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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Nov 14, 2020 3:10 am


Thread Name: Reward
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Blood, descriptions of wounds. Blood magic acquisition was approved here.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: The Initiation involves surviving several slashes.
Unarmed Combat: Fighting Telekinesis.
Climbing: Through the cold.
Survival: Don't climb mountains alone, especially not near frost.
Survival: Being alone in the wilderness is generally a bad idea.
Survival: Independence isn't plausible with your cold blood.

Loot: +1 Rune of Blood Magic on the surface of his skull, beneath his scalp.
word count: 91
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Sat Nov 14, 2020 3:42 am


Thread Name: Welcome to the Family
Location: Essen, Brandt
Notes/Warnings: The start of a plotline for Cyrus
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
  • Investigation: Asking the importance of something
    Investigation: Canvasing a crowded room of people
    Investigation: Knowing when something seems off
    Ettiquette: Being poised in front of important people
Loot: +1 Forced Membership to Die Schitter
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Last edited by Haldir on Sun Nov 15, 2020 6:14 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 62
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Nov 14, 2020 6:58 am


Thread Name: Bleed
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Blood, descriptions of wounds, self-harm, abuse, fear, the usual.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic. (Discovered a new ability, active training)
Injuries/Ailments: Weakness and high blood pressure for a few days while he recovers from bloodloss.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping with the use of your ether.
Blood Magic: Requires blood.
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping a weird-shaped ball.
Torture: Crushing.
Torture: Stomping limbs and twisting.
Torture: Beating into submission.

Loot: None.
word count: 81
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Nov 15, 2020 5:29 am


Thread Name: Potential
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Another boring 'Arkash's life sucks' thread.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic. (Active training, exploration of an ability.)
Injuries/Ailments: Slight improvement to his weakness thanks to the bread and water he consumed.
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping: Reshaping shaped blood.
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping: You can make virtually anything with it.
Appraisal: Differentiating lookalikes with identifying features.
Appraisal: Determining the straightness of one's nose.
Appraisal: Examining a new material's weight.
Appraisal: Examining the touch properties of new materials.

Loot: None.
word count: 91
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Sun Nov 15, 2020 6:12 pm


Thread Name: Along Came a Doctor
Location: Essen, Brandt
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: (No)
Injuries/Ailments:N/A
Requested Lore:
  • Stealth: Crouching helps to stay out of the line of sight
    Stealth: Shadows are important allies
    Acting: Playing a role to avert suspicion
    Deception: No one ever suspects the Drunk
    Investigation: Eavesdropping is the best way to learn the juicy bits
    Investigation: Looking into strange behavior
Loot: (If applicable)
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word count: 72
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Mon Nov 16, 2020 1:41 pm


Thread Name: To Roam Unseen
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Magic XP for Sigilic Pyromancy for Cyrus, please. He was initiated.
Collaboration: Collab; Taelian, 6767 words (16 XP), Cyrus, 5539 words (12 XP)
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Cyrus
Sigilic Pyromancy: The Initiation
Sigilic Pyromancy: Bonding the Beacon you one's own soul
Sigilic Pyromancy: The Beacon feels alive
Sigilic Pyromancy: Is a gift, a boon from Malek himself
Investigation: Asking personal questions
Investigation: Be invasive but respectful
Etiquette: Getting to know someone over a drink
Seduction: The Allure of the nude form
Seduction: Staring at another's assets
Seduction: A mutual attraction
Seduction: Modesty is for the weak
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Taelian: Is an elf
Taelian: Is rather handsome
Taelian: Stehpan is his Lorian Alias
Taelian: Has a similar background as I do
Taelian: Has mastered Sigilic Pyromancy
Taelian: Is Famished

Taelian
Leadership: Getting to know your comrades
Leadership: Initiating others into your group
Leadership: Taking someone under your wing
Leadership: Establishing a headquarters
Leadership: The Chain of Command
Leadership: Sharing vows and oaths
Leadership: Helping others to understand your creed
Leadership: Warning your comrades of risks
Leadership: Professionalism
Leadership: Keeping an informal relationship with your charge
Tactics: Fortresses
Tactics: Setting up a fortified base
Tactics: Communicating with your superiors

Loot: N/A
Last edited by Taelian Edevane on Tue Nov 17, 2020 8:44 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 215
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Nov 16, 2020 6:52 pm


Thread Name: Spill
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Blood, descriptions of wounds, death, gore.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic (Training, learning new things about an ability)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Bloodhsaping: You can use other people's blood.
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping: You can forge weapons with this ability.
Appraisal: Determining life signs.
Appraisal: The sound of approaching footsteps.
Appraisal: The severity of wounds.
Appraisal: Someone's background based on what they're wearing.

Loot: +1 Blood javeline.
word count: 82
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Tue Nov 17, 2020 12:35 am


Thread Name: A Study of Necromancy Ⅰ
Location: Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: (Yes - Necromancy)
Injuries/Ailments:
Requested Lore:
  • Necromancy: Using Embalming Tongs
    Necromancy: Making Sinew Foam
    Necromancy: Shaving the excess with Carving Sickles
    Necromancy: Applying Sinew Foam to wounds
    Necromancy: The Process of Applying Necromancy to Medicine
    Medicine: Mending wounds with necromancy
Loot: N/A
word count: 58
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Nov 18, 2020 2:45 am


Thread Name: The hand that feeds you
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Blood, descriptions of wounds, violence, bad language.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Yes, Blood Magic. (Active training, exploration of an ability.)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping: Thinner shapes are harder to maintain due to
Blood Magic: Bloodshaping: Takes a lot of focus and leaves you tired.
Polearms: Pike: Hold with both hands.
Polearms: Pike: Stab the side.
Polearms: Pike: Offers extra reach.
Polearms: Pike: Ambush from behind.

Loot: None.
word count: 83
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Wed Nov 18, 2020 5:34 am


Thread Name: How to Build a Warrior Ⅰ
Location: Essen, Brandt
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Sore, aching body
Requested Lore:
  • Blades {Greatsword}: Greaswords have massive reach
    Blades {Greatsword}: Heavier than I anticipated
    Blades {Greatsword}: Practice builds familiarity
    Bodybuilding: Tensing your muscles during exercise is a good method of isolating muscles for working out
    Bodybuilding: Repetition of movement to build muscles
    Bodybuilding: Holding your arms above your head and working for a length of time builds muscles
Loot: +1 Gifted Greatsword
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Last edited by Haldir on Mon Nov 23, 2020 1:51 am, edited 2 times in total. word count: 86
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