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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Fri Jan 22, 2021 12:02 pm


Thread Name: Humanity
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of death, gore.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Slashed wrist.
Requested Lore:
Intimidation: Firing a gun.
Intimidation: Strength in numbers.
Intimidation: Imposing allies.
Persuasion: Convincing people to work toward a cause.
Persuasion: Convince them it's for their own good.
Persuasion: Offer an out.

Loot: -1 Caster shell.
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~Fortuna
Last edited by Arkash on Fri Jan 29, 2021 3:54 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 61
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
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Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Fri Jan 22, 2021 2:09 pm


Thread Name: Abandon I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Slashed wrist.
Requested Lore:
Larceny: You can't pick locks if your hands are too cold.
Larceny: If you can't pick the lock, break it.
Larceny: Breaking into a train.
Larceny: Picking locks at awkward angles.
Larceny: Collaboration can help.
Larceny: Planning ahead.

Loot: None
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Last edited by Arkash on Sat Jan 23, 2021 8:06 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 65
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Jan 23, 2021 8:01 am


Thread Name: Abandon II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: The property of sharpness for suffuse was explored in a prior thread.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood magic
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Suffuse: Sharpness.
Blood Magic: Your blood is far more potent than the blood of others.
Climbing: Across a train link.
Climbing: Frozen metal.
Larceny: Stab the lock to break it.
Larceny: Improvised tools to get the job done.

Loot: None
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word count: 77
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Jan 23, 2021 8:05 am


Thread Name: Abandon III
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Implied death.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Hibernation, hypothermia, mitigation of the process for his infection.
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None
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word count: 34
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Jan 27, 2021 4:01 pm


Thread Name: The fire, it burns
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of death, blood, violence. Arkash word count: 7,052 (16 XP) Nuraku (Alphonse) word count: 6,150 (16 XP)
Collaboration: Yes, Nuraku and I.
Magic Experience: Summoning for Alphonse
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Arkash:
  1. Etiquette: Don't undermine the achievements of mages.
  2. Etiquette: Don't rat people out in front of them.
  3. Etiquette: Compliment someone's home.
  4. Etiquette: Accept offered beverages or make a good excuse to refuse.
  5. Etiquette: Look away when someone's disrobing.
  6. Etiquette: Don't let anything waste if it's gifted to you.
  7. Etiquette: Being generally polite.
  8. Etiquette: Promising not to speak of something when asked.
  9. Tactics: Watch your host make your drink.
  10. Tactics: Only drink what's given to you after your host does if it's from the same ppot.
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[PC] Alphonse: A member of the Black Remedy.
[PC] Alphonse: Kills Dranoch.
[PC] Alphonse: Lives with Vesta?
[PC] Alphonse: Doesn't like blood tea.
[PC] Alphonse: Soft on the inside.
[PC] Alphonse: Has explosion magic and summoning?
[PC] Alphonse: Has the same magic as Asmodei.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Has five Magics.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Nearly died receiving her last magic.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Likes blood tea.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Was very kind to you.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Has travelled a lot.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Can turn people into frogs and little birds and doesn't turn them back.
[NPC] Vesta (Nuraku): Disapproves of Alphonse's revolutionary ties.

Nuraku:
  1. Tactics - Checking Safety Before Pyrotechnics
  2. Tactics - Keep Moving Before Trouble Finds You
  3. Tactics - Avoid Bad Company
  4. Running - Walking As Fast As You Can
  5. Summoning - Commanding a Caru In Its Tongue
  6. Summoning - Burning Down a Building With Caru
  7. Blades - Drawing With A Schwing
  8. Blades - Stepping Back to Swing
  9. Blades - Skull-Stabbing Downed Opponent
  10. Unarmed Combat - Stomp
  11. Unarmed Combat - Pinning Someone Beneath A Boot
Loot: None.
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word count: 313
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Jan 28, 2021 2:42 am


Thread Name: Broken vows
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Vague descriptions of death and gore, blood .
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Become Dranoch Botchling
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None
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~Fortuna
word count: 33
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Jan 28, 2021 2:43 am


Thread Name: My Failures
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Vague descriptions of death and gore, blood .
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None
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~Fortuna
word count: 31
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Jan 28, 2021 2:50 am


Thread Name: There has been talk
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of gore, blood, cannibalism, etc. etc.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Psychology: Ultranumb.
Psychology: Lacking empathy.
Tactics: Appeal to the emotions of others.
Tactics: Numbers are nice, but dedication is better.
Tactics: Present yourself in the best light to those you must appeal to.
Tactics: The epicenter will be the most cataclysmic. Be there.

Loot: None
word count: 74
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Jan 28, 2021 4:30 am


Thread Name: The Nameless Pyre
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of self-harm, blood, dead things. I plan to boost Arkash's leadership with the points available in the queue to justify the outcome of this thread.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic.
Injuries/Ailments: Slashed palm, residual weakness on his left hand for a week.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Suffuse: Combustible Blood.
Blood Magic: Sacrificing your own blood.
Leadership: Unify them with hate.
Leadership: Trim the fat.
Leadership: Empower those that give you their loyalty.
Leadership: Rally a crowd.

Loot: None.
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~Fortuna
word count: 96
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Fri Jan 29, 2021 3:51 am


Thread Name: Risk and Reward
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None really, all very tame.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: No.
Requested Lore:
Leadership: Delegate tasks.
Leadership: Recognize a potentially troublesome follower.
Leadership: Take suggestions, but don't surrender control.
Leadership: There is such a thing as too much initiative among your followers.
Leadership: Take caution when handling the unruly.
Leadership: Someone smarter than you can be a boon in the beginning, but a problem in the long run.

Loot: The various supplies mentioned to be applied to the gathered butchering survivors.
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word count: 96
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