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Hakon
Posts: 291
Joined: Thu Dec 08, 2022 12:01 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2309
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2314

Thu Jan 12, 2023 10:57 pm


Thread Name: The Purloined Keepsake pt III
Location: An unnamed border village, Jorikford and Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Violence, blood, death
Collaboration: Andros + Hakon
Magic Experience: Yes, for Hakon
Injuries/Ailments: Surprisingly, no
Requested Lore:

Andros
  • Appraisal: sensing the presence of a mentalist
  • Persuasion: interrupting a fit of rage without getting murdered
  • Persuasion: calming very angry mages
  • Appraisal: understanding funeral customs in Radenor
  • Business: paying with someone else’s money
  • Animal handling: leading horses through a town
  • Persuasion: comforting the bereaved
  • Storytelling: sharing joy
Hakon
  • Brand: Matching Ether to Its Source
  • Brand: Devising Inside a Target's Mouth
  • Brand: Using Your Armory with Simple Effectiveness
  • Appraisal: Determining the Worth of Items
  • Appraisal: Determining Goods a Peddler May Want
  • Appraisal: Portioning Out Spoils
  • Investigation: 2 Generic Lore

Loot: n/a (Andros gets stuff, but this is 9+ years ago, so it's gone by now)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight: +1 for Hakon, for sure
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Jan 15, 2023 2:57 pm


Thread Name: Prey
Location: Valtoria, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Blood, violence, cruelty, murder, disfigurement. Arkash recovered some items that he lost in this thread: viewtopic.php?f=118&t=1430
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Funny
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Torture: Take away bodily functions
Torture: Play with the subject's life
Torture: Concussing your subject is a good way to make them useless
Torture: Heavy head trauma can cause a concussion
Torture: Horror
Torture: Issue commands while the subject is vulnerable

Loot:
[*] 1 linen Underwear.
[*] 1 Black linen Tunic.
[*] 1 pair of Black linen Pants.
[*] 1 Brown leather Belt.
[*] 1 Black linen Cowl.
[*] Leather Riding Boots
[*] Superfine wool Breeches
[*] Superfine wool Doublet
[*] Leather Jacket
[*] Fine Wool Undergarments
[*] Leather, monstrous-fur-trimmed Tunic
[*] Leather, monstrous-fur-trimmed Trousers
[*] Leather, monstrous-fur-trimmed High boots
[*] Leather, monstrous-fur-trimmed Coif
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word count: 138
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Jan 16, 2023 5:52 am


Thread Name: Coward
Location: Valtoria, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Blood, violence, cruelty, murder, strangulation. Arkash recovered some items that he lost in this thread: viewtopic.php?f=118&t=1430
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: no lol
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Intimidation: Undermine Authority
Intimidation: Covered in blood

Loot:
[*] 1 Bloodshaped lockpick
[*] 1 Blood shaped, serrated longsword
[*] 1 serrated steel shortsword
[*] 1 Taelian's resonator
[*] 1 spyglass
[*] 1 flintlock pistol
[*] 13,400 df
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word count: 72
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Vivian
Posts: 342
Joined: Tue Apr 12, 2022 9:50 am
Location: Amoren
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1882&p=8295#p8295
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=16&t=2156&p=9611#p9611
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1891

Mon Jan 16, 2023 9:32 pm


Thread Name: To Become a Thief of Faces
Location: Radenor
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Ascension thread!!!
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
Stealth: Planning around guard schedules
Stealth: Moving quickly while your enemies are distracted
Malformity: Ascension: The Doppelganger
Malformity: Doppelganger - The feel of being in another person's skin
Malformity: Doppelganger - Ascension is the deepest connection to the magic of shifting chaos
Malformity: Doppelganger - Becoming a legend isn't without pain.

Loot:
Plot approved by Tyranny and Mimi
Vivian is becoming the first mage to ascend!

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: N/A
New Mageblight: +3 For Ascension
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word count: 100
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Hakon
Posts: 291
Joined: Thu Dec 08, 2022 12:01 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2309
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2314

Mon Jan 16, 2023 10:55 pm


Thread Name: Thumb on the Scale
Location: Vesterhal, Jorikford, Radenor
Notes/Warnings: tw: Blood, Near Death Experience
Collaboration: n/a; solo
Magic Experience: Yes, in Grave
Injuries/Ailments: Hakon has drained his own vitessence to the point of being injured. He will be frail for the next week or so as he builds his strength back up. Until then, his strength and stamina will be limited.
Requested Lore:
  • Grave: Attempting to Cure Serious Wounds
  • Grave: Using One's Own Vitessence
  • Grave: Sacrificing One's Vitality for Another's
  • Grave: Switching Vitessence Sources
  • Running: Pushing Through Dizziness
  • Persuasion: Asking For Help
Loot: n/a

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Currently at +1
New Mageblight: Will be at +2
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Arnos Gleren
Posts: 27
Joined: Thu Nov 24, 2022 8:47 pm
Location: Radenor
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2266&p=10311#p10311
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=2267
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2299
Letters: viewtopic.php?f=105&t=2325

Sat Jan 28, 2023 12:24 pm


Thread Name: First Time Lessons with Amara
Location: Radenor
Notes/Warnings: No
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore: N/A
Loot: N/A
word count: 28
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Hakon
Posts: 291
Joined: Thu Dec 08, 2022 12:01 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2309
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2314

Mon Jan 30, 2023 12:54 am


Thread Name: Damsel in Distress
Location: Near Leiden, Jorikford, Radenor
Notes/Warnings: Violence + Blood, mentions of sexual assault and cannibalism
Collaboration: Andros (as guest mod), Hakon
Magic Experience: Yes, for Hakon
Injuries/Ailments: A little. It will get worse.
Requested Lore: Andros: N/A; guest mod
Hakon:
  • Stealth: Hiding in a Tree
  • Investigation: Examining a crime scene
  • Tactics: Avoiding an ambush
  • Tactics: Scouting to gain information
  • Shields: Raising to deflect a blow
  • Thrown Weapon: Basics of Aiming
  • Brand: Galvanizing objects to destroy them
  • Brand: Evaluating a mage's expertise
  • Grave: Recognizing Agony as it's cast
  • Grave: Watching a fellow Engraver heal
Loot: n/a

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: +1 (+1 from not yet reviewed threads)
New Mageblight: +1 (for a total of +3 once all is reviewed)
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Sola
Posts: 364
Joined: Mon Dec 26, 2022 3:47 pm
Location: Tilema
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=155&t=2365
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2373

Thu Mar 02, 2023 9:19 am


Thread Name: Two tethers are better than one
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: Channeling multiple emotions at once is a journeyman level thing
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Manipulating conflicting emotions at the same time makes the target confused and frustrated
Mentalism: Attaching a different Reverie to each tether
Non-specific generic skill lore: x4

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 0
New Mageblight: Not intended
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Ivar
Posts: 74
Joined: Thu Dec 29, 2022 7:40 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2395&p=11087#p11087
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2428

Sun Mar 05, 2023 9:13 am


Thread Name: A New Mage?
Location: on a big boat in the ocean
Notes/Warnings: Ivar is getting initiated into mentalist magic by Luna
Collaboration: Yes: Luna and Ivar
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: no
Requested Lore:

Ivar:
Mentalism: the initiation process
Mentalism: Don't give in to emotions

Luna:
Mentalism: Drawing a mark on someone to initiate them
Persuasion: urging someone to be careful
Leadership: Conveying expectations you have of someone else
Leadership: Giving orders
Teaching: Warning someone of difficulties they may have

Loot: nothing

For Magical Threads

Ivar
Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight: 2 from getting initiated

Luna:
Mageblight: 4
New Mageblight: 0 - Luna said she got confirmation that initiating someone doesn't make you overstep
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Sola
Posts: 364
Joined: Mon Dec 26, 2022 3:47 pm
Location: Tilema
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=155&t=2365
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2373

Mon Mar 06, 2023 5:13 pm


Thread Name: Rocky
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: not really
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Precisely controlling something grabbed by The Weave
Mentalism: Hurling a rock grabbed by The Weave
Mentalism: The larger The Weave, the harder it is to control
Non-specific generic skill lore: x3

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 0
New Mageblight: Not intended
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word count: 64
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