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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Oct 10, 2020 5:54 pm


Thread Name: Phobia
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: This is the eighth part of Arkash's blood magic plot. Includes fear.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: Landing on your feet after being thrown.
Negotiation: Doing a favor to earn favor.
Negotiation: Declining a task.
Negotiation: Begging.
Negotiation: Dealing with a gang.
Psychology: Knowing its the last helps you push through.

Loot: +4000 df
word count: 68
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Sun Oct 11, 2020 2:25 pm


Thread Name: Sacrifice Ⅱ
Location: Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: I apologize if it seems rushed or a lot going on
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
  • Medicine: Ensuring treatments have no complications
    Medicine: Check ups
    Persuasion: Trying to dissuade violence
    Blades{Rapier}: Slicing off someone's hand
    Intimidation: Taking a limb as a show of strength
    Leadership: Keeping your subordinates focused
Loot: (If applicable)
Last edited by Haldir on Mon Oct 12, 2020 11:59 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 69
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Oct 12, 2020 4:49 pm


Thread Name: Demons
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Includes fear, swearing.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
None.

Loot: None.
word count: 23
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Oct 12, 2020 5:03 pm


Thread Name: Second Blood I
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Fantasy violence, blood. This is the ninth part of Arkash's blood magic plot.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Blades: Dagger: Stab from above.
Blades: Dagger: More power can pierce armor.
Blades: Dagger: Stabbing with a mounted dagger.
Climbing: To the roof of a building.
Climbing: Running start.
Climbing: Leaping start.

Loot: None.
word count: 67
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Oct 12, 2020 5:12 pm


Thread Name: Second Blood II
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Fantasy violence, blood. This is the tenth part of Arkash's blood magic plot.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Blades: Dagger: Pierce the skull with the aid of gravity.
Blades: Dagger: Striking the back of the head.
Blades: Dagger: Execution.
Blades: Dagger: Parrying.
Blades: Dagger: Dual wielding daggers is harder than you'd think.
Blades: Dagger: Abandoning the blade to evade a strike is sometimes the better option.

Loot: None.
word count: 84
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Haldir
Posts: 230
Joined: Sun Jul 05, 2020 12:52 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=774
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=778
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=823

Tue Oct 13, 2020 11:55 pm


Thread Name: Sacrifice Ⅲ
Location: Lower Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Torture and Murder
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
  • Torture: Inflicting pain through cuts
    Medicine: Bloodletting
    Blades{Rapier}: Fighting stance
    Blades{Rapier}: Graceful Slicing
    Blades{Rapier}: Stabbing through Flesh
    Blades{Rapier}: Is a light and well rounded blade
Loot: N/A
word count: 55
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Wed Oct 14, 2020 7:29 pm


Thread Name: A Mountain's Bones
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: The thread was finished, but I didn't get Riven's lores; he'll probably want to submit separately.
Collaboration: Yes, 8 XP
Magic Experience: Elementalism XP, please. Taelian was initiated here.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Elementalism: The Rune of Elementalism
Elementalism: The Initiation
Elementalism: Extreme Initiation Drawbacks
Elementalism: Severe Overstepping Penalties
Elementalism: The Four Elements

Loot: +1 Rune of Elementalism
word count: 74
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Wed Oct 14, 2020 8:16 pm


Thread Name: The Crawl
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Thread abandoned, so I finished it.
Collaboration: Yes, 20 XP. Word Count: 6075
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Transposition: A Warden's Folly
Necromancy: Sculpting A Face
Politics: Lorien's Argent
Politics: Velsign In Lorien

Taelian did nothing else remotely useful. lol.

Loot: N/A
Last edited by Taelian Edevane on Wed Oct 14, 2020 8:27 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 59
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Wed Oct 14, 2020 8:22 pm


Thread Name: Facing The Sun
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Thread abandoned.
Collaboration: Yes, 8 XP.
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
N/A

Loot: N/A
Last edited by Taelian Edevane on Wed Oct 14, 2020 8:25 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 31
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Wed Oct 14, 2020 8:25 pm


Thread Name: Precious Goods
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Thread abandoned.
Collaboration: Yes, 8 XP.
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
N/A

Loot: N/A
word count: 30
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