Review Submission Thread v1.1

[Gloomcrest]

Thread Name: Risk & Rewards: Strike for Gold - Mistwalker's Vanishing Act;
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil;
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Mainly suffering from fatigue & strain due to early stages of Mageblight;
Requested Lore:

• Stealth: Moving quietly in admit chaos;
• Stealth: Slipping by guards while highly alert;
• Running: Avoiding incoming projectiles while maintaining distance from pursuers;
• Nightfall (Gloom): Create a mass cloud of darkness to create cover for escape;
• Acrobatics: Dodging incoming potentially lethal strikes;
• Bodybuilding: Building up endurance during a chase;/list]
  Loot: Nil;
  
  For Magical Threads
  Mageblight: Level: 5 - Early Mageblight
  New Mageblight: Nil;
  
  

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Darius Quill V
Location: The imperial Badlands, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: The usual, but also: viewtopic.php?f=73&t=1946
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Loss of right arm up to the elbow, various 3rd-degree burns, hearing damage, concussion, disfigured ankle, various broken bones - anything else that I might have forgotten.
Requested Lore:
Necromancy: The Essence Calcifier
Necromancy: The Essence Calcifier: A small gun-like instrument of gold with a built-in glass vial
Necromancy: The Essence Calcifier: May be used in tandem with the Instinct Capturer
Loot:
+1 Essence Calcifier
-1 Sky Stealer (enchanted rifle)

[Sola]

Thread Name: Invisible Tethers
Location: Tilema
Notes/Warnings: First magic training thread. Journeymen are supposedly able to turn the threads invisible so I thought I'd make a thread about it.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Making tethers invisible
Mentalism: Tethers can move through organic matter
Meditation: Generic Lore (4)

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: none
New Mageblight: none

[Gloomcrest]

Thread Name: Trial of the Fallen Shroud
Location: Reverie, Dahlia's Mind Palace
Notes/Warnings: Combat (Blood, screaming, etc)
Collaboration: Yes, Modded Plot with Mimi Pidders
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Fractures, possible broken bones & pierced limbs; Mageblight would be aggravated as well.
Requested Lore:

• Investigate: Searching for Hidden Foes;
• Acrobatics: Softening fall during impact;
• Running: Covering long-distance while being attacked;
• Bodybuilding: Sustaining Heavy Damage on Body;
• Bodybuilding: Tolerating Severe Amount of Pain;
• Nightfall (Stratum): Creating thin shield to lessen impact of falling & arrows;
• Nightfall (Lance): Creating a single Lance with a Weighted Ball on the end for aerial movement;
• Nightfall (Shadowrend): Conjuring three whirling scythes over long distance;

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Mageblight: 3
New Mageblight: +1 or +2 depending on interpretation;

[Gloomcrest]

Thread Name: Trial of the Fallen Shroud: Shadowed Presence
Location: Reverie, Dahlia's Mind Palace
Notes/Warnings: Combat (Blood, screaming, etc)
Collaboration: Yes, Modded Plot with Mimi Pidders
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Fractures, possible broken bones & pierced limbs; Mageblight would be aggravated as well.
Requested Lore:

• Persuasion: Playing into Enemy's Pride
  Acting: Playing up injuries;
  Bodybuilding: Tolerating crushing damage while on death's door;
  Bodybuilding: Crawling under duress;
  Meditation: Maintaining concentration while under duress;
  Nightfall (Enshroud): Hiding Compass for a surprised attack;
  Nightfall (Shadowrend): Creating really sharp blades;
  Nightfall (Compass): Manipulating Umbralplasm under extreme pain;

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Mageblight: 3
New Mageblight: +1 or +2 depending on interpretation;

[Sola]

Thread Name: Be Happy
Location: Tilema
Notes/Warnings: I don't think so
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: Light overstepping
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Muscle spasms are a sign of overstepping
Mentalism: Minstrel – can make someone so content that they become unreactive
Mentalism: Obelisk – Creating an Obelisk
Mentalism: Obelisk – can be used to maintain someone’s emotional state
Mentalism: Obelisk – doesn’t require ether to maintain
Mentalism: Obelisk – has a much larger range than tethers

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 0
New Mageblight: +1 in this thread

[Sola]

Thread Name: Stop by the name of magic
Location: Tilema
Notes/Warnings: being mean to a cat
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: shouldn't be
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Nailing – It’s possible to harden the weave which slows things down
Mentalism: Nailing – It’s a fairly slow process
Mentalism: Nailing – With enough ether, it can completely stop something from moving
Meditation: Generic Lore (3)


Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Current: 1
New Mageblight: not intended but not opposed to it

!	Message from: Treachery
	Using a Journeyman skill within a short period of time is taxing on the soul, especially when one has overstepped within the past couple of days. Be wary, for the soul can only handle so much strain until the body can feel itself. For this, I am giving Luna a +1 Mageblight, which should total to be Level: 2; (Please note when the Mageblight has been received on your character sheet)

[Sola]

Thread Name: A Purple Crystal
Location: Tilema
Notes/Warnings: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: shouldn't be
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Obelisk – They’re hard to destroy
Mentalism: Obelisk – Larger ones require more ether
Mentalism: Obelisk – Allows the mage to manipulate emotions without making tethers
Meditation: Generic Lore (3)

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Current: 1
New Mageblight: not intended

!

Message from: Treachery

While I love seeing that Luna is practising hard on Mentalism, I believe that it is within reason to say that obtaining some Mageblight is required based on the previous threads graded; Using multiple Journeyman skills in short succession is taxing, even those who can use it comfortably such as experts & masters. Raw Magic is powerful, but it is not infallible. Hence, I am giving a +1 to Mageblight, which should be a total of Level: 3 for Luna, please record the date on which the mageblight was acquired.

[Sola]

Thread Name: Purple Experimentation
Location: Tilema
Notes/Warnings: -
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: shouldn't be
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Obelisk – it continues to work even if the mage leaves the area
Mentalism: Dehydration is a overstepping effect
Running: Generic Lore (2)
Cosmetology: Generic Lore (2)

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Current: 1
New Mageblight: +1 in this thread

!	Message from: Treachery
	Please note that your current Mageblight is at a total of 4 from all the previous usage of Mentalism via practice; It is advised to slow down and allow the rumours to die out for the Scarlet Watch keeps their eyes & ears open for unbranded mages.

[Hakon]

Thread Name: The Purloined Keepsake pt II
Location: Jorikford, Radenor (both Vesterhal and an unnamed border town between Jorikford and Daravin)
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Collaboration: Andros + Hakon
Magic Experience: Yes, for Hakon
Injuries/Ailments: n/a
Requested Lore:

Andros

• Etiquette: soothing bruised egos
• Mediation: calming rivals
• Investigation: recovering suppressed memories
• Navigation: following directions through a town
• Appraisal: becoming angry at an appropriate time
• Etiquette: tolerating differences
• Storytelling: accurately summarizing events
• Rhetoric: making personal connections with much younger men

Hakon

• Swimming: Observing How Skilled Swimmers Move Through Water
• Swimming: Some Men Float, Others Sink
• Investigation: Asking Blunt Questions
• Investigation: Establish Rapport Before Asking
• Investigation: Protocol vs Effectiveness
• Investigation: Returning to the Scene And Asking More Questions
• Brand: Using Huntersight To Find Etheric Patterns
• Brand: Following a Cold Etheric Trail

Loot: N/A

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight: Maybe plus one? Up to you