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Bellmari
Posts: 36
Joined: Fri Jul 31, 2020 2:49 pm
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?p=3662#p3662

Tue Aug 11, 2020 5:36 pm


Thread Name: Stretch and Bend 6
Location: Raellon, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: Walking on your hands
Acrobatics: Backflip off a ledge
Acrobatics: Backflip off a wall
Acrobatics: Don't get overeager
Acrobatics: Dont get overconfident
Acrobatics: Don't be afraid to try again

Loot: N/A
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word count: 59
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Tue Aug 11, 2020 10:56 pm


Thread Name: When One Eye Closes, Another Opens
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: Full Summoning XP for both, please! Riven got initiated, and Tae initiated someone in Summoning for the first time.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Summoning: The Choir of Fog
Summoning: The Initiation
Summoning: Initiating Someone
Summoning: Tar'haen
Summoning: Veratelle's Death
Meditation: Environment Matters
Meditation: Breathing
Writing: Writing a letter
Storytelling: Telling a story through text
Rhetoric: Writing and speaking to draw interest
Negotiation: Extending the offer of initiation

Riven
Summoning: Elven Gods
Summoning: Choir of Fog
Summoning: Patrons
Summoning: Fall of the Elven Gods
Summoning: the Rune
Summoning: Tar'haen
Summoning: Veratelle's death
Summoning: Tar'haen's grief
Meditation: Breathing focus
Meditation: Easy poetry

Loot: +1 Rune of Summoning for Riven!
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word count: 134
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Darius Alderset
Posts: 14
Joined: Sun Dec 15, 2019 10:18 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?p=778#p778
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=919

Thu Aug 13, 2020 8:15 am


Thread Name: A City in Squalor
Location: Drakenraid, West End, Lorien.
Notes/Warnings: Nope, just a introduction to the life of Lord Darius really.
Collaboration: No, Solo.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: Nope.
Requested Lore:
Politics: Appeasing the masses.
Etiquette: Proper treatment of servents.
Business: Damaged hollows delays production.
Business: The benefits of a clean city.
Business: Weighing the benefits and the drawbacks of a task.
Leadership: Sometimes it is worth sacrificing some wealth for the greater good.
Loot: N/A
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word count: 81
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Arlen
Posts: 120
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2020 1:28 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=695

Sun Aug 16, 2020 8:38 am


Thread Name: [Memory] Clearwater Rest
Location: The Free Cities of the North
Notes/Warnings: A bit long, sorry.
Collaboration: Yep, with the adorable giant child
Magic Experience: Nope
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore:

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Arlen
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Loot: Nope
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word count: 356
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Aug 18, 2020 3:03 am


Thread Name: Bad news.
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Kinda boring.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Nope.
Injuries/Ailments: Nothing.
Requested Lore:
Medicine: Some illnesses can't be cured.
Medicine: A patient can quietly pass without proper attention and care.
Psychology: People hate what they don't understand.
Running: Is harder in the snow.
Running: Lift your legs higher to run in the deep snow.
Running: Take care not to slip when running on ice.
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[NPC] Liu: Visited a doctor with you to determine Cojack's illness is incurable.
[NPC] Liu: Would fight back if she was treated poorly.
[NPC] Liu: Hid her true feelings to protect you.
Loot: Nah.
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word count: 110
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Aug 18, 2020 3:03 am


Thread Name: Flee.
Location: Lorien wilderness.
Notes/Warnings: Some violence, fear, blood.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Running: Don't even try to run in the mud.
Running: In the rain is harder.
Running: Is more exhausting when you're cold.
Running: Climbing through a thicket while running.
Running: Run into small spaces to evade a pursuer.
Running: Use your superior agility to turn easier.
Loot: None.
word count: 72
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Wed Aug 19, 2020 3:19 pm


Thread Name: Hide.
Location: Lorien.
Notes/Warnings: Fear, mild blood.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Hypothermia for a day or two while he warms up, but this is a memory so... Nothing lasting, really.
Requested Lore:
Climbing: Maintain three points of contact so that you don't slip and fall.
Climbing: Pulling your body weight with your arms.
Climbing: Pushing your body weight with your legs.
Climbing: Using branches as steps.
Climbing: Digging your claws into the bark.
Climbing: Climbing a tree.
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[NPC] Liu: Strong enough to fell a direwolf.
[NPC] Liu: Tried hard to keep you safe.
[NPC] Liu: Saved your life.
Loot: None.
word count: 107
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Aug 23, 2020 3:43 pm


Thread Name: Skinning.
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Skinning an animal.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Survival: Skinning: Cut off the legs at the joint first.
Survival: Skinning: Place your cuts where it will allow you to easily peel off the pelt.
Survival: Skinning: Easier when the carcass is suspended.
Survival: Skinning: Cutting off the tail.
Survival: Skinning: Cutting off the head.
Survival: Skinning: Don’t force the pelt, or it might tear.
Loot: None.
word count: 81
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Aug 23, 2020 5:49 pm


Thread Name: Welcome home.
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Treating an animal hide, removing a brain.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None!
Requested Lore:
Meditation: The past can't hurt you.
Meditation: Frustration leads to errors.
Meditation: Fear lasts.
Survival: Skinning: Use a blunt instrument to flesh the pelt.
Survival: Skinning: Opening up the pelt to work on the underside.
Survival: Skinning: Boil the brain while preparing the pelt.
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[NPC] Liu: Was a lot more stressed in the late glade of 213
[NPC] Liu: Appreciated your help reluctantly.
Loot: None.
word count: 91
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Aug 23, 2020 8:00 pm


Thread Name: Summer nights.
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: None, very tame. I listened to this while writing it.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Nope.
Injuries/Ailments: This was around the time that Arkash's scales began to crack from dryness, which leaves him with scars in the present day.
Requested Lore:
Deception: Pretending to believe someone.
Investigation: Determining a falsehood by following a lead.
Investigation: Sometimes, pressure doesn't yield results.
Investigation: People won't always be honest with you, no matter how close they are.
Spycraft: Don't tell too much.
Spycraft: Managing what the opposition knows.
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[NPC] Liu: You caught her sneaking out at night in the searing of 113.
[NPC] Liu: Underestimated you.
[NPC] Liu: You read her easily.
Loot: None.
word count: 125
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