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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Fri Sep 04, 2020 4:55 pm


Thread Name: Awake II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Lots of crying.
Collaboration: No collab.
Magic Experience: No magic.
Injuries/Ailments: No injury.
Requested Lore:
Investigation: Determining that your captors don't want to hurt you.
Negotiation: Forgiving lies on the grounds that others forgive you.
Persuasion: Talking to your captors might make them let you go?
Persuasion: Ask nicely and you shall receive.
Psychology: Separating patient characteristics from impatient.
Psychology: The stress and trauma of being kidnapped.
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[NPC] Valris: Is actually called Asmodei.
[NPC] Asmodei: Isn't proud of deceiving you, but does so anyway.
[NPC] Asmodei: Gave you water.
[NPC] Asmodei: At ends with his wife.
[NPC] Asmodei: Married to Fayeth.
[NPC] Fayeth: Impatient.
[NPC] Fayeth: Direct.
[NPC] Fayeth: Somewhat cold.
[NPC] Fayeth: hates liars.
[NPC] Fayeth: The woman that killed those two men in an alley and scarred for you for life.
[NPC] Fayeth: Has been watching you?
[NPC] Fayeth: Kidnapped you!
Loot: None.
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Fri Sep 04, 2020 5:41 pm


Thread Name: Awake III
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Brainwashing
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Meditation: Speaking with others in your first language helps you relax.
Meditation: Being praised can elevate you from a foul mood.
Psychology: The law is a tool to perpetuate power and oppress the common people.
Psychology: The law is just another man's definition of right and wrong.
Psychology: Right and wrong are subjective.
Psychology: The only difference between the castes is birthright.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Lives by his own code.
[NPC] Asmodei: Thinks highly of you.
[NPC] Asmodei: Reassured you that it's okay to break the law.
[NPC] Asmodei: Holds a distinct hatred for authority.
[NPC] Fayeth: Cursed to eat mortal flesh.
[NPC] Fayeth: Doesn't want to eat you.
[NPC] Fayeth: Thinks highly of you.
[NPC] Fayeth: Believes you do the right thing no matter what.
Loot: None.
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word count: 151
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Fri Sep 04, 2020 6:04 pm


Thread Name: Awake IV
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of injuries, trauma.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Meditation: It's upsetting to lose your arm.
Meditation: Ground yourself in reality by breaking the illusion.
Meditation: Time alone after a traumatic experience can leave you worse off.
Meditation: Focus on what's real.
Psychology: Losing the will to live.
Psychology: Deep-rooted emotional pain.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Will help provide for you until you're better.
[NPC] Asmodei: Saved you from certain death.
[NPC] Fayeth: Brutally honest, no matter what.
[NPC] Fayeth: Doesn't seem to mind that you're disfigured.
[NPC] Fayeth: Will continue to look after you.
[NPC] Fayeth: Saved you from certain death.
Loot: none.
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word count: 123
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Sep 07, 2020 6:31 pm


Thread Name: Rebuild I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Nothing to worry about.
Collaboration: Alone, this time.
Magic Experience: I'm no mage.
Injuries/Ailments: Still getting over the last ones.
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: You need to eat to replenish your lost bodymass.
Meditation: It upsets you when people treat you like you're simple.
Meditation: It upsets you when you fail.
Meditation: Breathe slowly to calm yourself.
Unarmed Combat: Don't try to bite through plate armor.
Unarmed Combat: Swipe your claws.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Brought you chicken.
[NPC] Asmodei: Kinda condescending.
[NPC] Asmodei: You attacked him, but he didn't mind.
[NPC] Asmodei: Knows a lot about your species of Rathari.
[NPC] Asmodei: Spent a lot of time in a place called 'Atinaw' with a dense rathari population.

Loot: Nothing.
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word count: 132
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Arkash
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Mon Sep 07, 2020 6:31 pm


Thread Name: Rebuild II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Exploring one of Arkash's new Neurological deficiencies.
Collaboration: Alone, this time.
Magic Experience: I'm no mage.
Injuries/Ailments: A sore throat, burst blood vessels in his eye, a headache.
Requested Lore:
Medicine: Heimlich Maneuver.
Medicine: Parts of your body don't work right after sustaining traumatic head injuries.
Meditation: Sometimes, a hug is all you need to feel better.
Psychology: Your left arm isn't useless, it just works differently.
Psychology: A breakthrough in rehabilitation.
Psychology: Your anger prevents you from thinking outside the box.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Gives you more credit than you deserve.
[NPC] Asmodei: Taught you to use what's left of your stump arm.
[NPC] Asmodei: Didn't know how to save you from choking.
[NPC] Fayeth: Saved you from choking.
[NPC] Fayeth: Hugged you.

Loot: Nothing.
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word count: 142
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Mon Sep 07, 2020 6:31 pm


Thread Name: Rebuild III
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Nothing to worry about.
Collaboration: Alone, this time.
Magic Experience: I'm no mage.
Injuries/Ailments: Bruised knees.
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: Prolonged bed rest withers your body.
Bodybuilding: Using your whole body strength to climb to your feet.
Bodybuilding: Your core is the center of all strength in your body.
Bodybuilding: All movements work some muscle or other.
Bodybuilding: Work through the pain.
Bodybuilding: If you're too weak to pull off an exercise, don't force it.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Made you crawl to your feet.
[NPC] Asmodei: Reignited your self-confidence.
[NPC] Asmodei: Helped you back onto the bed once you'd given it your all.
[NPC] Asmodei: Refused to help you.
[NPC] Asmodei: Feels bad for failing to save you, but won't say so.
[NPC] Asmodei: Comforted you.
[NPC] Fayeth: Promised to help you look for Cojack once you're able to walk again.
[NPC] Fayeth: Comforted you after choking.
[NPC] Fayeth: Can't speak vithmi.

Loot: Nothing.
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word count: 171
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Elizana Celamyrsa
Posts: 61
Joined: Fri Dec 27, 2019 4:36 pm
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=292
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:09 pm


Thread Name: What To Do With All The Little Birdies
Location: The Northern Realm (Skaven)
Notes/Warnings:
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore: Semblance - Looking for Aura's that shouldn't be there.
Semblance - Resisting looking at auras that are familiar
Politics - Meeting in Secret to discuss dangerous subjects
Politics - Confirm rumors before reacting.
Politics - Establishing what you are your strengths in the bargaining
Drawing - Being able to self critique your own work.
Loot: None
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word count: 79
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Arkash
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Wed Sep 09, 2020 5:32 pm


Thread Name: Rebuild IV
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Not dark for once.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: Hold a strenuous position to work your muscles.
Bodybuilding: Strenuous activity somehow improves your mood.
Bodybuilding: Training to stand unassisted.
Meditation: Physical exercise makes you happy.
Meditation: Being held makes you uncomfortable.
Meditation: Working through a strange panic attack with breathing techniques.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Proud of you.
[NPC] Asmodei: Helped you stand.
[NPC] Asmodei: Personally trained you after your coma.

Loot: None.
word count: 87
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Arkash
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Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Sep 09, 2020 5:32 pm


Thread Name: News
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: Motivating yourself to finish the set.
Politics: Wealthy people seek self-gain.
Politics: The relationship between the nobility and the faith isn't always a smooth one.
Politics: Selfishness is often at the core of 'noble' movements.
Politics: Leaders don't always disclose the full truth.
Politics: Look for the hidden agenda.

Loot: None.
word count: 75
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Sep 12, 2020 11:16 am


Thread Name: Ashes remain
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Investigation: The process of elimination.
Investigation: Deciphering imprints in ash.
investigation: Searching a scene for clues.
Leadership: Guide your followers through the safer path.
Leadership: Keep to your plan and assure your followers it's the best course of action.
Leadership: Share your positive thoughts with the party.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Came with you to your old home.
[NPC] Asmodei: Expressed concern about your process.
[NPC] Cojack: Possibly alive.
[NPC] Cojack: Left you some money?
[NPC] Fayeth: Came with you to your old home.
[NPC] Fayeth: Believed that Cojack might have already passed.
[NPC] Fayeth: Seemed upset when you found proof of Cojack's presence at the old house.

Loot: +1,023 df | An animal skin bag | A leather-bound journal written by Cojack & Liu.
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word count: 145
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