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Ricky
Posts: 164
Joined: Wed Jan 01, 2020 7:10 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=578
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=815
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=761
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=816

Sun Aug 02, 2020 1:08 pm


Thread Name: The First Day I
Location: Loras (Atinaw) Follow-up to Night In the Brume entries
Notes/Warnings: Nah, mild as fuck
Collaboration: Yuppers
Magic Experience: Nuppers
Injuries/Ailments: Nup
Requested Lore:
Milana
Skill
  • Negotiation: Moderating Disputes
  • Negotiation: Setting Reasonable Terms
  • Negotiation: Noticing Inconsistencies
  • Leadership: Controlling a Room
  • Leadership: Mitigating Disputes
  • Leadership: Hear all Sides of the Story
  • Leadership: Taking a Stand for Those Who Deserve It
  • Leadership: Seeing Someone's True Nature
  • Finance: Creating a Payment Plan
  • Finance: Setting Fair Rates
Rickter
Skill
  • Acting: Maintaining Composure In The Face of Adversity
  • Rhetoric: The Antics Of Making Impressions Around Others
  • Etiquette: Remember To Treat Your Betters With Respect
  • Etiquette: Remember to Call Noble Men "M' Lord" and Women "M' Lady"
  • Etiquette: Controlling Laughter At Certain Occasions
  • Rhetoric: Regaling A Story From Your Perspective
  • Storytelling: Being Clear And Honest To Explain A Situation
  • Storytelling: Remembering To Outline Events In The Order They Occurred
  • Etiquette: How 'Civilized' People Sit In Chairs
  • Negotiation: Trying To Find Agreeable Terms For All Parties Involved
General
  • Loras: The Terras Manor
  • Memory: Tea With The Terras
  • Loras: A Town Thriving Off Trade And Tourism
  • Loras: Tea Is A Resource Of The Town
  • Memory: Roped Into Working In Loras
Loot: None
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word count: 204
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Ricky
Posts: 164
Joined: Wed Jan 01, 2020 7:10 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=578
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=815
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=761
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=816

Sun Aug 02, 2020 1:16 pm


Thread Name: In The Shadow of Memory
Location: Loras (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: A first-glance peek into Rick's present life, and how he's handling the loss of his loved one.
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: Nup
Injuries/Ailments: Only a lingering broken heart.
Requested Lore:
Skill
  • Psychology: Dealing With Loss Is Different For Everyone
  • Psychology: Grief For Lossed Loved Ones Takes Time
  • Caregiving: Starting Each Day With A Morning Time Bath
General
  • Personal: Still Missing Your Late Wife
Loot: None
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word count: 81
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Aug 02, 2020 3:34 pm


Thread Name: Home alone.
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None, really.
Collaboration: None of this, either.
Magic Experience: Nope.
Injuries/Ailments: Double nope.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: In the heat, your muscles are a lot more relaxed and stretchy, granting you superior flexibility.
Acrobatics: Performing a high kick successfully.
Acrobatics: Touching your toe-claws.
Acrobatics: Performing a full split.
Acrobatics: The cold reduces your flexibility and general mobility as an ectothermic Rathari.
Acrobatics: A decent amount of strength is needed to be proficient in acrobatics.
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[NPC] Cojack: Doesn't like the heat much at all.
[NPC] Cojack: Fixed the roof in the Frost of 105.
[NPC] Liu: Loved you, and you loved her in return.
[NPC] Liu: Kept Cojack from pushing himself too hard.
Loot: None.
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word count: 126
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Milana
Posts: 63
Joined: Thu Jan 23, 2020 8:56 am
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=352
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=619
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=607

Tue Aug 04, 2020 8:05 am

Thread Name: Blood and Paper

Location: Loras

Notes/Warnings: this is not my best work but I hope you enjoy it all the same!

Collaboration: solo

Magic Experience: No

Injuries/Ailments: N/A

Requested Lore:
Finance: Calculating Profit Loss
Finance: Accounting for Payouts
Business: Analysing Impacts
Leadership: Leading in Hard Times
Leadership: Knowing When to Rest

Loot: N/A
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word count: 59
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Kotoru
Posts: 140
Joined: Thu Aug 08, 2019 2:09 pm
Location: Currently - Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ranserarp.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=94
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=351
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=220

Wed Aug 05, 2020 3:15 am


Thread Name: A Serpent in the Garden
Location: Threndas, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Suspense at the end {Job Thread}
Collaboration: nope
Magic Experience: (Yes Summoning, Koto used two rituals)
Injuries/Ailments: Slight exhaustion from spending aether
Requested Lore:
  • Summoning: Ritual of Unification
    Summoning: Ritual of Reminiscence
    Summoning: Becoming familiar with your archetypes
    Blades{Tachi}: Way of the Flowing Dragon - The Slicing Current Technique
    Leadership: Ensuring those under your charge are ok, even Aldir
    Intelligence: Owner - Getlack Farmstead Owner
Loot: Mysterious Ominous Note
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word count: 81
☵ Sometimes it's not the people that change, its just their mask that falls off ☵
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Arlen
Posts: 120
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2020 1:28 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=695

Wed Aug 05, 2020 9:10 am


Thread Name: [Loras] Night Crawlers
Location: Outskirts of Loras, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: hints on gore, dying animal
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: Nope
Injuries/Ailments: Aside from bad dreams? Don't think so.
Requested Lore:
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Loot: Lunch at Duedrop Inn (Common meal -50df)
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word count: 114
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Ricky
Posts: 164
Joined: Wed Jan 01, 2020 7:10 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=578
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=815
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=761
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=816

Wed Aug 05, 2020 6:04 pm


Thread Name: The First Day II
Location: Loras (Atinaw) Follow-up to Night In the Brume entries
Notes/Warnings: Nah, mild as fuck
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic Experience: Nurp
Injuries/Ailments: Nurp
Requested Lore:
Skill
  • Etiquette: Keeping To Your Word
  • Leadership: Partnering Up WIth Other Individuals
  • Rhetoric: The Antics Of Help
  • Leadership: Things Are Easier When Working Together
  • Rhetoric: What Travelers Wear For Gear
  • Etiquette: Helping Others When They Need A Hand
General
  • Loras: Erma's Herbal Remedies
  • Memory: Doing Freelance Work With Telion
  • Memory: Telion And The Apple Tree
Loot: None
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word count: 91
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Ricky
Posts: 164
Joined: Wed Jan 01, 2020 7:10 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=578
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=815
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=761
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=816

Wed Aug 05, 2020 6:16 pm


Thread Name: Erma's Herbs
Location: Loras (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: Combat Thread initiated
Collaboration: Nurp
Magic Experience: Nurp
Injuries/Ailments: Eh, just a couple. Minor injuries that heal pretty quickly.
Requested Lore:
Skill
  • Survival: Foraging For Herbs In The Forest
  • Tactics: Throwing Projectiles At Ranged Targets
  • Running: Dashing To Close In On A Target
  • Blades: One Handed: Broad Slashes
  • Blades: One Handed: Blitz Attacks
  • Blades: One Handed: Full Moon Slash
General
  • Plant: Réalta Cneasaithe Is A White Flower
  • Plant: Réalta Cneasaithe Has Medicinal Purposes
  • Fauna: Feòragmhòr
  • Fauna: Feòragmhòr Lurk Within Tree Tops
  • Fauna: Feòragmhòr Are Very Territorial
  • Fauna: Feòragmhòr Throw Sticks and Branches At You
  • Fauna: Feòragmhòr Have Sharp Teeth And Claws
  • Fauna: Feòragmhòr Can Glide
Loot: None
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Last edited by Ricky on Thu Aug 06, 2020 12:38 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 132
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Bellmari
Posts: 36
Joined: Fri Jul 31, 2020 2:49 pm
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?p=3662#p3662

Wed Aug 05, 2020 11:19 pm


Thread Name: Step 1
Location: Raellon, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, Mesmer
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Mesmer: Focusing on one person in a crowd
Mesmer: The Cascading Effect
Mesmer: Identifying Notes in Melodies
Mesmer: Using Touch to Transmit Notes
Mesmer: A light touch is all it takes

Dancing: Staying light on your feet
Loot: N/A
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Last edited by Bellmari on Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:47 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 61
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Rhea
Posts: 55
Joined: Mon Jun 15, 2020 7:37 pm
Location: Loregard & Alfsos, Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=629
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=670
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=681

Thu Aug 06, 2020 5:34 am


Thread Name: Right Place, Right Time
Location: Alfsos, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Supsense, Job thread
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
  • Leadership: Taking the lead in dire situations
    Leadership: Handling hostage situations
    Leadership: Keeping the crowd inline
    Persuasion: Trying to convince someone out of a drastic action
    Negotiation: Offering yourself in place of hostages
    Unarmed Combat: Restraining Opponents

Loot: Possible Longterm Contract with Alfsos Merchant
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word count: 68
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