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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Sat Oct 31, 2020 11:18 am


Thread Name: Evil in Human Clothing Ⅲ
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab; Taelian, 3013 words (8 XP), Cyrus, 4662 (12 XP)
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Cyrus
Etiquette: Introductions are key
Investigation: Asking questions pertaining to the subject matter
Investigation: Inspecting a corpse
Spycraft: Passing notes
Medicine: Assisting with an autopsy

Taelian: Is an Argent Knight
Taelian: Is not all he appears to be
Taelian: Knows about the Dranoch
Taelian: Knows how to Kill them
Taelian: Is from the Pact-Covenant

Taelian
Investigation: Using your credentials to gather information
Investigation: Following a lead
Investigation: Speaking to witnesses
Investigation: Questioning the main witness
Investigation: Privately questioning someone
Investigation: Taking over an investigation
Investigation: Demanding further information
Spycraft: Not letting others know you can understand them

Loot: N/A
word count: 134
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Sat Oct 31, 2020 12:16 pm


Thread Name: Whole
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab; Taelian, 4145 words (12 XP), Arkash, 6980 (16 XP)
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Arkash
Appraisal: Identifying someone based on their smell.
Deception: Destroy the evidence.
Etiquette: Come clean.
Etiquette: Accepting meals even if you don't want to.
Investigation: Determining someone's real species.
Investigation: You can find someone's scent in a place that they frequent.
Investigation: Clues aren't always visual.
Hunting: By scent.
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[PC] Taelian: Cashed in a favor to get you your arm and eye back, and removed all your scars without your knowing.
[PC] Taelian: Doesn't seem to mind too much that you're a criminal.
[PC] Taelian: Altruistic af.
[PC] Taelian: Actually an elf.

Taelian
Leadership: Inspiring others to do good
Leadership: Changing your peers' lives
Leadership: Offering opportunities, alternatives
Leadership: Relating with others
Leadership: Redeeming someone
Leadership: Gaining trust and loyalty
Etiquette: Making your guests more 'proper'
Etiquette: Offering your guests kindness
Necromancy: Reconstruction
Necromancy: Sinew Cloth

Loot: N/A
word count: 175
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Nathan Wolfgang
Posts: 22
Joined: Sun Oct 18, 2020 7:55 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1069&p=4688#p4688
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1081

Sun Nov 01, 2020 7:43 am


Thread Name: Tales from Verden: The Black Apple, Part I
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
  • Gunslinging: Could be used in melee situation
  • Gunslinging: Good for shock and awe tactics
Loot: Lost 500 df, gained four pounds of coffee
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Nuraku
Posts: 139
Joined: Mon Jul 27, 2020 10:13 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=842
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1083

Thu Nov 05, 2020 3:48 am


Thread Name: Every Day, Day to Day
Location: Lower Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: Yes, Sigilic Pyromancy
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Letting Go Of Enkindled Weapon Severs Pyromancy
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Shrivenflame Doesn't Spread
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Shrivenflame Doesn't Use Fuel to Burn
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Failing to Use Flame Lance Effectively
  • Sigilic Pyromancy: Melting Through Rubble With An Enkindled Weapon
  • Blades (Flamberge): Vertical Arcing Slash
Loot: N/A
word count: 78
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Sun Nov 08, 2020 5:41 pm


Thread Name: The End Of An Era
Location: Brandt, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: A part of Taelian's plot to become a Celebrant
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Taelian
Negotiation: The Terms of Marriage
Negotiation: Risk vs Benefit

Loot: N/A
word count: 45
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Tue Nov 10, 2020 10:37 pm


Thread Name: Cleaning up the Vermin
Location: Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings:
Cyrus - 12xp - 4036
Arkash - 16xp - 6,238
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: (Yes - Cyrus/Mentalism)
Injuries/Ailments:Bruises and scrapes for both
Requested Lore:

Arkash

Gunslinging: Rifle: High recoil.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Can knock you off your feet if you're not prepared.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Take aim.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Pull the trigger to fire.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Loading from the barrel.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Shoot at a group of enemies to knock them down with the blast.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Hold the stock in your armpit.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Using your hook extension to balance the weapon.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Requires two hands to operate.
Gunslinging: Rifle: More accurate than the pistol.
Unarmed Combat: Tackle.
Unarmed Combat: Blocking with your prosthetic.
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[PC] Cyrus: Can lift people with magic.
[PC] Cyrus: Lifted you with magic.
[PC] Cyrus: Has a human friend.
[PC] Cyrus: Helped you kill a mob boss.
[PC] Cyrus: Dresses up as a bird to be creepy.
[PC] Cyrus: Called you 'Venom.'
[PC] Cyrus: Experiments with poisons.

Cyrus

Blades{Rapier}: Can deliver quick yet strong attacks
Blades{Rapier}: Slicing across the throat
Mentalism: Using Compell to throw weapons at people
Mentalism: Building the Weave
Mentalism: Forming a weave takes focus
Mentalism: Compelling up the side of a building
Research: Experimenting with live subjects
Poisons: Black Moon Lily is highly toxic
Gunslinging: The Importance of aiming
Gunslinging: As easy as pulling the trigger
Gunslinging: Caster shells have quite the impact
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Arkash: Is a stealthy little guy
Arkash: Has a new prosthetic arm
Arkash: Is taking on jobs by himself now
Arkash: Has shown considerable growth
Arkash: Instincts sometimes guide his actions
Arkash: Has a knack for killing
Arkash: Seems to be growing on me
Loot:
Cyrus - Stolen Pistol
Arkash - 4 Caster Shells
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word count: 295
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Nathan Wolfgang
Posts: 22
Joined: Sun Oct 18, 2020 7:55 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1069&p=4688#p4688
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Wed Nov 11, 2020 8:47 am


Thread Name: The Night it All Began
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore: N/A
Loot: N/A
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Alyssum Crow
Posts: 94
Joined: Sat Jul 20, 2019 10:18 pm

Wed Nov 11, 2020 7:17 pm


Thread Name: Brewed On Demand
Location: Tyrclaid
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes (Alchemy)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:

Alchemy: Medicine Made With Alchemy Often Has Stronger Effects
Alchemy: Fresh Ingredients Aren't Always Better
Alchemy: Personally Gathering Ingredients Is Usually Better
Alchemy: Ingredient: Chamomile
Alchemy: Chamomile: Useful For Sleeping Potions
Alchemy: Chamomile: Needs To Be Purified For Full Effects

Loot: N/A
word count: 67
Alyssum Crow
Posts: 94
Joined: Sat Jul 20, 2019 10:18 pm

Thu Nov 12, 2020 8:38 am


Thread Name: Sleepy Time Potion
Location: Tyrclaid
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes (Alchemy)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:

Alchemy: Purification Process: Chamomile
Alchemy: Recipe: Sleeping Potion
Alchemy: Ingredient: Lavender
Alchemy: Lavender: Calming Effect
Alchemy: Lavender: Works Best Dried Or As An Extract
Alchemy: Lavender and Chamomile Work Very Well Together

Loot: N/A
word count: 58
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Fri Nov 13, 2020 3:03 pm


Thread Name: Avenged
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab; Taelian, 4138 words (12 XP), Arkash, 6424 (16 XP)
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Arkash
Gunslinging: Rifle: Shooting downward.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Position is key.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Pull the trigger slowly for better accuracy.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Exhale slowly while you pull the trigger for greater stability.
Gunslinging: Rifle: As a rule of thumb, the more stable you are, the better your accuracy.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Shooting prone reduces recoil.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Shooting prone reduces you as a target.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Headshot.
Gunslinging: Rifle: Bodyshot.
Gunslinging: Rifle: The size of your round determines the lethality.
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[PC] Taelian: An assassin.
[PC] Taelian: You told him everything and he didn't mind.
[PC] Taelian: Stole your kill.
[PC] Taelian: God-King-Mage.
[PC] Taelian: Everything you want to be.
[PC] Taelian: Made you feel weird.
[PC] Taelian: Made you angry.
[PC] Taelian: Promised to meet on the 86th of Ash so long as he doesn't die.
[PC] Taelian: You might never see him again.

Taelian
Leadership: Defending your allies
Acrobatics: Strafing
Tactics: Scoping out a target
Tactics: Striking from a higher position
Tactics: Limiting an enemy's field of movement
Tactics: Funneling enemies into an area
Tactics: Striking hard, before reinforcements can come
Tactics: Carefully positioning within your surroundings

Loot: Arkash: Lost all belongings (again) bar the weapons he carries and his clothes. Gained a tier 3 Rifle and four caster shells.
word count: 244
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