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Sola
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Location: Tilema
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Thu Apr 27, 2023 11:44 am


Thread Name: Lust
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: nop
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes Mentalism
Injuries/Ailments: -
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Creating insatiable lust
Mentalism: Creating subtle desire
Mentalism: there's such a thing as too much of a good emotion
Mentalism: Becoming familiar with the Paramour reverie
Mentalism: It may be possible to create love
Mentalism: There are many shades of "desire"

Loot: Nil;

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Mageblight: Level: 1 at this point in time
New Mageblight: prob not
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Sola
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Location: Tilema
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=155&t=2365
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Thu Apr 27, 2023 7:12 pm


Thread Name: Fear
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: nop
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes Mentalism
Injuries/Ailments: -
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Creating traumatic levels of fear
Mentalism: it seems to work excellently on those with weak minds
Mentalism: holding someone still while simultaneously manipulating their emotions
Mentalism: Becoming familiar with the Scarecrow reverie
Mentalism: squeezing someone just enough so they can't scream
Mentalism: when paired with natural intimidation, Scarecrow is incredibly powerful

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 1 at this point in time
New Mageblight: up to you
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Sola
Posts: 364
Joined: Mon Dec 26, 2022 3:47 pm
Location: Tilema
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=155&t=2365
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2373

Sun Apr 30, 2023 4:18 pm


Thread Name: Rage
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: nop
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes Mentalism
Injuries/Ailments: -
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: becoming familiar with the Provocateur reverie
Mentalism: creating truly blind rage
Mentalism: it doesn’t take much to drive someone over the edge
Mentalism: Provocateur can make someone violent
Mentalism: Manipulating emotions in two people at once
Mentalism: combining fear in one subject and anger in another is a powerful combination

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 1 at this point in time
New Mageblight: up to you
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Sun May 14, 2023 1:48 am


Thread Name: Dawn & Dusk
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, 2 exp for Bypass, 2 exp for Lucence.
Injuries/Ailments: Slight drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Lucence (Ray) - Using Ray as a minor light source;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Using Ray while concentrating on other tasks;
  • Stealth - Quickly moving open areas to cover;
  • Investigation - Scouting wealthy buildings in upper-district of Genteven;
  • Larcery - Working on Superior locks;
  • Larcery - Attempting to minimise evidence of tampering on locks;
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Sun May 14, 2023 1:53 am


Thread Name: The Sun in Rags
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, 4 exp for Lucence
Injuries/Ailments: Slight drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Lucence (Ray) - Conjuring multiple Rays in small beads
  • Lucence (Ray) - Combining multiple small Rays into a large sphere of light;
  • Lucence (Bulwark) - Maintaining veil of light around body;
  • Lucence (Bulwark) - Using Bulwark to reduce corruption within;
  • Dancing - Balancing on narrow stone fence;
  • Acrobatics - Balancing on narrow stone fence;
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Sun May 14, 2023 1:58 am


Thread Name: An Average Midnight Scuffle
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, 3 in Wildering and 2 in Acclimate
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Blunt Weapons (Blackjack) - Striking while opponent is distracted;
  • Blunt Weapons (Blackjack) - Blocking wounding strikes;
  • Thrown Weaponary - Flicking wooden beads into an opponent's face
  • Running - Attempting to lose pursuers via speed;
  • Stealth - Attempting to avoid vision with pursuers;
  • Acrobatics - Dodging multiple opponents.
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word count: 77
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Sun May 14, 2023 2:04 am


Thread Name: Alabaster Light
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, 5 in Lucence;
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Lucence (Bulwark) - Feeling the cloak of light around his body;
  • Lucence - Controlling his angering visions;
  • Lucence - Resist urge to submit to violent;
  • Lucence (Bulwark) - Maintaining the cloak of light under duress;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Conjuring a sphere of light in a quick manner;
  • Larceny - Picking locks while fatigued;
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Sun May 14, 2023 2:09 am


Thread Name: Breaking and Entering
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, 2 in Wildering and 2 in Lucence
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Stealth - Stalking Guards;
  • Investigation - Keeping track of guard stations and patrol routes;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Controlling the intensity of light while moving quietly;
  • Stealth - Darting from cover to cover during night;
  • Larceny - Working with an array of lockpicks;
  • Stealth - Moving quietly while guards are distracted.
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Sun May 14, 2023 2:23 am


Thread Name: Mices in the Marketplace
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Co-op with Luna
Magic Experience: Yes, 2 in Bypass and 3 in Acclimate
Injuries/Ailments: Slightly Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Larceny - Pickpocketing during the day;
  • Larceny - Picking pockets in a busy crowd;
  • Larceny - Picking a locked chest while owner is distracted;
  • Larceny - Stealing contents from a locked chest;
  • Investgation - Identifying threats of targets for thievery;
  • Running - Attempting to sight of pickpocketed victim;
  • Dancing - Waltzing in a busy plaza;
  • Deception - Attempting to deflect;
  • Negotiation - Striking a deal;
  • Stealth - Losing sight of onlookers;
  • Stealth - Creeping while camouflaged.
word count: 105
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Sat May 20, 2023 2:30 am


Thread Name: Guidance of Light & Possibilities
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Co-op with Ford
Magic Experience: Yes, 4 in Bypass and 2 in Acclimate
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Larceny - Pickpocketing during the day;
  • Teaching - How to use Raw Magic;
  • Teaching - Guiding a someone using emotional resonance;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Creating shapes with light;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Changing the colour of the Ray;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Splitting a singular sphere into multiple smaller spheres;
  • Dancing - Tapping to internal rhythmic beat;
  • Dancing - Realigning footwork with acrobatic practice;
  • Dancing - Using a traditional form of dance from Genteven;
  • Etiquette - Listening to other people's stories;
  • Etiquette - Maintaining composure about sensitive topics;
word count: 115
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