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Talon
Posts: 132
Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2019 8:54 pm
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=127
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=151

Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:02 am


Thread Name: a blade from the heart X
Location: Skyforge, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes. Runeforging.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Runeforging: The Function of Sorcerer's Glass
Runeforging: Sorcerer's Glass comes in many varieties to cause many reactions
Runeforging: Monitoring the runeforge for stability
Runeforging: Viscerite allowed to crystallize can't be changed
Runeforging: Runesmithing molds allow viscerite to crystallize in predetermined shapes
Runeforging: Activating a runeforge
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Talon
Posts: 132
Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2019 8:54 pm
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=127
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=151

Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:06 am


Thread Name: a blade from the heart XI
Location: Skyforge, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes. Runeforging.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Runeforging: Anvil Enhancing Glyph
Runeforging: Using pictography to stabilize viscerite
Runeforging: Viscerite contains the properties of all reagents used
Runeforging: A sculptor's knife is used to detailing aesthetics
Runeforging: Identifying aesthetic aether pathways
Runeforging: Building stable aesthetic aether pathways
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Talon
Posts: 132
Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2019 8:54 pm
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=127
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=151

Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:10 am


Thread Name: a blade from the heart XII
Location: Skyforge, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes. Runeforging.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Runeforging: Aura glass goggles allow for more versatile viewing of artifacts
Runeforging: Identifying structural aether pathways
Runeforging: Folding structural aether pathways
Runeforging: Folding aether upon itself becomes harder over time
Runeforging: Reinforcing structural aether pathways
Runeforging: Adjusting balance and weight pathways
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Talon
Posts: 132
Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2019 8:54 pm
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=127
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=151

Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:16 am


Thread Name: a blade from the heart XIII
Location: Skyforge, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes. Runeforging.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Runeforging: Filing tool is used to sharpen edges down to fine points
Runeforging: Smoothing stone is used to iron out wrinkled aether
Runeforging: Identifying magic aether pathways
Runeforging: Reinforcing structural integrity with kinetic binding
Runeforging: Using kinetics binding to compress a blade to its sharpest edge
Semblance: Identifying gaps in aethereal integrity
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:37 am


Thread Name: Eyes Into Melitene
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Magic: Personal Magic
Magic: World Magic
Magic: Aether
Magic: The Aetherium
Magic: A mage's greatest foe is his pride
Magic: Talented mages are always the most dangerous
Self: As I am now, I am vulnerable to hurt those that I love

Loot: N/A
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Talon
Posts: 132
Joined: Wed Jul 24, 2019 8:54 pm
Location: Daravin
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Mon Jan 13, 2020 7:39 am


Thread Name: a blade from the heart XIV
Location: Skyforge, Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: No.
Magic Experience: Yes. Runeforging.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:

Runeforging: Creating a webbing of aether pathways to reinforce stability
Runeforging: Properties buried deeply within viscerite become harder to manipulate
Runeforging: Linking multiple beneficial properties together to nullify negative ones
Runeforging: Structuring blood dragon properties to only activate under specific stimuli
Runeforging: Building a trigger for glowing aesthetic effects
Runeforging: The charge basin is used to help solidify the aether of the artifact

Savien: My Father
Savien: Relieved me of my duties as Heir
Savien: Encouraged me to find my own identity
Savien: Worries that I am unhappy
Loot:

+1 Enchanted Claymore with the following properties:

Structural Improvements: 23 (Greater)
Magic Improvements: 20 (Moderate)
Aesthetic Improvements: 2 (Minor)
Total: 45th Level Artifact.

A blood red blade with edges that fade into a dark obsidian black extending from a hilt that takes the shape of a dragon's maw. A faceted jewel rest in the pommel of the sword. The jewel is clear but upon close inspection it has red veins threaded throughout its internal structure giving it a fractal appearance. The claymore (name to be determined by Taelian) is immune to rusting and will always retain its lustrous shine. The edge has been reinforced with kinetic magic and compressed down to its sharpest point rendering the blade capable of cutting through steel with extreme ease. The edge of the sword will never dull via mundane wear and tear. The sword cannot be broken or damaged by anything less than a creature or artifact of equal or greater magical power. (Greater and above).

Whenever touched upon by Taelian's magic, the Sylvain runes etched into the blade will glow with a red-golden light. The runes will also glow when the blade's inherent magical ability is activated:

Blood Regeneration (Moderate)- Capable of mending up to 2nd Degree Burns, Deep Flesh Wounds, Sprains, Strains, Bruising etc. but not capable of mending fully ruptured organs or bone fractures and injuries of a more dire nature. The corruptive dependency fostered by blood dragonshards has been mitigated with the purifying properties of both medicinal herbs and illumite dragonshards. However, the sword is incapable of transferring knowledge or experiences to the wielder as would be granted from a normal blood dragonshard. It is limited strictly to regeneration of Minor to Moderate wounds. The ability of the blade to heal is dependent upon how much blood it has been allowed to absorb. The more blood the blade is bathed in, the more regeneration it can bestow upon the wielder. The wielder gains no benefit from this property by shedding their own blood upon the blade. This healing is not instantaneous but happens over the course of either several seconds, minutes, to even hours depending on how extensive the injury is and how much blood the blade has in reserve.

A completely empty reserve shows the gemstone at the pommel of the hilt being a clear crystal with but red veins throughout it. The more blood the blade has in reserve, the more the gemstone turns red and upon close inspection seems to swirl as though filled with blood. Once the gemstone is completely full, it will retain that capacity until expended.
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Taelian Edevane
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Mon Jan 13, 2020 2:50 pm


Thread Name: The Rift: I
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Transposition.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: The Rune of Transposition
Transposition: The Initiation
Transposition: Threshold Sickness
Transposition: 'Portal Magic'
Transposition: Initiation Drawbacks
Survival: Rapidly adjusting to new climates

Loot: N/A
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Etro
Posts: 110
Joined: Sat Jul 20, 2019 8:24 pm
Location: Lyonesse, Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=77
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=346

Sat Jan 18, 2020 3:22 am


Thread Name: My Life for a Halberd Ⅰ
Location: Outskirts, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Hallucinations
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: (No)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Polearms{Halberd}: Striking with a Halberd
Polearms{Halberd}: Is versatile in the right hands
Polearms{Halberd}: Building technique through practice
Polearms{Halberd}: A two-handed stance
Polearms{Halberd}: A one-handed stance
Polearms{Halberd}: Has ample reach

Loot: N/A
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Etro
Posts: 110
Joined: Sat Jul 20, 2019 8:24 pm
Location: Lyonesse, Daravin
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=77
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=346

Sun Jan 19, 2020 7:22 am


Thread Name: My Life for a Halberd Ⅱ
Location: The Nothern Wastes, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: (Yes - Kinetics)
Injuries/Ailments: Slashes, and cuts
Requested Lore:
Investigation: seeing where the call for help came from
Kinetics: Using Lift to lift enemies into the air
Kinetics: Using Push to force enemies back
Polearms{Halberd}: Good at impaling enemies
Polearms{Halberd}: Can split skulls easily
Polearms{Halberd}: Can be used against multiple opponents

Loot: N/A
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Thu Jan 23, 2020 7:27 pm


Thread Name: The Rift: II
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Transposition.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Transposition: Initiation Recovery
Transposition: Foundations
Transposition: Theory
Transposition: The Aether Flux
Transposition: Portals
Transposition: Nodes

Loot: N/A
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