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Foma Kozlov
Posts: 29
Joined: Tue Dec 17, 2019 6:16 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=228

Wed Dec 09, 2020 1:32 am


Thread Name: If Then Or Then If
Location: Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None!
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None!
Requested Lore:
Runic Script: If Then Conditions
Runic Script: Context Matters
Runic Script: Composition Is Subjective
Runic Script: "If"
Runic Script: "Then"
Runic Script: Multiple Verification of Suspected Function Is Ideal
Loot: None!
word count: 53
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Wed Dec 09, 2020 2:35 am


Thread Name: Fires in Full Bloom Ⅰ
Location: Wilderness, Essen
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: (Yes)
Injuries/Ailments: Mental Pain
Requested Lore:
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Flamelance is easy to use with practice
    Sigilic Pyromancy: Envisioning a spear helps in creating the lance
    Sigilic Pyromancy: Flamelance has the potential to be powerful
    Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindling a weapon to enhance its potential
    Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindled weapons cut through things much easier
    Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindled weapons become coated in shrivenflame

Loot: (If applicable)
word count: 81
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Dec 24, 2020 3:07 am


Thread Name: Beneath it all I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Nothing.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: No.
Requested Lore:
Animal Handling: Wrogon
Animal Handling: The use of leads to guide animals from point A to B.
Animal Handling: Baby animals move fast despite having tiny legs.
Animal Handling: Baby animals require heat when separated from their mothers.
Animal Handling: Baby animals require food when separated from their mothers.
Animal Handling: Wrogon Piglets don't like being picked up.

Loot: 4 Wrogon Piglets. -4,000 df
Last edited by Arkash on Wed Dec 30, 2020 1:20 am, edited 1 time in total. word count: 89
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Arkash
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Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
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Thu Dec 24, 2020 3:14 am


Thread Name: Beneath it all II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Blood, Death, Violence, Cruelty.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood magic (Discovery of a new ability)
Injuries/Ailments: A sore finger from being bitten.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Sway
Blood Magic: Leeching
Animal Handling: Animals instinctually distrust you because of your predatory features.
Animal Handling: Baby animals loose death wails when hurt.
Animal Handling: An animal's cry for help.
Animal Handling: Watch your fingers.

Loot: -1 Wrogon Piglet.
word count: 81
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Dec 24, 2020 3:18 am


Thread Name: Beneath it all III
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Blood, Death, Violence, Cruelty.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood magic (Discovery of a new ability)
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Suffuse.
Blood Magic: Blight reduces the cost of your abilities, but not completely.
Animal Handling: Baby animals are more susceptible to the cold.
Tracking: Following tracks in the snow.
Tracking: Differentiating different tracks on the shape.
Tracking: Tracks appear differently based on the steps taken to make them.

Loot: -1 Wrogon Piglet.
word count: 87
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Thu Dec 24, 2020 3:23 am


Thread Name: Beneath it all IV
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Blood, Death, Violence, Cruelty.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood magic
Injuries/Ailments: Strain; Bruises all over his body, weakness in his bones. Light overstepping: Headache, nausea.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Sway: Liquid to Gas.
Blood Magic: Sway: Gas to Solid.
Animal Handling: Treating animals roughly.
Chemistry: Three states of matter.
Chemistry: Application and removal of energy changes matter to a different state.
Chemistry: Heat rises.

Loot: -1 Wrogon Piglet.
word count: 82
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Jan 02, 2021 9:19 am


Thread Name: Burning Guns
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of death, blood, violence. Arkash word count: 6,356 (16 XP) Alexander word count: 4,391 (12 XP)
Collaboration: Yes, Alex and I.
Magic Experience: Sigilic Pyromancy and Transposition for Alexander Cross.
Injuries/Ailments: Minor bruising for Alex. All Ark's wounds were awarded prior.
Requested Lore:

Arkash:
  1. Leadership: Set boundaries.
  2. Leadership: Make decisions, explain why.
  3. Leadership: The hard way is never easy, the easy way is always a trap.
  4. Leadership: Manage your resources.
  5. Leadership: Make use of the greatest strengths people have to offer.
  6. Leadership: Lead from the back for oversight.
  7. Negotiation: Offer a lesson instead of ammo.
  8. Tactics: Isolating potential problems.
  9. Tactics: Stealth is impossible with heavy armor.
  10. Tactics: Take the less-tread path.
  11. Tactics: Don't travel alone.
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[PC] Alexander Cross: Stole the armor from the argent you killed.
[PC] Alexander Cross: Left his family behind.
[PC] Alexander Cross: Killed the thing.
[PC] Alexander Cross: You shot him.
[PC] Alexander Cross: A mage.
[PC] Alexander Cross: Part of the group trying to kill Fayeth.
[PC] Alexander Cross: Teleports like Taelian used to.

Alexander Cross:
  1. Deception: Appearing nonchalant about a possibly sticky situation while preparing for the worst
  2. Deception: To act the part, dress the part
  3. Tactics: Lose a battle to win the war
  4. Gunslinging: How to properly hold a rifle
  5. Gunslinging: How to properly load a rifle
  6. Gunslinging: Bigger guns are more effective against armored enemies
  7. Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindled weapons are quite effective against Hollows
  8. Transpositioning: Using mirroring to close the distance with the enemy
  9. Transpositioning: Mirroring is more taxing than blinking
  10. Leadership: A Hollow would react to a cue word even if it’s not from its owner
Loot:

Alexander: +1 Suit of oversized Argent Armor, +1 Rifle
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~Fortuna
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
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Sun Jan 17, 2021 11:27 am


Thread Name: Awakening the Beast
Location: Wilderness, Essen
Notes/Warnings: Magic talk
Collaboration: nope
Magic Experience: (Yes - Animus)
Injuries/Ailments: Fatigue
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: The Rune of Animus
    Animus: The Initiation
    Animus: Being one with your inner beast
    Animus: Entering a primal animalistic state

Loot: Rune of Animus
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word count: 49
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Jan 18, 2021 11:57 am


Thread Name: Doctor Doctor
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of death, blood, violence. Arkash word count: 5,343 (12 XP) Haldir word count: 3,896 (8 XP)
Collaboration: Yes, Haldir & I.
Magic Experience: Yes for Haldir.
Injuries/Ailments: A cauterized chest wound for Haldir + whatever else you see. All of Arkash's wounds were awarded in prior threads.
Requested Lore:

Arkash:
  1. Appraisal: Your human eye can see further than your birth eye, so use that when aiming.
  2. Appraisal: The seriousness of a wound.
  3. Appraisal: Whether or not it's safe to proceed.
  4. Appraisal: The strength of Armor.
  5. Appraisal: Identifying gaps in an enemy's defense.
  6. Tactics: Knock out the foundations to take down the tower.
  7. Tactics: If you can't kill them, hurt them.
  8. Tactics: Verify before committing yourself to action.
  9. Tactics: Move now, rest later.
  10. Tactics: Relocate when your opponent can't see you if you're caught.
  11. Tactics: Aerial advantage.
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    [PC] Cyrus: Helped out with the butchering.
    [PC] Cyrus: Pretty damn tough.
    [PC] Cyrus: In the Black Remedy now.
    [PC] Cyrus: Saved a boy.
    [PC] Cyrus: Offered to treat your wounds but you refused.
    [PC] Cyrus: Got hurt fighting the Knight.
Haldir:
  1. Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindling your weapon in a fight
  2. Sigilic Pyromancy: Flamelance to the Face
  3. Sigilic Pyromancy: Helps give you an edge in combat
  4. Blades{Greatsword}: Clashing with another Greatsword
  5. Blades{Greatsword}: The impact upon a shield
  6. Stealth: Staying out of the sight of Hollows
  7. Stealth: Using dilapidated buildings as cover
  8. Leadership: Guiding a group of people to safety
  9. Leadership: Delegating to your subordinate
  10. Leadership: Taking on a threat so others dont have to
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    Arkash: Has grown since the last time I saw him
    Arkash: Was out helping the nameless
    Arkash: Saved as many as he could
    Arkash: Is quite the shot now
Loot: -The rest of Arkash's bullets bar one. +/- Whatever you see.
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word count: 311
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Jan 20, 2021 3:18 pm


Thread Name: The Broken & The Lost
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Descriptions of death, blood, violence. Arkash word count: 4,140 (12 XP) Alex word count: 2,678 (8 XP)
Collaboration: Yes, Alexander & I.
Magic Experience: Possibly for Alexander.
Injuries/Ailments: Flashbacks of the rooftop incident for Alexander.
Requested Lore:

Arkash:
  1. Animal Handling: Offer treats.
  2. Animal Handling: Reward good behavior.
  3. Animal Handling: Escapists.
  4. Animal Handling: Chasing down a fleeing animal.
  5. Animal Handling: Be careful of thieves.
  6. Animal Handling: Investing in a lead might be for the best.
  7. Acting: Smoker's habits.
  8. Acting: Nothing's wrong.
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    [PC] Alexander: A shifty dude.
    [PC] Alexander: Helped clean up bodies.
    [PC] Alexander: Started you smoking.
    [PC] Alexander: Might be wounded?
Alexander:
  1. Running: Is faster if using Transpositioning
  2. Running: Compensate for the Transpositioning’s blink ability cooldown period
  3. Biology: The two vital area of the bodies (Neck & abdomen)
Loot:
Alexander: Two packs of cigarettes, A lighter, Caster shells/bullets (However you see fit)
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word count: 160
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