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Kotoru
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Fri Jan 24, 2020 3:27 am


Thread Name: Bloody Ending?
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: Violence, lots of killing
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments:
- Whack over the head with a tray
- Kick to the stomach

Requested Lore:
Blades{Tachi}: One-handed swings
Blades{Tachi}: Cutting down mortal men
Blades{Tachi}: Basic Attack Swing
Blades{Tachi}: Leaning/ducking to avoid attacks
Blades{Tachi}: Slicing with a long sword
Blades{Tachi}: Trusting when unable to slash

Loot: Kalzasian Longsword {Tachi} {1,500 DF}
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☵ Sometimes it's not the people that change, its just their mask that falls off ☵
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
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Tue Jan 28, 2020 7:40 am


Thread Name: The Rift: III
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Transposition.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Stream
Transposition: Anchor
Transposition: Creating A Portal
Politics: Mage-Advisers
Politics: Kings are the arbiters of their world
Politics: Mages are the equalizers of tyranny

Loot: N/A
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Taelian Edevane
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Tue Jan 28, 2020 3:21 pm


Thread Name: The Tumble
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: I kind of abandoned this, but Juli too; she's been too busy to focus on Ransera so I figured there was no point posting. Since the rules allow you to occasionally dip below 1500 words, please gimme rewards!
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: Yes, a slight amount for Sigilic Pyromancy. (maybe 3?)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Maintaining the form of a flame
Sigilic Pyromancy: Attaching a fire to a rigid surface
Blades: Dancing around something with circular movements
Blades: Strafing
Blades: Mobile Stance
Blades: Keeping Traction
Acrobatics: Backstepping
Acrobatics: Stance is important

Loot: N/A
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word count: 107
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Taelian Edevane
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Wed Jan 29, 2020 5:50 pm


Thread Name: The Rift: IV
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Transposition.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Time
Transposition: Distance
Transposition: Window
Transposition: The Elder
Transposition: Be Persistent
Transposition: Portals vary in what can pass through

Loot: N/A
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Taelian Edevane
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Wed Jan 29, 2020 9:32 pm


Thread Name: The Rift: V
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Transposition.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Practice and Persistence
Transposition: Properly Bending Space
Transposition: Forming Structurally Sound Portals
Investigation: Determining hesitation
Investigation: Discovering one's moral integrity
Investigation: Seeking intentions

Loot: N/A
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word count: 52
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Kotoru
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Thu Jan 30, 2020 5:12 am


Thread Name: Curiosity Intrigued the Snake
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: (No)
Magic Experience: (No)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Socialization: Always look someone in the eyes
Socialization: Its all about the First Impression
Socialization: Giving a rather honest opinion
Socialization: Meeting new people, especially mages
Socialization: Answering questions
Socialization: The art of small talk with strangers
Loot: N/A
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word count: 63
☵ Sometimes it's not the people that change, its just their mask that falls off ☵
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Kotoru
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Fri Jan 31, 2020 3:54 am


Thread Name: What I Seek
Location: Hattori Estate
Notes/Warnings: A little on the short side, but won't happen anytime soon
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: Nope
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore: None
Loot: None
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☵ Sometimes it's not the people that change, its just their mask that falls off ☵
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Taelian Edevane
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Sat Feb 01, 2020 3:23 pm


Thread Name: The Unnamed Custom
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Investigation: A Mock Case
Investigation: Piecing a story together
Investigation: Paying attention to spoken detail
Politics: The dynamics of a noble House
Politics: Counts
Politics: Jingoism

Daravain: North Daravin
Daravin: Genteven
Daravin: Rathrouen
Daravin: The War With Lorien

Loot: N/A
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Sat Feb 01, 2020 3:29 pm


Thread Name: The Unnamed Custom: II
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Politics: The politics of modesty
Politics: Lobbying
Politics: 'Chosen Heirs'
Politics: Nationalism
Politics: Traditions Grow Old
Politics: Always keep context in mind

Daravin: The culling of House de Blanciet
Eloise: Once 'Anna Clara de Blanciet', of the Entente
Eloise: Her family's fate led her to form the Covenant

Loot: N/A
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Sat Feb 01, 2020 3:33 pm


Thread Name: The Unnamed Custom: III
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Transposition
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Substance
Transposition: All portals are determined somewhat by substance
Transposition: Aetheric Redirection
Transposition: The Warden
Investigation: Sometimes the truth is a meld of two lies
Deception: A truly skilled liar has no hesitation

Eloise: Born the bastard daughter of Louen de Blanciet
Eloise: Legitimized as a member of the Entente
Eloise: Took on a new identity after her family died

Loot: N/A
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