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Moop
Posts: 117
Joined: Sat Nov 07, 2020 8:21 pm
Location: Headed from Dagrun to you~
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1131
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1405
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1173

Thu Nov 26, 2020 3:07 pm


Thread Name: Cobweb Respite II https://atharen.com/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=1198
Location: Southern Marches of Daravin
Notes/Warnings: nah
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, even partial is good for me!
Injuries/Ailments: She is homesick!
Requested Lore: Mentalism; Weave; Manipulating the physical
Mentalism; Weave; Can be physically seen as a purple crystal glitch
Mentalism; Compel; using your hands to direct the current of The Weave
Mentalism; Impel; Throwing a weasel through the air
Staff; Using the butt as a weapon
Staff; Over head swing to hit a spider
Loot: No
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word count: 93
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Thu Nov 26, 2020 3:12 pm


Thread Name: Nearest The Abyss: Erstwhile Ermine
Location: Daravin Wilderness
Notes/Warnings: Harsh Language, Animal Fighting
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Animus
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: Ermine Template
  • Animus: Ermine Immersion
  • Animus: Integrating Fur Color
  • Animus: Integrating Fur Texture
  • Animus: Integrating a Limb
  • Animus: Reverting Integration Changes
Loot: Ermine Template
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word count: 52
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Thu Nov 26, 2020 6:38 pm


Thread Name: Nearest The Abyss: Heathen Wings
Location: Daravin Wilderness, Northern Marches
Notes/Warnings: Harsh Language
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Animus
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: Integrating - Raven Feathers
  • Animus: Integrating - The Structure of Raven Quills
  • Animus: Integrating - Flight Feathers Versus Soaring Feathers
  • Animus: Integrating - Coloring Black Feathers White Using Fur Color
  • Animus: Synchrony - Raven Wings
  • Animus: Synchrony - Learning Synchrony Through Form Familiarity
Loot:
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word count: 66
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Thu Nov 26, 2020 9:38 pm


Thread Name: Nearest The Abyss: White Lion
Location: Daravin Wilderness, Northern Marches
Notes/Warnings: Harsh Language
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Animus
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: Integrating - Full Body Integration
  • Animus: Integrating - Turning Your Whole Hide White
  • Animus: Integrating - Feeling Your Template
  • Animus: Integrating - Full Body Is More Taxing
  • Intimidation: Insults Weaker Without Substance
  • Acrobatics: Hopping Over A Puddle
Loot:
Image
word count: 62
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Fri Nov 27, 2020 1:10 pm


Thread Name: Nearest The Abyss: Total Evolution
Location: Daravin Wilderness, Northern Marches
Notes/Warnings: Body Horror, Mild Nudity, Harsh Language
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Animus
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
  • Animus: Integrating - Vocal Chords
  • Animus: Mold
  • Animus: Mold - Ermine
  • Animus: Mold - Raven
  • Animus: Synchrony - Ermine Mold
  • Animus: Synchrony - Raven Mold
Loot: Loss of every material possession. +1 Enkindled Butter Knife
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word count: 61
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Fri Nov 27, 2020 5:52 pm


Thread Name: Caustic Candor
Location: Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Violence
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: Yes, Sigilic Pyromancy for Alphonse
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:

Alphonse
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Trail
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Trail - Using It To Cover Your Exit
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Enkindling - Melting Through A Door W/ Enkindled Weapon
  • Unarmed Combat: Kicking a Door Off Its Hinges
  • Summoning: Caru - Using a Caru to Burn Multiple Foes
  • Summoning: Caru - Caru very effective and scary versus Botchlings
  • Tactics: Retreating
  • Tactics: Retreating - Running Away To Form A Plan
Nathan
  • Deception: Hiding your true intention with excuses
  • Deception: Hiding the true nature of your companion
  • Deception: Making a quick excuse to get out of a shady situation
  • Negotiation: Some people favored straight forwardness
  • Gunslinging: Shoulder shot to a Dranoch won't disarm them
  • Tactics: Using firebomb to delay the enemy
  • Tactics: Using firecart to block the enemy's route
  • Gunslinging: A shot to the head could immobilize a Dranoch
Loot:
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word count: 153
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Sat Nov 28, 2020 4:05 am


Thread Name: You Poor Unfortunate Soul
Location: Essen, Brandt
Notes/Warnings: Torture & Violence / Job Thread
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: Nope
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore:
  • Torture: Breaking fingers
    Torture: Cutting tendons in the hand
    Torture: Inflicting pain to make a point
    Intimidation: It's not a threat, but a promise
    Biology: The amount of pressure needed to breaking finger bones
    Medicine: Finding and severing tendons in the hands
Loot: +2500df
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word count: 70
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Alexander Cross
Posts: 86
Joined: Wed Nov 11, 2020 6:42 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1155&p=5205#p5205
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1201

Sun Nov 29, 2020 12:53 am


Thread Name: The First Name on the List
Location: Lower Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Violence / Job thread
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: (If applicable)
Requested Lore:
  • Deception: Showing that you trust someone even when you don't
  • Deception: (Misdirection) A quick sleight of hand
  • Tactics: Planning is a crucial part of a successful mission
  • Deception: Using a seemingly innocent question to make the enemy lower their guards
  • Deception: Putting on an act
  • Deception: Planting evidence to falsely accused another party
Loot: N/A
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word count: 87
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Sun Nov 29, 2020 4:21 am


Thread Name: Who Let that Raven In?
Location: Essen, Brandt
Notes/Warnings: Murder, murder, and more murder!
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: (Yes - Mentalism)
Injuries/Ailments: Some light bruises
Requested Lore:
  • Mentalism: Manipulating physical space with a weave
    Mentalism: Compelling & Impelling a person
    Mentalism: Moving objects from one side of the room to the other
    Intimidation: Raising your voice to command attention
    Intimidation: Using an infant as a hostage
    Investigation: Gaining details about the seller
Loot: n/a
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word count: 78
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Alexander Cross
Posts: 86
Joined: Wed Nov 11, 2020 6:42 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1155&p=5205#p5205
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1201

Sun Nov 29, 2020 8:58 pm


Thread Name: The Long Game
Location: Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Job thread
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore: N/A
Loot: N/A
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word count: 30
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