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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Nov 30, 2020 11:15 am


Thread Name: Story
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None.
Last edited by Arkash on Mon Nov 30, 2020 11:20 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 22
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Nov 30, 2020 11:16 am


Thread Name: The Root of All Evil
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None.
Last edited by Arkash on Mon Nov 30, 2020 11:19 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 26
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Nov 30, 2020 11:18 am


Thread Name: The way forward
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None.
word count: 24
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Alexander Cross
Posts: 86
Joined: Wed Nov 11, 2020 6:42 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1155&p=5205#p5205
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1201

Mon Nov 30, 2020 10:15 pm


Thread Name: Joining the Argent Knighthood
Location: Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore: N/A
Loot: N/A
word count: 31
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Wed Dec 02, 2020 2:31 am


Thread Name: A Map to Ruin
Location: Essen, Brandt
Notes/Warnings: Ash Placeholder
Collaboration: NO v.v
Magic Experience: Yes - Sigilic Pyromancy{partial}
Injuries/Ailments: Exhaustion
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Flamelance is easy for picking enemies off
Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindling adds flame to weapons
Stealth: Sneaking in behind someone
Unarmed Combat: Subduing a man by knockout
Blades{Greatsword}: Hacking off limbs
Tactics: Formulating a plan and sticking to it

Loot: +1 Map
word count: 72
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Dec 02, 2020 4:49 pm


Thread Name: A new leaf
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Blood, Violence, Death.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic.
Injuries/Ailments: A shallow stab wound to the forearm.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Sway: Pull a weapon from your victim's wounds.
Blood Magic: Suffuse: Sharp Blood.
Gunslinging: Shooting one-handed.
Gunslinging: Aiming with your superior eye.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Lower the weapon to turn corners.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Allow the sling to catch the weapon during the 'cool-down' period.

Loot: -3 Caster Shells
Last edited by Arkash on Sat Dec 05, 2020 6:08 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 82
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Dec 05, 2020 6:07 am


Thread Name: A new leaf II
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Blood, Violence, Death.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic.
Injuries/Ailments: Shallow, long cuts to his: Upper Arm, Thigh, Chest
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Sway: Solid to Liquid.
Blood Magic: Leeching: Pulls energy from open wounds to use for blood magic.
Shields: Blocking overhead.
Shields: Blocking from the side.
Shields: Blocking a stronger opponent can leave you open.
Shields: A shield should be light to allow you to hold it up for longer.

Loot: None
word count: 86
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Sun Dec 06, 2020 11:08 pm


Thread Name: Two Weeks Later
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Some nastiness, borderline gore.
Collaboration: Collab; Taelian, 4513 words (12 XP), Arkash, 6172 words (16 XP)
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Flight: Gliding
Flight: Hovering
Flight: Flapping your wings
Flight: Maintaining aerial balance
Flight: Accelerating
Flight: Moving forward
Flight: Falling
Flight: Descending

Arkash: I love him
Arkash: Took care of me
Arkash: Was difficult to convince of my Draedan heritage
Arkash: Waited for me in Rainier

Arkash
Biology: Bigger bodies have a higher exsanguination threshold.
Gunslinging: Transposing bulllets.
Gunslinging: Unloading the magazine of a rifle.
Gunslinging: Rifles are difficult to conceal.
Medicine: Blood loss makes you cold.
Medicine: Some people can sustain lethal wounds and survive.
Medicine: Removing a blade from a wound can cause more harm than good.
Medicine: Removing an obstruction in a wound can cause it to bleed more.
Medicine: Helping a wounded ally to their feet.
Medicine: Helping a wounded ally walk.
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[PC] Taelian: Met with you, as he promised.
[PC] Taelian: Actually died.
[PC] Taelian: Is a god now?
[PC] Taelian: STABBED HIMSELF.
[PC] Taelian: SAID HE LOVES YOU.

Loot: N/A
word count: 192
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Dec 08, 2020 1:43 pm


Thread Name: A new leaf III
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Death blood, descriptions of wounds, gore, violence.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic
Injuries/Ailments: Light overstepping, burn wounds all over his arms, chest and patches of his scalp, the beginnings of an infection caused by foreign blood cells and debris in his wounds.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Sacrifice.
Blood Magic: Utilizing blight to push your abilities even further.
Biology: Arteries in the throat.
Biology: Arteries bleed a lot.
Biology: The heart is responsible for blood flow.
Biology: wounds do not bleed if the heart stops.

Loot: Please award me however many shells/bullets you feel Arkash might find on the victim's body.
word count: 115
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Foma Kozlov
Posts: 29
Joined: Tue Dec 17, 2019 6:16 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=228

Tue Dec 08, 2020 10:26 pm


Thread Name: When You Read You Begin With
Location: Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Nope!
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Runic Script: Pressure
Runic Script: Encircle
Runic Script: Bend
Runic Script: Activate
Runic Script: Deactivate
Runic Script: Determining Defiinitions Through Function
Loot: None
word count: 46
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