Elizana's Semblance Quirk

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Elizana Celamyrsa
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Fri Aug 07, 2020 4:28 pm



Semblance Apprentice Quirk













You know that’s a Fake right?

Elizana semblance rune has alter her abilities as it has been affected by her love of archaeology and history. All things have an Aura, sentient beings have the largest with animals and objects have the smallest.

This quirk makes it so that she perceives the aura around objects as if it was twice as large as it would be for a normal Semblance caster. Which makes it easier to detect and read information about object.

On the reverse the aura around animals and bugs seems half the size it normally would. This makes it harder and requires more focus then normal.

An example would be if she walked into a room her semblance would be able to instant sense that there were a number of antiques in the room but wouldn’t be able to sense the litter of puppies sleeping in the corner. Her eyes and other senses might tell her that the dogs are there but unlike the antiques which she would know instantly were old thought not how old but with the puppies to get anything out of semblance she would have sit down and focus on a read of them.

Fellow sentient beings are unaffected in either direction. So her normal perceptions of emotions and such would continue the same as appropriate to her level.
Last edited by Elizana Celamyrsa on Sun Aug 09, 2020 10:33 pm, edited 3 times in total. word count: 257
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Mirage
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Sat Aug 08, 2020 4:22 pm



Hello! I am Mirage, and I will be assisting you with your quirk approval ^.^.

From first inspection what you have here seems more like a peculiar habit than an actual quirk, and the ability to discern something as 'old' or the exact age of it is something that I would expect any Semblance User to be able to do with some patients and practice. That said there is nothing actually wrong with your request, but I thought I would offer my thoughts before giving a blanket approval.

Quirks are meant to be adaptations for a characters particular use of the magic. They develop within the rules and scope of the magic, but can take the abilities and potential and bend them slightly to match a characters style and use of the magic. For instance a Transposition mage giving up the ability to teleport long distance in exchange for the ability to create permanent anchors instead of ones that disappear and have to be reformed.

If you like you can feel free to DM me on Discord and we can work through your quirk some more before approval. Just let me know how you would like to proceed ^.^

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Elizana Celamyrsa
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Joined: Fri Dec 27, 2019 4:36 pm
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=292
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=907

Sun Aug 09, 2020 10:33 pm

Adjusted based on our conversation.
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Mirage
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Mon Aug 10, 2020 2:53 pm


You are approved! This is a really interesting quirk, and I cannot wait to see how it shapes her as a character. She will really need to watch out for herself when dealing with wild animals though.

Here is the link to your secrets thread: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=907

Be sure to link that as well as your CS to your profile. Have fun, and as always happy writing!

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