Review Submission Thread v1.0

[Magna]

Thread Name: I don't understand, Pacheco. (Khan's story pt 1/2)
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Boring language grind thread
Collaboration: No friend gang
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: A broken heart
Requested Lore:
[Intimidation] Make yourself appear larger to frighten possible foes.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Inquiring if one is ready or not.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Asking how someone is doing.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Responding appropriately when someone asks you how you are.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Deciphering the intent of a sentence by translating certain words you recognize.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Emotionally charged.
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[NPC] Khan: Laughed at you?
[NPC] Khan: Has beef with a larger group?
[NPC] Khan: Doesn't talk about himself much.
[NPC] Khan: A mystery.
Loot: None

[Magna]

Thread Name: I am unable to comprehend, dearest Pacheco. (Khan's story pt 2)
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: no warning gang
Collaboration: no friend gang
Magic Experience: no magic gang
Injuries/Ailments: no injury gang
Requested Lore:
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Common prepositions.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Turning a word into it's past tense.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Common pronouns.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Pronunciation is key in speaking with a believable accent.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Joining two words into part of a sentence.
[Meditation] Hugs are nice.
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[NPC] Khan: Rivals with the Glendrav kinship.
[NPC] Khan: Lost his whole Kinship to the bandits that took his arm.
[NPC] Khan: Promises he wasn't laughing at you.
[NPC] Khan: Strong.
[NPC] Khan: You hugged him.
[NPC] Khan: Offered you the last ration pack.
[NPC] Khan: A hunter.
[Faction] Glendrav: The kinship that rivaled Khan's.
[Faction] Glendrav: Compassionate beneath all the tough talk.
[Faction] Glendrav: Trophy hunters.
[Faction] Glendrav: Well-armed.
Loot: -Ration packs (would have been used on the road, and they used the last one in this thread so delete them all from my inventory please.)

[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] The Secrets of Steel I.
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Skill:

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> Blade: Balance point
> Blade: The sweet spot delivers the most powerful blow
> Blade: Fullers are not blood grooves
> Blade: Mix of metals to achieve different attributes
> Blade: Sword needs a hilt
> Blade: Polish and shine doesn't always equal sharp

Non-skill:

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> Jastai live to fight and die
> Jastai weapon seal of quality

Loot: Jastai marked sword (agreed with Mirage)

[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] Until Next Life
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Skill

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> Storytelling: Speak from the heart
> Storytelling: Speak the truth
> Storytelling: Create emotional connection
> Storytelling: Make story relevant
> Storytelling: Good moral ending
> Storytelling: Gauge story success by audience's reaction

Non-skill

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> Jastai: Burial by fire
> Jastai: Value storytelling
> Jastai: Respect individual choices
> Jastai: Share stories to commemorate
> Jastai: Do not care about differences
> People: Mor: Lover
> People: Rook: Close friend
> People: Rook: Jastai storyteller

Loot: The Chronicler title

[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] Toothpick Training
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: 1 swear word
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: He cut his thumb but as it is a memory, I don't think it will particularly affect him now.
Requested Lore:
Skill:

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> Blade: Length of the blade decides its use
> Blade: Blade’s metal sometimes decides its strength
> Blade: Some swords have two sharp edges, some don’t
> Blade: Sharp edge is for cutting
> Blade: Blunt edge is for blunt damage
> Blade: Sword has cut, slash, stab damage

Non-Skills:

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> Jastai: Thova: Gylfi’s apprentice
> Jastai: Thova: Tends to ridicule Arlen
> Jastai: Gylfi: First master weapon maker Arlen worked with
> Jastai: Thova: Second master weapon maker Arlen worked with

Loot: N/A

[Magna]

Thread Name: We finally made it, Pacheco.
Location: Atinaw, outside of Hopsfel
Notes/Warnings: Language thread, I probably wrote it trash so it may be confusing.
Collaboration: no friend gang
Magic Experience: no magic gang
Injuries/Ailments: no ailment gang
Requested Lore:
[Intimidation] Speaking loudly can frighten smaller people.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Correcting your pronunciation for the correct meaning.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Some words sound similar but have different meanings.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Simple contractions.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Simple welcome.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: A word for 'weapon'.
Loot: no loot gang

[Arlen]

Thread Name: [Memory] Counter Me Lucky
Location: The Northern Wilds
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: N/A
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: Cut across his thigh but as a memory thread I don't think this will affect him much now.
Requested Lore:
Skill:

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> Blade: 5 main counter stances
> Blade: Poorly made weapon can’t withstand damage
> Blade: Trick opponent with false moves
> Blade: Guard your open spots
> Blade: Combine block with an attack
> Blade: Take advantage of different heights

Non-Skill:

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> Jastai: Rook: Dearest friend
> Jastai: Rook: Battleaxe fighter, not a swordsman
> Jastai: Gylfi: Dead by his own hand

Loot: N/A

[Rhea]

Thread Name: Clearing out the Trash
Location: Kamdin, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:

• Blades{Longsword}: Cutting through mortals like wet paper
  Blades{Longsword}: Parry & attack
  Bludgeons{Shields}: Blocking incoming attacks
  Bludgeons{Shields}: Shield throw
  Tactics: Using yourself as live bait
  Negotiation: Trying to reach an agreement without violence

Loot: N/A

[Althalos]

Thread Name: Step Into My Parlor
Location: Alfsos, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Gratuitous Moving
Collaboration: Yes, Saej.
Magic Experience: (Only the magic of friendship. )
Injuries/Ailments: (N/A)
Requested Lore:
Althalos
Navigation - Leading Others Through Busy Streets
Etiquette - Offering to Carry Things
Etiquette - Don't Make Grim Jokes
Animal Handling - Stay Away from Aggressive Animals
Appraisal - Checking Valuables in a Crate
Meditation - Remain Calm Even When Your Things are Touched

Saej
Mount; driving a wagon down city streets
Etiquette; Making yourself at home
Etiquette; Giving people space
Etiquette; Moving into someone else's home
Intimidation; Doing things for yourself
Animal Handling; Fitting an unwilling dog through a door
Loot: (If applicable)

[Leliana]

Thread Name: The Trail to Freedom, Part III
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Continued theory of swordsmanship.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Blades: Importance of physical and mental conditioning
Blades: Be confident but cautious
Blades: Don't fall into a predictable rhythm
Blades: Gauge appropriate timing and distance
Blades: Eight basic but universal angles of attack
Blades: Take every opportunity to strike
Loot: N/A