Review Submission Thread v1.0

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Run I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: I struggled to make the wordcap. May be boring.
Collaboration: All alone in this one.
Magic Experience: No magics, sir.
Injuries/Ailments: A headache.
Requested Lore:
Running: Sprinting.
Running: Speed costs greater energy, and you won't make it as far.
Running: Your heavy tail allows you to lean forward further for added momentum.
Running: Your cold-blooded body won't overheat from running.
Running: Your claws can't grip the cobblestone well.
Running: Changing directions quickly.
Loot: None.

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Run II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Nothing special happened.
Collaboration: All alone.
Magic Experience: Not a mage.
Injuries/Ailments: Nothing new.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: Leaping and grabbing hold of a pipe in the same movement
Acrobatics: Leaping off of a wall for extra height.
Bodybuilding: Dynamic stretches.
Running: Your claws can grip the dirt while running.
Running: Your heavy tail adds momentum.
Running: Using momentum to your advantage.
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[NPC] Cojack: Worries for you.
[NPC] Cojack: Doesn't seem to think you can handle yourself.
[NPC] Cojack: Doesn't trust your judgment about the Caravan Idea.
[NPC] Cojack: Agreed to consider the Caravan option.
Loot: None.

[Rhea]

Thread Name: Sharpening Your Blade Ⅰ
Location: Loregard, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Horrible training thread
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Exhaustion, Body aches from training too hard
Requested Lore:

• Bodybuilding: Stretching helps loosen up muscles
  Blades{Longsword}: Slice and stab
  Blades{Longsword}: An on-guard stance
  Blades{Longsword}: A Blade is an Extension of the Body
  Blades{Longsword}: Slicing with a long sword
  Blades{Longsword}: Remain relaxed, flexible and responsive

Loot: Much needed experience

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Lie I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: I planned to make this one thread, but I ended with more than 3k words, so split it right down the middle. It ends abruptly and continues in the linked thread.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: While strange that you're an omnivore, it's helpful for putting on weight.
Etiquette: Allowing visitors into your home.
Etiquette: Apologising when unable to offer a guest a drink.
Etiquette: Giving someone else the last drink.
Etiquette: Bringing food home to your sick father, even if it's stale cake, is a nice gesture.
Medicine: It's possible to wash down the bad taste with water.
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[NPC] Cojack: Likes cake.
[NPC] Cojack: Has been trying to be healthier, as you requested.
[NPC] Cojack: Is in a good position to look at whoever's at the door from his bed.
[NPC] Cojack: Hates his medicine.
[NPC] Valris: A really tall Knight-Argent with heavy armor, wings, and a cool cloak.
[NPC] Valris: Investigating the murders in lower Nivenhain.
Loot: None.

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Lie II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Starts with little explanation as this is the second half of a thread that I split into two parts. Arkash and his father are visited by an argent knight in their shack, who's investigating some murders.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: Not a mage, ser.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Deception: Mixing elements of the truth to create a believable lie.
Deception: Tears really sell tall tales of a traumatic experience.
Deception: Consider what your victim knows before delivering your lie.
Deception: Requires a lot of rational thinking and consideration.
Deception: What they don't know won't hurt them.
Deception: People will accept lies with greater ease when they're emotionally vulnerable.
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[NPC] Cojack: Knows when you're lying.
[NPC] Cojack: Is upset with you for keeping things from him.
[NPC] Cojack: Tried to defend you.
[NPC] Cojack: Cares deeply for you.
[NPC] Valris: Believes you're not responsible for the murders.
[NPC] Valris: Believes your story completely?
[NPC] Valris: Probably knows that you were there.
[NPC] Valris: Has a lot of empathy.
Loot: None.

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Lost I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Foul language. I wrote another big thread, but this one is split into three parts. Just so you're aware, it ends abruptly and continues in the linked thread.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Not yet.
Requested Lore:
Deception: Be mindful when lying to groups, as someone might know something that contradicts your story.
Running: Running as fast as you can in a short burst.
Running: When running with lots of momentum, start to turn early.
Running: Take sharp turns to confuse pursuers.
Running: Using your agile, lithe form to your advantage in a chase.
Unarmed Combat: Throwing dirt in your pursuer's eyes with your claws.
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[NPC] Barry: Sold you out.
[NPC] Cojack: Has encountered the Thompson Brothers.
Loot: None.

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Lost II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Foul Language, probably. I wrote another big thread, but this one is split into three parts. Just so you're aware, it starts & ends abruptly and continues in the linked thread.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: I'll save them for the ending thread of the series.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: Tuck your head against your body to protect it when you fall.
Climbing: Pipe: Squeeze and pull your body weight up.
Climbing: Easier if you're light.
Running: Knocking over crates with your tail while running to create an obstacle can slow down pursuers.
Unarmed Combat: Blocking strikes aimed at your head with your forearms.
Unarmed Combat: Defending against kicks while you're on the ground.
Loot: -All my df, +whatever I gain from my seasonal wages, as those would have been stolen in this thread too but they haven't been approved yet.

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Lost III
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: Violence, Foul Language, Torture, Abuse. I wrote another big thread, but this one is split into three parts. Just so you're aware, it starts abruptly with little context.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Bruising to the forearms ad thighs, dehydration, a knife-carved brand into his chest, as described in the thread.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: The stretching technique that fixes your back.
Climbing: Take care not to injure yourself when climbing over debris.
Climbing: Use the wall for support.
Medicine: Strenuous activity can re-open wounds.
Unarmed Combat: Choking your opponent is an effective method of breaking their ability to fight.
Unarmed Combat: A basic strangle.
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[NPC] Cojack: Took a beating from one of the Thompson Brothers.
[NPC] Cojack: Is okay, and that's all that matters.
[NPC] Cojack: You need to step up your game if you're going to save yourself and him.
Loot: -the rest of the bandages & rubbing alcohol in my inventory, as they were all used in summary to patch up and clean Arkash's wounds.

[Rhea]

Thread Name: Sharpening Your Blade Ⅱ
Location: Forests of Loregard
Notes/Warnings: nope
Collaboration: she has no friends
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Severe Exhausted
Requested Lore:

• Blades{Longsword}: Aiming for vital points when attacking
  Blades{Longsword}: Follow through with each swing
  Blades{Longsword}: Wide arcing motions
  Blades{Longsword}: Upward Stab
  Blades{Longsword}: Downward Slash
  Blades{Longsword}: The effectiveness of chained combos

Loot:

[Arkash]

Thread Name: Honesty
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: A long social thread where Arkash reflects and talks with his father. Might be boring.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: Cleaned and treated wounds from prior threads.
Requested Lore:
Larceny: Lockpicking: Padlocks are very different to ordinary locks.
Larceny: Lockpicking: Using moonlight to help you see the mechanism inside.
Larceny: Lockpicking: Looking into the keyhole with one eye can help your coordination.
Larceny: Lockpicking: Opening a padlock with your claws.
Psychology: Authority is an illusion.
Psychology: The only true power is strength.
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[NPC] Cojack: Very different from you.
[NPC] Cojack: You can relate to him.
[NPC] Cojack: Gave up your money in the hope of saving your life.
[NPC] Cojack: Doesn't seem like he's giving up on you, despite everything.
Loot: None.