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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Sun Jul 12, 2020 9:21 am


Thread Name: Retribution
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Violence, swearing
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: Re-opened chest wounds.
Requested Lore:
Blunt Weapons: Club: Overhead strike.
Blunt Weapons: Club: Strike the back of the head to daze an opponent.
Stealth: The sound of the rain can make it harder for people to hear you.
Stealth: Using the reflection of a buddle to look at something indirectly.
Unarmed Combat: Chokehold.
Unarmed Combat: Squeeze your opponent's wind-pipe by pulling back and up with your arm around their neck.
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[NPC] Barry: Pushed you.
[NPC] Barry: Admit to betraying you.
[NPC] Barry: Told you to fuck off.
[NPC] Barry: You mugged him.
Loot: +4125 df
+1 Leather Wallet
+1 Iron Pipe
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word count: 122
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Jul 12, 2020 3:29 pm


Thread Name: Money
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Nothing, really. Some swearing, i think, maybe?
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: No Magic.
Injuries/Ailments: Treatment of wounds.
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: Meats help with building muscle and recovery from injuries.
Persuasion: Helping someone see reason.
Persuasion: Establishing a moral standard to win a debate.
Persuasion: Assuring someone that moral dubious acts are okay under certain conditions.
Persuasion: Assuring someone that everything will be okay.
Tactics: Invest now to make more money later.
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[NPC] Cojack: Isn't okay with you stealing.
[NPC] Cojack: Is terribly worried for your safety.
[NPC] Cojack: Has strong morals and standards.
[NPC] Cojack: Struggles with shouting.
[NPC] Cojack: Ultimately doesn't have a choice in what you do.
Loot:
+1 set of lockpicks (-2000 df)
+3 linen Underwear (-30 df)
+1 Black linen Tunic (-50 df)
+1 pair of Black linen Pants (-80 df)
+1 Brown leather Belt (-40 df)
+1 Black linen Cowl (-20 df)
+1 Backpack (-20 df)
+3 Bandages (-30 df)
+1 Bottle of rubbing alcohol (-20 df)
2 Meals (-40 df)
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word count: 178
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Jul 12, 2020 6:49 pm


Thread Name: Plan
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None really. Some foul language.
Collaboration: No friends.
Magic Experience: Still not a mage.
Injuries/Ailments: None for once!
Requested Lore:
Larceny: Vetting a venue before you hit it requires a lot of thought.
Larceny: Vetting: Take note of hazards that may alert the owners of a break-in.
Larceny: Vetting: Take no interest in the items you plan to steal to reduce suspicion.
Larceny: Vetting: Take the opportunity to discover where the owner of the venue keeps their money.
Stealth: Concealing your true identity with a persona.
Stealth: Hiding in plain sight.
Loot:
+1 Horse snowglobe (-1000 df)
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word count: 108
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Saej Mirilla
Posts: 145
Joined: Thu Mar 12, 2020 11:52 pm
Location: Kalzasi
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=413
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=572
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=598
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=611

Mon Jul 13, 2020 5:56 am


Thread Name: viewtopic.php?f=63&t=775 [Memory] Bear Necessities I.
Location: The Wild King's Forge
Notes/Warnings: Beginning of a two part thread in a four part series
Collaboration: Yes, Arlen
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Arlen;
Negotiation: Don’t let feelings get in the way
Negotiation: Be clear in your suggestions
Appraisal: Recognize ambush spots
Tactics: Leave guard behind during scouting
Tactics: Scout the lay of the land
Appraisal: Recognize weak and strong points of your surroundings
Survival: Keep the fire going at night
Storytelling: Share your experience through stories

People: Saej: An adopted daughter not an apprentice
People: Saej: Wants to own her merchant business
People: Shasco: Saej’s brother
People: Shasco: Plays the lute
People: Shasco: Hytori and Human mix

Saej;
Etiquette; Keeping a conversation light
Etiquette; Keeping a conversation short
Etiquette; Being polite
Navigation; The road along Lake Udori
Navigation; The Wild King's Forge
Mount; Driving a wagon long distances
Mount; Getting a wagon to a trot
Mount; Keeping up with a convoy

Loot: Nah
word count: 176
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
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Mon Jul 13, 2020 5:05 pm


Thread Name: Windows Into Moonlight
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: Transposition XP for both, please
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Sigilic Pyromancy: Glare
Sigilic Pyromancy: Executing a ghost
Transposition: Opening a wide portal
Transposition: Spatial Sickness
Transposition: Using portals via memory
Survival: Pursuing through a forest
Survival: Being aware of local fauna
Survival: Vetting potential threats

Saej
Etiquette; The grateful thank you
Negotiation; Receiving a favor
Negotiation; Finding the middle ground
Negotiation; Giving information
Negotiation; The leap of faith
Transposition; Creating the nodes between the portal and yourself
Transposition; Being in a state of calm
Transposition; Using gestures to center yourself

Loot: N/A
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word count: 111
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Mon Jul 13, 2020 5:43 pm


Thread Name: Facing the Nightmare
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: Some Transposition XP for Taelian, please.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Sigilic Pyromancy: A master can expand Searing for others to see
Sigilic Pyromancy: Assassinating with Glare
Investigation: Using Searing to examine a crime scene
Investigation: Piecing together evidence
Investigation: Making a conclusion based on what you know
Persuasion: Persuading with undeniable evidence
Deception: Stalling and derailing with diversions
Negotiation: Utilizing trust in another to your benefit
Tactics: Killing the leader first
Tactics: Publicly exposing an adversary

Milana
Leadership: Taking Charge
Leadership: Putting your people first
Leadership: The burden of leadership
Business: Redirecting Conversations back on track
Business: Leaving personal feelings out of decisions
Business: Planning to Salvage a Deal
Business: Anticipating long lasting consequences
Business: Avoiding being misdirected
Business: Making hard decisions
Negotiation: Controlling ones tone
Negotiation: Adapting half truths

Loot: N/A
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Arkash
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Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Mon Jul 13, 2020 6:38 pm


Thread Name: Take I
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: A long thread that I split into two parts. Optional music.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Larceny: Lockpicking: Every lock is different.
Larceny: Lockpicking: Different lock types require different tools.
Larceny: if you're unable to pick the lock, you can always try retrieving the key.
Stealth: Vetting: Take note of patrol times.
Stealth: Clothes are noisier than they're worth in some circumstances.
Stealth: It helps to leave your heavier equipment behind so that you can travel quieter and without encumbrance.
Loot:
+1 Silver-framed hand mirror.
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word count: 103
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Arkash
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Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Mon Jul 13, 2020 6:38 pm


Thread Name: Take II
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: A long thread that I split into two parts. Optional music.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Larceny: Lock the drawer and steal the key so that the owner doesn't immediately know they've been robbed.
Stealth: Be flexible with your way in and out of the venue, as circumstances change.
Stealth: Stop traps from alerting people of your presence.
Stealth: Prowl close to the ground when moving.
Stealth: Drop to the floor when you're about to get caught.
Stealth: Focus so that you don't make noise by accident.
Loot:
+10,405 df
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word count: 110
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
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Mon Jul 13, 2020 10:23 pm


Thread Name: New Horizons
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: Some Elementalism for Riven, please.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Psychology: Choosing to control your own life
Psychology: The pain and joy of remembrance
Rhetoric: Mean Nicknames
Negotiation: Agreeing to prioritize a relationship

Riven: Came to Atinaw to be with me
Riven: I want to be with him for all my life

Riven
Research: locating a person
Running: Uphill
Flight: Jetstream speed
Elementalism: the Jetstream
Biology: structure of a feather
Etiquette: small gifts

Loot: N/A
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Mon Jul 13, 2020 10:24 pm


Thread Name: City Folk
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Tailoring: Materials: Silk
Tailoring: Materials: Satin
Tailoring: Materials: Cotton
Tailoring: Materials: Fur
Tailoring: Embroidering
Tailoring: Fur-Trim
Tailoring: Making clothes for Avialae
Tailoring: Outfit Coordination
Finance: Auctioning
Finance: Checks

Riven
Cooking: Toast
Seduction: Naked cooking
Flight: Jetstream-high speed flight
Flight: Jetstream-soft descent
Flight: Looping
Flight: Nosedive
Persuasion: Appealing to vanity
Teaching: Describing clothing
Cartography: Locating a point in a map
Tactics: Auction bidding

Loot: N/A
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