Review Submission Thread v1.0

[Taelian Edevane]

Thread Name: What He Means
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Persuasion: Raising unconsidered points
Persuasion: Learning to persuade yourself in moments of doubt
Persuasion: Context can dissuade one from poor decision-making
Logistics: Focusing on attainable ambitions

Loot: N/A

[Taelian Edevane]

Thread Name: A Little Help Over Here
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: Thread abandoned; we're just gonna move on.
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: Yes, I would like full Sigilic Pyromancy rewards since what I DID write focused completely on it, lol.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Sigilic Pyromancy: Using Searing for reconnaissance
Sigilic Pyromancy: Infernal
Sigilic Pyromancy: Using Infernal for collision
Acrobatics: Acrobatically dancing on your heels
Blades: Consecutive counter ripostes
Blades: Successive parries

Alyssum
N/A

Loot: N/A

[Reima]

Thread Name: One Step
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: CS is in the process of review, but posting this review request now.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore: This thread is purely story driven, so any lores you can see is fine. Thank you!
Loot: N/A

[Taelian Edevane]

Thread Name: Roots
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: SUUUUUPER boring grinding thread; my worst work yet!
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Sigilic Pyromancy.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Gallow Warrior
Sigilic Pyromancy: Ebon Duelist
Sigilic Pyromancy: Torrent
Sigilic Pyromancy: Stoking Shrivenflame
Summoning: Veravend's Goals Are Unknown
Summoning: A Nir'zjedin

Loot: N/A

[Talon]

Thread Name: Ard Fuil
Location: Skyforge, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: Semblance for Talon.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Taelian
Persuasion: Explaining one's 'side'
Psychology: Coming to terms with an undesirable situation
Negotiation: Understanding another to reach compromise
Blades: Consecutive vertical slashes
Blades: Horizontally holstering a blade
Artifact: Ard Fuil
Artifact: Ard Fuil's properties

Talon
Semblance: Recognizing unhappiness in an aura
Semblance: Recognizing fear in an aura
Semblance: The appearance of fire magic in the aether
Semblance: Aura of Ard Fuil, the Runeblade of Taelian
Persuasion: Arguing against unfairness
Persuasion: Convincing someone to hear your point of view
Persuasion: Pointing out the flaws in another person’s arguments
Politics: Using political tension to garner sympathy
Politics: Articulating the delicateness of regional balance
Business: Exalting one’s wares to the betterment of one’s trade

Taelian: Comes from an impoverished area
Taelian: Fears retaliation for his romance with Riven
Taelian: Has been gifted Ard Fuil
Taelian: Isn’t that bad

Loot: Ard Fuil, the Runeblade to Taelian. Description below.

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Completed Here: Link
Owner: Taelian Ela'Rannoch
Structural Improvements: 23 (Greater)
Magic Improvements: 20 (Moderate)
Aesthetic Improvements: 2 (Minor)
Total: 45th Level Artifact.

A blood red blade with edges that fade into a dark obsidian black extending from a hilt that takes the shape of a dragon's maw. A faceted jewel rest in the pommel of the sword. The jewel is clear but upon close inspection it has red veins threaded throughout its internal structure giving it a fractal appearance. The claymore (name to be determined by Taelian) is immune to rusting and will always retain its lustrous shine. The edge has been reinforced with kinetic magic and compressed down to its sharpest point rendering the blade capable of cutting through steel with extreme ease. The edge of the sword will never dull via mundane wear and tear. The sword cannot be broken or damaged by anything less than a creature or artifact of equal or greater magical power. (Greater and above).

Whenever touched upon by Taelian's magic, the Sylvain runes etched into the blade will glow with a red-golden light. The runes will also glow when the blade's inherent magical ability is activated:

Blood Regeneration (Moderate)- Capable of mending up to 2nd Degree Burns, Deep Flesh Wounds, Sprains, Strains, Bruising etc. but not capable of mending fully ruptured organs or bone fractures and injuries of a more dire nature. The corruptive dependency fostered by blood dragonshards has been mitigated with the purifying properties of both medicinal herbs and illumite dragonshards. However, the sword is incapable of transferring knowledge or experiences to the wielder as would be granted from a normal blood dragonshard. It is limited strictly to regeneration of Minor to Moderate wounds. The ability of the blade to heal is dependent upon how much blood it has been allowed to absorb. The more blood the blade is bathed in, the more regeneration it can bestow upon the wielder. The wielder gains no benefit from this property by shedding their own blood upon the blade. This healing is not instantaneous but happens over the course of either several seconds, minutes, to even hours depending on how extensive the injury is and how much blood the blade has in reserve.

A completely empty reserve shows the gemstone at the pommel of the hilt being a clear crystal with but red veins throughout it. The more blood the blade has in reserve, the more the gemstone turns red and upon close inspection seems to swirl as though filled with blood. Once the gemstone is completely full, it will retain that capacity until expended.

[Talon]

Thread Name: the scars we see
Location: Palace of the First Wind, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: FEELS
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:

Riven
Spycraft: Observing from a higher place
Spycraft: Feigning activity to eavesdrop
Animal Handling: Feeding
Animal Handling: Treats
Psychology: Companion Bond
Psychology: Bond empathy
Persuasion: Pacifying through the Bond
Persuasion: Encouraging through the Bond

Talon
None

Loot: None.

[Etro]

Thread Name: Sleeping Beauty
Location: Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience: ( No )
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:

Caregiving: Allowing one to sleep from a traumatic experience
Socialization: Introductions are key
Socialization: Getting to know a stranger
Etiquette: Asking for someone's name
Logistics: Taking in an account of everyone's skills

Loot: N/A

[Etro]

Thread Name: Take Me To Your Tavern
Location: Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience: (No)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore: N/A
Loot: (If applicable)

[Etro]

Thread Name: Warmth
Location: Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Abandoned
Collaboration: (Yes)
Magic Experience: (yes) maybe?
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore: N/A
Loot: (If applicable)

[Talon]

Thread Name: wayward son
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: Battle! Mayhem! Endangerment!
Collaboration: Yes.
Magic Experience: Yes. Kinetics for Talon. Elementalism for Riven.
Injuries/Ailments: Light overstepping for Riven. Medium overstepping for Talon.
Requested Lore:

Riven

Elementalism: Wind jet propulsion
Elementalism: Fire accumulation
Elementalism: Purifying fire rings
Elementalism: Stonewall (lol)
Elementalism: When to stop
Elementalism: Using surrounding elements
Elementalism: Purifying fire sphere
Elementalism: Water lance
Kalzasi: Monster invasion
Kalzasi: The Archwraith
Kalzasi: The Commons

Talon: I need him alive
Talon: Heroic to a fault
Talon: Companion to the bitter end
Talon: Old feelings, new feelings
Talon: Amazing thinking

Talon

Kinetics: Compressing the Aether Flux to sever a limb
Kinetics: Using Kinetics to assist in flight
Kinetics: Using Kinetics to slow an oncoming assailant's movements
Blades: Backward swing
Blades: Deflecting torso level claw swipes
Blades: Sidestepping and using opponent's momentum to assist in evisceration
Acrobatics: Aerial spin
Acrobatics: Rolling to evade an attack from the rear
Tactics: Using the environment to one's advantage
Leadership: Formulating a battle plan of action using allied strength

Loot: None.