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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Feb 01, 2021 3:30 am


Thread Name: Burning & Guns
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None really, all very tame.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: No.
Requested Lore:
Deception: Lie about the wellbeing of others to appease the softies.
Deception: Casual conversation to learn more about your opponent.
Deception: Pretending to be friendly with someone you don't like.
Larceny: Cause a diversion.
Tactics: Appoint two people to keep watch lest one is caught.
Tactics: Start fires to draw the eye of the law.

Loot: Friendship.
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~Fortuna
Last edited by Arkash on Wed Feb 03, 2021 4:15 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 84
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Feb 02, 2021 4:27 am


Thread Name: The Nameless Gun Heist I
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None really, all very tame.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: No.
Requested Lore:
Leadership: Sometimes, you need to trust your followers to follow through.
Leadership: Handing over the reins.
Leadership: Identifying a traitor.
Tactics: Don't reveal your end game to people unless they're close.
Tactics: Sitting out a mission if you're not fit to lead.
Tactics: Allowing your trusted friends to fill in for you if you cannot complete your task.

Loot: Betrayal
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Last edited by Arkash on Wed Feb 03, 2021 4:15 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 92
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Feb 03, 2021 4:14 am


Thread Name: The Nameless Gun Heist II
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Blood, violence, threats.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: Fractured skull, heavy concussion, a cut to the back of the head.
Requested Lore:
Tactics: Look for kinks in the armor where you can find them.
Tactics: Stay on the defensive until you have an opening.
Tactics: Throw all your strength and weight into a strike to penetrate something heavily fortified.
Tactics: Don't let your opponent recover, punish them for trying.
Tactics: Bait your opponent.
Tactics: Recover where you can.

Loot: -1 Serrated Shortsword, -1 Tunic
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Feb 04, 2021 3:23 am


Thread Name: Firearm Etiquette
Location: Lorien, Nivenhain's Sewers.
Notes/Warnings: Swearing.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: Headache
Requested Lore:
Teaching: Offer a prize.
Teaching: Run them through the motions.
Teaching: Repetition is key.
Teaching: Make an example of the bad eggs.
Teaching: Safety first.
Teaching: Start with the basics.

Loot: None.
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Fri Feb 05, 2021 3:38 am


Thread Name: Our Own Demons
Location: Lorien, Nivenhain's Sewers.
Notes/Warnings: Violence, blood. This is a short thread meant to link up two parts of Arkash's plot, sorry if it's a little fast-paced.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: Headache
Requested Lore:
Teaching: Teaching a group.
Teaching: Offer advice and tips.
Teaching: Teaching a subject you're knowledgeable in.
Teaching: Practical training.
Teaching: Practicing drills.
Teaching: Ensure everyone's on the same page before continuing with the lesson.

Loot: None.
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word count: 86
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Feb 06, 2021 9:05 am


Thread Name: Appealing to the symptom
Location: Lorien, Astoria
Notes/Warnings: Blood, dranoch things, I think some swearing?
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Linguistics: Common: Pronouncing "You" properly.
Linguistics: Common: Watch your words for rough edges.
Leadership: Relate to your following.
Leadership: Tell them what they want to hear.
Leadership: Humble yourself.
Leadership: Appeal to those of a higher status.

Loot: None.
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word count: 68
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Sat Feb 06, 2021 12:00 pm


Thread Name: Realisant mon espoir
Location: Daravin Wilderness
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Animus
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: Template - Boar
  • Animus: Immersion - Boar
  • Animus: Search for Features
  • Animus: Struggling With a Loss of Self
  • Flying: Landing On A Tree Branch
  • Flying: Coasting On Air Currents
  • Arcana: Ascension
Loot: Boar Template
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word count: 57
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Sat Feb 06, 2021 7:11 pm


Thread Name: Louve-garou
Location: Daravin Wilderness
Notes/Warnings: Language, strange animal body language
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Animus
Injuries/Ailments: Puncture Wound (Hind Leg), Puncture Wound (Nape)
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: Injuries Shift With Form
  • Animus: Animal Communication Possible, If Limited
  • Animus: Template - Wolf
  • Animus: Synchrony - Wolf
  • Animus: Immersion - Wolf
  • Animal Handling: Understanding Wolf Communication
Loot: Wolf Template
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word count: 61
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Sat Feb 06, 2021 10:17 pm


Thread Name: The Rose With All Its Petals Plucked
Location: Daravin Wilderness
Notes/Warnings: Aeraku tells Nuraku of his sexual trauma, swearing
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: Treatment of injuries from the prior thread
Requested Lore:
  • Flying: Crash Landing
  • Flying: Passing Out Mid-Flight
  • Flying: Flying Through Pain
  • Tactics: Never Trust A Dranoch
  • Tactics: Avoiding Attachment
  • Tactics: Holding Back Information
  • Aeraku: Aeraku is a Dranoch
  • Aeraku: Aeraku's Story
Loot: Treatment of Injuries
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word count: 79
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Sun Feb 07, 2021 1:48 pm


Thread Name: Mon petit ami
Location: Daravin, Imperial Badlands Outskirts
Notes/Warnings: Hyena death cries
Collaboration: Yes, Moop & Nuraku
Magic Experience: Yes for Nuraku, Animus.
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:

Moop:
  1. Mentalism; Mentalism is feared, keep it hidden
  2. Melee Weapon: Staff; Defending from a group
  3. Melee Weapon: Staff; Fighting large foes
  4. Melee Weapon: Staff; Can be used as a non-lethal weapon
  5. Melee Weapon: Staff; Stunning an enemy by hitting them in the nose
  6. Melee Weapon: Staff; Following through with your entire body in a strike for more power
  7. Melee Weapon: Staff; Running before striking
  8. Melee Weapon: Staff; Mercy killing
  9. Etiquette; Speaking clearly
  10. Psychology; Being understanding of others quests and passions
Nuraku:
  1. Animus: Synchrony - Boar
  2. Animus: Synchrony - Spitting Cobra
  3. Animus: Template - Spitting Cobra
  4. Animus: Immersion - Spitting Cobra
  5. Summoning: The Bright Flash of a Caru Explosion
  6. Summoning: Summoning Takes Time
  7. Tactics: Spot The Leader
  8. Tactics: Kill The Leader
  9. Leadership: Directing Companion To Stall
  10. Leadership: Giving A Command
Loot: Moop lost probably 3/4 of her salt or more. Hyena meats.
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word count: 168
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