Minor White-lies;
Loot: Some herbal creams & bandages for wound care;

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Mageblight: Mageblight: 3 - Light Mageblight
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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Gloomcrest
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Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
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Mon Oct 10, 2022 5:05 am


Thread Name: Blades & Battery: I
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Possible sprains & bruises from training against a make-shift practice dummy;
Requested Lore:
  • Blunt Weaponry (Blackjacks): Quick strikes;
  • Blunt Weaponry (Blackjacks); Heavy strikes;
  • Thrown Weaponry (Daggers): Throwing single knives;
  • Blades (Dagger): Quick slash;
  • Unarmed Combat (Dirty Fighting): Sweeping Leg Kick:
  • Nightfall (Compass): Conjuring Weapons;
Loot: Nil

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Mageblight: 3 - Light Mageblight
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Oct 10, 2022 5:34 am


Thread Name: Blades & Battery: II
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Possible sprains & bruises from training against a make-shift practice dummy;
Requested Lore:
  • Blunt Weaponry (Blackjacks): Thrust;
  • Nightfall (Stratum): Creating a thick shield;
  • Nightfall (Compass): Coating cloak's edge to mimic a sharp blade;
  • Blades (Dagger): Hidden Strike with Cloak;
  • Blades (Dagger): Stab;
  • Running: Changing Directions in rapid movement;
Loot: Nil

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Mageblight: 3 - Light Mageblight
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Oct 10, 2022 5:37 am


Thread Name: A Glint in the Dark
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Possible sprains & bruises from training against a make-shift practice dummy;
Requested Lore:
  • Stealth: Ambush
  • Nightfall (Gloom): Creating a thick patch of Darkness;
  • Nightfall (Invert): Changing solid umbralplasm to gaseous state;
  • Nightfall (Volley): Firing a heavy-mass umbralplasm;
  • Nightfall (Stratum): Conjuring a heavy-striking whip;
  • Blunt Weaponry (Blackjack) - Knocking someone out;
Loot: Nil

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Mageblight: 3 - Light Mageblight
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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