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Arkash
Posts: 1058
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Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Sat Sep 12, 2020 11:16 am


Thread Name: The sewers
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Leadership: Considering someone else's idea.
Leadership: Brainstorm with your followers to come up with a plan.
Leadership: There's no harm in leaning on another's knowledge if you're lacking.
Tactics: Ruling out tunneling under the enemy.
Tactics: Ruling out the possibility of a disguise.
Tactics: Ruling out the possibility of feigning capture.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Doesn't want to get near the argent.
[NPC] Asmodei: A nameless kathar.
[NPC] Asmodei: Doesn't want to go through the sewers.
[NPC] Asmodei: Doesn't like rats.
[NPC] Cojack: You believed that he'd spent the past two months in Outer Nivenhain.

Loot: A bag of dead rats.
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sat Sep 12, 2020 11:17 am


Thread Name: The Delve I
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: Working through a cramp.
Bodybuilding: Leaning your whole weight into a heave.
Bodybuilding: Poor form will result in injury.
Bodybuilding: Keep your back straight when lifting heavy things.
Deception: Appearing in a way that you don't really feel to elicit pity.
Deception: Manipulating someone that cares about you to help you.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Conquered his squeamishness to prevent you from hurting yourself.
[NPC] Asmodei: Pities you.
[NPC] Asmodei: A sucker.
[NPC] Asmodei: Accompanied you on your quest to find Cojack through the sewers.

Loot: None.
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word count: 109
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Sun Sep 13, 2020 2:21 pm


Thread Name: The Delve II
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain, Sewers.
Notes/Warnings: None really.
Collaboration: None
Magic Experience: None.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Climbing: Much more difficult with one arm.
Climbing: Make sure you have a safety net if you're unsure.
Climbing: Hook the step of the ladder with your stump arm.
Climbing: Don't let go of your support without making sure you're stable.
Climbing: Harder on slippery surfaces.
Climbing: An iron ladder.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Caught you when you fell.
[NPC] Asmodei: Takes his own initiative.
[NPC] Asmodei: Knows magic.
[NPC] Asmodei: Said he might show you a thing or two.

Loot: None.
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word count: 107
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Mannon
Posts: 49
Joined: Mon Aug 17, 2020 3:09 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=935
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Mon Sep 14, 2020 9:34 am


Thread Name: [Memory]Once upon a time
Location: Near Hopsfel, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: not NSFW but I think I dropped in a swear word and some flirting/seduction
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: Nope
Injuries/Ailments: None that matter
Requested Lore:

Acting: Switch between roles quickly
Deception: Match emotion to facial expression
Seduction: Act hard to get to raise the anticipation
Seduction: Use suggestive body language
Seduction: Work with tension

Loot: Nope
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Arkash
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Mon Sep 14, 2020 5:56 pm


Thread Name: The Delve III
Location: Lorien, Lower Nivenhain, Sewers.
Notes/Warnings: Stinky.
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Etiquette: Generally speaking, it's frowned upon to eat dead rats in front of people.
Etiquette: Asking nicely.
Etiquette: Small talk.
Navigation: Underground tunnels.
Tactics: Using arrow pointers to guide you the way back if you get lost.
Tactics: Light the darkness with magic.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Said he'd initiate you if he could.
[NPC] Asmodei: Not that strong of a mage.
[NPC] Asmodei: Has a cardinal rune on his left palm.
[NPC] Asmodei: Practices magic called Sigilic Pyromancy.

Loot: None.
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word count: 104
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Mannon
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Tue Sep 15, 2020 5:55 am


Thread Name: [Memory] I refuse
Location: Near Hopsfel, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: I think there is a slap in there as a measure of discipline
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: Nope
Injuries/Ailments: Nah
Requested Lore:

Psychology: Anger clouds judgement
Psychology: Panic feels like suffocation
Psychology: Paranoia is not based on objective reason
Running: Dash through doors
Persuasion: Barked command is intimidating and might be enough to persuade someone to do something

Loot: Nope
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Mannon
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Tue Sep 15, 2020 11:33 am


Thread Name: [Memory] Misplaced
Location: Nivenhain, Lorien
Notes/Warnings: Nope
Collaboration: Yep, with Arkash
Magic Experience: Yes please!
Injuries/Ailments: Nope
Requested Lore:

Arkash
Deception: Lying about the presence of stronger reinforcements nearby.
Deception: Implying someone is of a higher caste than they are.
Deception: "Look over there!"
Unarmed Combat: Hit and run.
Unarmed Combat: High kick.
Unarmed Combat: Your foot claws are sharper than your hand claws.
Unarmed Combat: Throw all your strength into your opening strike.
Unarmed Combat: Distract your opponent before attacking them.
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[PC] Mannon: Was in the process of being mugged when you first met.
[PC] Mannon: Not from Lorien.
[PC] Mannon: Not that good at running.
[PC] Mannon: Trusted you when you tried to save her.
[PC] Mannon: Threatened to rot your body if you attacked her.
[PC] Mannon: Weary.

Mannon
Deception: Appear confident when you aren’t.
Deception: Don’t talk to maintain the illusion of being local
Acting: Know the role
Appraisal: Pick up signs when something bad is about to happen
Running: Pick up the skirts
Intimidation: Threaten someone with something nasty
Magic: Masquerade: Mask technique
Magic: Masquerade: Mask needs active sustainment to hold
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[PC] Arkash: Met when she got lost in Lower Nivenhain
[PC] Arkash: Lizard man
[PC] Arkash: His scales feel different from human skin
[PC] Arkash: Has quite the Rien accent
[PC] Arkash: Seems honest
[PC] Arkash: Can't fight him, got to trick him
Location: Lower Nivenhain
Location: Lower Nivenhain: Place for the poor
Location: Lower Nivenhain: Dangerous
Location: Lower Nivenhain: Turf gangs present

Loot: Nope
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
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Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Sep 15, 2020 3:25 pm


Thread Name: Out of bounds
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: None really.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: Exhaustion.
Requested Lore:
Acrobatics: Your balance is off due to your missing limb.
Acrobatics: Maintaining your balance on a ladder without any hands.
Disguise: Cover your entire body.
Disguise: If you cover your face, follow someone closely to get around.
Disguise: It's better to be unable to see than be seen.
Disguise: Wearing a giant's clothes.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Has good ideas.
[NPC] Asmodei: Pushes you to your limit.

Loot: None.
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word count: 92
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Mannon
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Wed Sep 16, 2020 11:59 am


Thread Name: [Memory] The Dotted Line
Location: Alfsos, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Unheatlhy coping mechanism
Collaboration: Nope
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None that matter now
Requested Lore:

Deception: Plan your moves well
Deception: Hide your feelings
Persuasion: Try to paint a better picture
Persuasion: Twist facts
Persuasion: Screaming sometimes does it

Loot: No
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Arkash
Posts: 1058
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Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Thu Sep 17, 2020 8:41 am


Thread Name: Choke
Location: Lorien, Outer Nivenhain
Notes/Warnings: The deep red text at the end is a dream. I tried my hand at making a horror thread!
Collaboration: None.
Magic Experience: No.
Injuries/Ailments: None.
Requested Lore:
Blades: Dagger: Ready your hold to stab.
Blades: Dagger: Small, easy to conceal.
Blades: Dagger: Relatively easy to wield.
Meditation: Being alone terrifies you.
Psychology: You feel safer with a weapon in hand.
Tactics: Sleep with a weapon.
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[NPC] Asmodei: Bought you a room.
[NPC] Asmodei: Unsympathetic to your fear.
[NPC] Asmodei: Grumpy when he's tired.

Loot: None.
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word count: 97
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