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Patrick
Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Dec 22, 2019 4:47 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43& ... 800c252a81
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78& ... 800c252a81
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=409
Journal: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=104&t=499
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=500

Tue May 19, 2020 7:48 pm


Thread Name: Enter the Barnell Clan
Location: Alfsos (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: Just an introduction to the characters of Pat's story
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore:
Skill
  • Stealth: Sneaking While Others Remain Asleep
  • Drawing: Using Ink Pens To Sketch
  • Drawing: Brief Strokes Affect The Kind of Lines Drawn
  • Drawing: Sketching At Angles To Draw Circles
  • Drawing: Shading Can Add Perspective To A Sketch
  • Rhetoric: Arguing What "Perfection" Is With Your Sibling
General
N/A

Loot: None
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word count: 81
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Thu May 21, 2020 11:08 am


Thread Name: The Move
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: +5 Black Remedy progression points, for performing a mission briefing for a new major endeavor.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Spycraft: Gathering a timeline of an opponent's moves
Spycraft: Information from anonymous benefactors
Spycraft: Building a tight network of information
Spycraft: Making intelligence judgments on known information
Spycraft: Using the crumbs left by a target
Spycraft: Intelligence Briefings

Loot: N/A
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word count: 77
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Thu May 21, 2020 4:05 pm


Thread Name: We're Here, Melitene
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Transposition, please. Taelian learned about his Lychgate (Quirk motif) and a new ability, Blink.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Blink
Transposition: The Lychgate
Transposition: The Boundaries of the Lychgate
Politics: Clan Geirleif
Politics: The Court of Kamdin
Spycraft: Infiltrating a Court

Loot: N/A
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word count: 62
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Patrick
Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Dec 22, 2019 4:47 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43& ... 800c252a81
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78& ... 800c252a81
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=409
Journal: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=104&t=499
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=500

Thu May 21, 2020 4:49 pm


Thread Name: Life On the Homefront
Location: Alfsos (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: Just a bit of a introspective drawing.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore:
Skill
  • Endurance: Moving On Your Feet All Day
  • Discipline: Taking Breaks When It's Convenient For Everyone
  • Drawing: Using Curves To Draw Shapes
  • Drawing: How to Draw Flame Tips For Fires
  • Drawing: Perspective Is Important For Drawing
  • Drawing: Drawing Parallel Lines For Certain Objects
General
N/A

Loot: None
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word count: 77
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Thu May 21, 2020 5:41 pm


Thread Name: Nodeist Colony
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Transposition, please. Taelian refined and learned new applications for Aetheric Redirection.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Evasive Blink
Transposition: Using Aetheric Redirection to redirect abilities
Transposition: Pre-drafting Nodes to prepare abilities
Transposition: Semblance can detect pre-drafted Nodes
Politics: The Antimagic Bigotries of the Imperium
Politics: The Antimagic Bigotries of Zaichaer

Loot: N/A


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word count: 72
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Fri May 22, 2020 9:11 am


Thread Name: The Breath
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Sigilic Pyromancy, please. Taelian learned a new ability.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Exigency
Sigilic Pyromancy: Learning Exigency through breathing
Sigilic Pyromancy: Exigency is drawn to wounds
Sigilic Pyromancy: Sigilic Pyromancy is best learned through conflict
Tactics: Isolating Dranoch
Tactics: Organizing a Dranoch Hunt

Loot: N/A
word count: 64
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Fri May 22, 2020 10:28 am


Thread Name: Hunters: Part One
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: +5 Black Remedy progression points pleaaase
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Sigilic Pyromancy, please. Taelian learned a new ability.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Cleanse
Sigilic Pyromancy: Cleanse has a conal radius
Sigilic Pyromancy: Cleanse is performed similarly to Trail
Sigilic Pyromancy: Gallow Warrior: Precisely manipulating small weapons simultaneously
Blades: Daggers
Blades: Through the eye

Loot: N/A


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word count: 70
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Etro
Posts: 110
Joined: Sat Jul 20, 2019 8:24 pm
Location: Lyonesse, Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=77
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=346

Fri May 22, 2020 11:09 am


Thread Name: Into the Badlands
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: n/a
Collaboration: (Yes - Caliban)
Magic Experience: (Yes - Kinetics for Constantine & Caliban)
Injuries/Ailments: Few scrapes and cuts
Requested Lore:

Caliban

  • Reaving: Materializing a Pact Weapon
    Reaving: Returning a sword to your hand
    Kinetics: Seeing the Aether around you
    Kinetics: Pushing a human
    Kinetics: Pulling a sword from a hand
    Tactics: Fighting multiple people at once
    Tactics: Sharing a kill
    Blades: Wounding Slashes
    Blades: Bastard sword has good reach
    Meditation: Preparing your mind for battle

Constantine

Kinetics: Using push to soften a fall
Kinetics: Evading deadly blows with Push, Pull, & Lift
Polearms{Halberd}: Striking the enemy's knee with the shaft
Polearms{Halberd}: Repeated thrusts
Polearms{Halberd}: Parrying enemy strikes
Tactics: Working in Tandem with another warrior
Acrobatics: Dodge Rolling
Investigation: Noticing when something isn't right
Investigation: Searching Corpses for Clues
Investigation: Compiling Clues
Loot: Note signed W
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word count: 150
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Fri May 22, 2020 11:24 am


Thread Name: Hunters: Part Two
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: +5 Black Remedy progression points pleaaase. Also, moderate overstepping for Taelian; he will likely take at least two weeks to recover. Internal bleeding, violent nausea, fevers, weakness and hot flashes for the boi.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Sigilic Pyromancy, please. Taelian learned a new ability.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Thrash
Sigilic Pyromancy: Faking out with Infernal
Sigilic Pyromancy: Like Infernal, Thrash has draconian wings
Sigilic Pyromancy: Thrash begins with a flap
Sigilic Pyromancy: Infernal: Explosive Charge
Blades: Dual Wielding

Loot: N/A


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word count: 96
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Patrick
Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Dec 22, 2019 4:47 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43& ... 800c252a81
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78& ... 800c252a81
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=409
Journal: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=104&t=499
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=500

Sat May 23, 2020 8:54 pm


Thread Name: One Too Many
Location: Alfsos (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: Enjoy the drunk talk
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore:
Skill
  • Logistics: Routines Make Tasks Easier
  • Rhetoric: Realizing Your An Adult With Responsibilities
  • Leadership: Knowing When It's Okay To Loosen Up
  • Resistance: Subjecting Yourself To Highly Concentrated Alcohol
  • Discipline: Knowing When You've Had Enough To Drink
  • Leadership: Picking Your Battles Carefully
General
  • Alcohol: "Red Lightning" Is Made In Daravin
  • Alcohol: "Red Lightning" Requires Expertise In Vinting
Loot: None
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word count: 84
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