Review Submission Thread v1.0

[Amara]

Thread Name: [Hopsfel] An Eventful Stroll
Location: Hopsfel, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Persuasion: Telling a child to watch where they're running!
Etiquette: Stepping aside so smaller beings can pass!
Animal Handling: Loud noises terrify small animals
Animal Handling: Using a soft tone of voice makes you approachable.
Animal Handling: The way an animal walks can give away its injuries.
Running: It's harder to chase animals with four legs
Loot: N/A

[Amara]

Thread Name: [Hopsfel] PACHECOLOOKITSAGIANT
Location: Atinaw, Hopsfel
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Amara, Magna
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Amara:

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[Politics:] Outsiders are unwelcome in Atinaw.
[Politics:] Common Language is a dead give away you're not from here!
[Intimidation:] A giant's glare can scare away onlookers.
[Animal Handling:] Horses enjoy a soft touch
[Rhetoric:] A bit of laughter can lighten the mood!
[Etiquette:] Introducing yourself.
[PC] Magna: She's awkward.
[PC] Magna: A half breed
[PC] Magna: New to Hopsfel
[PC] Magna: Has a horse
[PC] Magna: Friendly
[NPC] Khan: A Rathari
[NPC] Khan: Has one arm
[NPC] Khan: Poor common, but speaks Ithmi
[NPC] Khan: Is teaching Magna Ithmi
[NPC] Pacheco: Likes to be pat.

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Magna:

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Etiquette: Introducing yourself.
Etiquette: Greeting strangers.
Etiquette: Saying goodbye.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Timing, relative to days.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Common nouns relative to time.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: A word for recommend.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Using the correct term.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Making a word a plural.
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[PC] Amara: A really tall, friendly Jastai woman.
[PC] Amara: Agreed to eat with you.
[PC] Amara: Agreed to answer your questions about the Jastai.
[PC] Amara: Lives in Hopsfel as of a week ago.
[PC] Amara: Has trouble fitting in buildings.
[NPC] Khan: Friendly to everyone apparently.
[NPC] Khan: Possibly embarrassed of you.
[NPC] Khan: Likes Amara

Loot: No

[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] The Secret of Steel II.
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:

Skill:

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> Blade: Two-handed weapons have more powerful strikes
> Blade: Quality of metal in part decides the quality of a weapon
> Blade: Well-tempered swords equal quality
> Blade: Adjust stance to weapon’s size and weight
> Blade: Fullers lighten sword's rigidness
> Blade: Different weight of a weapon adjusted to yielder

Non-skill:

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> Jastai: Thova: Strict and stern teacher

Loot: N/A

[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] Little Off Shoot
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:

Skill:

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> Ranged Weapon: Move bow to aim during nocking
> Ranged Weapon: Cheek as an anchor point
> Hunting: Mark where you saw prey
> Hunting: Use the environment for cover
> Tracking: Buck footprints
> Tracking: Depth of footprint hints on weight

Loot: N/A

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[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] Seeing Blind I.
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:

Skill:

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Ranged Weapon: Always carry extra bowstring
Ranged Weapon: Creaking bow is a bad sign
Ranged Weapon: Use stringer to hook the bowstring
Ranged Weapon: Warm it up before use
Ranged Weapon: Poundage and arrows may affect range
Ranged Weapon: Bowyer makes bows, fletcher makes arrows

Loot: N/A

[Saej Mirilla]

Thread Name: viewtopic.php?f=45&t=756 Luna So Bright
Location: The road to Loras
Notes/Warnings: Vague nudity, not gross I swear.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Fishing; Using a sinking lure
Fishing; Catching worms for bait
Fishing; Using a floating lure
Fishing; Fishing at night
Fishing; Gutting a fish
Sneak; Being quiet in the water

Loot: None

[Milana]

Thread Name: Tick Tock II
Location: Loras, Grimhold Territory, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Milana is trying to come to terms with parts of herself she doesn't like. It isn't a happy thread.
Collaboration:Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Cut on thumb
Requested Lore:
Tactics: Weaken your opponent before striking
Tactics: Set the environment for your victory
Tactics: Strength isn't just brute force

If you see anything else feel free to add it ^.^
Loot: N/A

[Kotoru]

Thread Name: Hide & Seek
Location: Alfsos, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: I tried to reach 1500, but ran 200 and some change short v.v
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience: no
Injuries/Ailments: no
Requested Lore:

• Stealth: Staying out of the line of sight
  Stealth: Dark corners are your friend
  Stealth: Treading lightly on rooftops
  Stealth: Using a crowd to hide in plain sight
  Stealth: Watching a mark from shadows of a room
  Detection: Finding your Target in a Crowd

[Arkash]

Thread Name: A good day.
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: F-bombs and C words were spoken. (Not for the faint of heart)
Collaboration: Just me.
Magic Experience: Nah.
Injuries/Ailments: Still in one piece.
Requested Lore:
Rhetoric: Accepting gifts.
Running: Higher stamina allows you to run for longer.
Running: You won't make it far after carrying large bags of flour and mixing dough all night.
Running: Burns through short boosts of energy easily.
Storytelling: An effective method of moving people.
Storytelling: Can earn you pity.
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[NPC] Barry: An overweight human that owns a bakery in Lower Lorien
[NPC] Barry: Seems genuinely interested in your story.
[NPC] Barry: Pities you.
[NPC] Barry: Shares a hatred for Lorien.
[NPC] Barry: Gave you his smoking pipe, and a muzzle to help stop your venom from spilling on edible goods.
[NPC] Barry: Officially the best human in Lorien.
[NPC] Barry: Wants you to work for him full time?
[NPC] Barry: Gave you the nightshift.
[NPC] Cojack: Your father, a sick horse Rathari.
[NPC] Cojack: Always asleep.
[NPC] Cojack: Struggles to talk without his medicine.
[NPC] Cojack: Has lost most of his body mass.
[NPC] Cojack: You have to take care of him.
Loot:
+1 Smoking pipe with some tobacco left in it.
+1 Muzzle.
+50df

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Sleep
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: None really, a thread that explores Arkash's relationship with his dad.
Collaboration: Just me, myself, and I.
Magic Experience: Not a mage, sir.
Injuries/Ailments: Everything's working fine.
Requested Lore:
Leadership: Standing by your values.
Persuasion: Tears are an effective tool to use on those with empathy.
Persuasion: Standing your ground without backing down will break the weak-willed.
Persuasion: Getting things your way.
Unarmed Combat: Striking objects to manipulate your environment.
Unarmed Combat: A basic hammer fist.
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[NPC] Cojack: Truly cares about your wellbeing.
[NPC] Cojack: Will suffer if it makes your life easier.
[NPC] Cojack: Loves you.
[NPC] Cojack: Wants you to get out of Lorien without him and travel.
[NPC] Cojack: Wants you to find your Purpose.
[NPC] Cojack: Doesn't want to lose you.
Loot: -200df for Cojack's medicine, which was bought outside of this thread.