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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Jul 05, 2020 3:27 pm


Thread Name: Heal
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain.
Notes/Warnings: I tended to wounds from a previous thread here and went on to imply that he took care of similar injuries in the same fashion without writing it. I didn't have anything spectacular planned from wrapping his arms in bandages, but if you'd like me to extend the thread and add that, I will.
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience: Nada.
Injuries/Ailments: Disinfection and treatment of all existing wounds.
Requested Lore:
Medicine: Clean the wound of debris with a cloth and clean water.
Medicine: Disinfect the wound with rubbing alcohol.
Medicine: Wrap the wound to keep it clean while it's still open.
Medicine: Tying a splint to the injured area can promote healing if there's a fracture.
Medicine: Change the water once it's dirty to prevent recycling wound gunk.
Medicine: When cleaning a wound, make sure to wash off the cloth periodically.
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[NPC] Jerry 'The Cat': Claimed to have been in a fight with someone from the Lustrian Caste.
[NPC] Jerry 'The Cat': Begged you for help.
[NPC] Jerry 'The Cat': Blamed you for his demise.
[NPC] Jerry 'The Cat': Was chased by hollows for his crimes.
[NPC] Jerry 'The Cat': Not so different from you.
[NPC] Jerry 'The Cat': Probably dead.
Loot: Nothing.
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Mon Jul 06, 2020 3:47 am


Thread Name: Grind I
Location: (Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: Job thread
Collaboration: Solo.
Magic Experience: Nope.
Injuries/Ailments: Exhaustion?
Requested Lore:
Bodybuilding: Eating something is better than eating nothing.
Bodybuilding: Eating more than the energy you expend will result in weight gain.
Bodybuilding: The correct form for lifting heavy things from the ground.
Bodybuilding: Carrying heavy bags to condition your back, shoulders and legs.
Bodybuilding: It's a bad idea to stop breathing when performing a heavy lift.
Bodybuilding: Straighten up to open your lungs and recover faster.
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[NPC] Barry: Is suspicious of you.
[NPC] Barry: Doesn't believe your Hollow story.
[NPC] Barry: Spoke with Cojack.
[NPC] Barry: Knows where you live.
[NPC] Barry: Warned you about a killer in Lower Nivenhain.
Loot: None.
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Last edited by Arkash on Thu Jul 09, 2020 4:32 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 126
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=873
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Jul 07, 2020 3:46 am


Thread Name: Grind II
Location: Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Super boring job thread about chopping trees.
Collaboration: I'm alone.
Magic Experience: I'm a muggle.
Injuries/Ailments: I'm in one piece!
Requested Lore:
Axes: A side-on strike.
Axes: Chopping for power.
Axes: Throwing your weight into the strike.
Bodybuilding: The core is the body's source of strength.
Bodybuilding: Repetition is key in building strength.
Bodybuilding: Turning motions help strengthen your core.
Loot: Nothin'.
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word count: 76
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Milana
Posts: 63
Joined: Thu Jan 23, 2020 8:56 am
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=352
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=619
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=607

Tue Jul 07, 2020 11:29 am


Thread Name: Tick Tock III
Location: Loras, Grimhold Territory, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Clockwork: Working with Copper
Clockwork: Making moving parts
Clockwork: Small Helper Golem
Clockwork: Working on fine details
Clockwork: Adapting a blueprint

Artificing: Use Glass for prototype cores when possible
Loot: N/A
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word count: 57
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Arlen
Posts: 120
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2020 1:28 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=695

Tue Jul 07, 2020 2:11 pm


Thread Name: [Memory] Then, everything changed when the caravans attacked.
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Yes (at last!)
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Arlen:
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Magna:
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Loot:
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word count: 251
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Leliana
Posts: 77
Joined: Wed May 27, 2020 8:19 pm
Character Sheet: https://ranserarp.com/viewtopic.php?f=4 ... 2133#p2133

Tue Jul 07, 2020 8:26 pm


Thread Name: The Trail to Freedom, Part IV
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: More actual sword practice and more theory, as well as some conversation about her heritage. It's a bit of a fade to black to set up future threads.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Blades: Parry or block only as a last line of defense
Blades: Parrying and blocking is incredibly dangerous
Blades: Have a layer of defenses in place
Blades: Evading an attack is the best method of defense
Blades: Five basic universal counter-attacks
Blades: Stay light on the balls of your feet
Loot: N/A
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Last edited by Leliana on Wed Jul 08, 2020 2:39 pm, edited 1 time in total. word count: 107
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Saej Mirilla
Posts: 145
Joined: Thu Mar 12, 2020 11:52 pm
Location: Kalzasi
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=413
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=572
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=598
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=611

Tue Jul 07, 2020 9:58 pm


Thread Name: viewtopic.php?f=62&t=789 From the Window into Storms
Location: Kalzasi (memory)
Notes/Warnings: Grindy, also should have been titled "From the Window to the Wall" as an afterthought smh
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics; Wall run
Acrobatics; Vaulting up high places
Acrobatics; Jumping down from an awning
Acrobatics; Taking a hard fall and getting back up into a run
Acrobatics; Keeping your balance after tripping
Stealth; Sneaking out from your bedroom window

Loot: None
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Saej Mirilla
Posts: 145
Joined: Thu Mar 12, 2020 11:52 pm
Location: Kalzasi
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43&t=413
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78&t=572
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=598
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=611

Wed Jul 08, 2020 10:14 am


Thread Name: viewtopic.php?f=45&t=794 Daydream Fishbones
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: None, cute and wholesome
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Navigation; Using a map
Navigation; Checking a map at forks in the road
Fishing; Reeling in a big one
Fishing; Using larger bait for larger fish
Fishing; Fixing a snapped line
Running; Jogging with goods in your hands

Loot: None
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word count: 68
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Patrick
Posts: 307
Joined: Sun Dec 22, 2019 4:47 pm
Location: Atinaw
Character Sheet: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=43& ... 800c252a81
Plot Notes: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=78& ... 800c252a81
Character Secrets: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=20&t=409
Journal: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=104&t=499
Letters: https://ransera.com/viewtopic.php?f=105&t=500

Wed Jul 08, 2020 2:06 pm


Thread Name: The Stay
Location: Loras/Lands of 8 (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: Mild as fuck
Collaboration: Yurs
Magic Experience: A couple Transposition for Taelian
Injuries/Ailments: Nah
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Skill
  • Investigation: Cause and effect
  • Investigation: Determining the reason for a departure
  • Investigation: Examining remote areas
  • Seduction: Displaying intimate desires for a friend
  • Seduction: Pressing through another's doubts
  • Rhetoric: Making a good nickname

Patrick
Skill
  • Investigation: Cause and Effect
  • Investigation: Examining Remote Areas
  • Rhetoric: The Varying Levels of Appreciation With A Friend
  • Etiquette: Refraining From Making Any Untoward Advances
  • Seduction: Giving Into A Lingering Temptation
  • Seduction: Curiosity Leads To Heated Moments
Loot: Nah
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word count: 104
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Arlen
Posts: 120
Joined: Tue Jun 23, 2020 1:28 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=695

Wed Jul 08, 2020 2:56 pm


Thread Name: [Memory] Seeing Blind II.
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: Not yet
Requested Lore:
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Loot: N/A
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word count: 79
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