Review Submission Thread v1.0

[Saej Mirilla]

Thread Name: Drink and the Devil Had Done for the Rest II viewtopic.php?f=29&t=663
Location: Alfsos, Silver Lion Inn
Notes/Warnings: Nope!
Collaboration: Yes, Althalos
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Saej
None

Althalos
Investigation - Using Items To Gain Leads
Investigation - Unique Items Can Be Identified
Investigation - Narrow The Possibilities
Deception - Smile Often, Laugh Frequently
Deception - A little sadness is alright, a lot is not
Persuasion - Offer to Cover a Need
Persuasion - Make Your 'Motives' Clear
Meditation - Remain Calm

Loot: None

[Leliana]

Thread Name: The Pact, Part II
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: This is the second part of Leliana's initiation into Reaving.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes please for Reaving.
Injuries/Ailments: Since this is a flashback the wounds and Overstepping are not a problem anymore in the present time.
Requested Lore:
Reaving: Dematerialization
Reaving: Materialization
Reaving: Injuries sustained after dematerializing a weapon
Reaving: Dematerializing becomes easier with practice
Reaving: Dematerializing is incredibly painful for a novice
Reaving: Initiation
Loot: Pact longsword

[Magna]

Thread Name: Who are you and what were you doing with Pacheco?
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Vague descriptions of a wound
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
[Deception] Keeping suspicions to yourself to maintain good standing with someone helpful.
[Investigation] Asking the right questions to fill in the pieces of a story.
[Investigation] Sometimes, helping the suspect can offer leverage for information.
[Medicine] It's possible to stop heavy bleeding with the application of a tourniquet.
[Meditation] Finding happiness in companionship.
[Meditation] Finding joy in helping others.
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[NPC]: Khan: A one-armed lizard man with poor common speach.
[NPC]: Khan: You found him dehydrated on Pacheco's back.
[NPC]: Khan: Claims he didnt steal Pacheco.
[NPC]: Khan: Claims he was ambushed.
[NPC]: Khan: Going to Hopsfel with you.
Loot: +1 Companion

[Althalos]

Thread Name: Rebirth
Location: Lands of 8, Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Althalos wakes up for the first time. There are gross moments involving the decaying process.
Collaboration: Stop, Collaborate and listen, Ice is back with a brand new invention: The Solo.
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Is life an injury? If not, then no.
Requested Lore:

Navigation: Using a Wagon to Know Civilization's Direction
Physics: Dropping Fragile Things Breaks Them
Acting: Pretending To Be Alive
Investigation: Reading Nearby Books and Documents
Investigation: Using Clothes to Ascertain Identity
Investigation: Examining Corpses for Loot

Loot:
2 Ledgers and a Journal with light information on Althalos' caravan.

REVIEWED BY LELIANA

[Taelian Edevane]

Thread Name: And When The Morning Comes
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: A bit for Taelian, for Summoning, please
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian
Linguistics: Kokalath: Atinaw's Native Tongue
Linguistics: Kokalath: Greetings
Linguistics: Kokalath: Banter
Linguistics: Kokalath: Speaking Colloquially
Linguistics: Kokalath: Introducing Yourself
Linguistics: Kokalath: Present-Tense Conjugations
Summoning: Ritual of Reminiscence
Summoning: Ritual of Reminiscence requires intimate familiarity with an Archetype

Patrick
Rhetoric: Antics Of Brotherhood
Leadership: Welcoming A Friend Into The Fold
Linguistics: Speaking Kokalath With A Friend
Teaching: Helping A Friend Speak More Fluently
Rhetoric: Discussing Stipulations Involved With Magic
Survival: Bedrolls Aren't As Comfortable As Beds

Kokalath: Atinaw's Native Tongue
Personal: Conversing With An Outlander In Your Native Tongue

Loot: N/A

[Leliana]

Thread Name: The Trail to Freedom, Part I
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Leliana learns a bit about her heritage.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Survival: Gathering enough kindling for the night
Survival: Varying sizes of kindling
Survival: Utilizing a flint and steel
Survival: Bird nests as tinder
Survival: Encourage a small flame by blowing on it
Animal Handling: Picketing a horse on a stake
Loot: N/A

[Magna]

Thread Name: Short talks and long walks with Pacheco & Khan
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: boring language thread, you might die of boredom
Collaboration: I have no friends
Magic Experience: no
Injuries/Ailments: none
Requested Lore:
[Bodybuilding] Eat less than the energy you expend = weight loss
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Common greeting.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Friendly greeting.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Expressing Gratitude.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Has different ways of saying the same thing depending on who you're talking to.
[Linguistics] Ithmi: Language of the Rathari.
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[NPC]: Khan: Speaks Ithmi
[NPC]: Khan: Likeable
[NPC]: Khan: Useful
[NPC]: Khan: Called you his Friend
[NPC]: Khan: agreed to teach you Ithmi
Loot: -2 ration packs

[Leliana]

Thread Name: The Trail to Freedom, Part II
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Learning how to use a sword. Writing out the initial novice stuff is sort of challenging so this might read clunky.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Blades: Longswords may be used with one or two hands
Blades: Key handling differences between large and small blades
Blades: Concept of striking
Blades: Concept or blocking
Blades: Concept of parrying
Tactics: The element of surprise
Loot: N/A

[Milana]

Thread Name:A Trail of Shed Skin
Location: Loras, Grimholdt Territory of Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Taelian
Magic Experience: No (There is some use, but I do not think it is enough to warrant magical XP)
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Taelian:
Tactics: Approaching from two different angles
Logistics: Weighing known costs with unknown dangers
Intimidation: Leveraging proxy-authority to threaten others
Intimidation: Issuing a threat
Intimidation: Power can naturally intimidate, without intention
Negotiation: Lessening the extremity of a demand
Negotiation: Using leverage to get your way
Business: Running a town
Business: Macro-economics
Business: Trade routes


Milana
Business: Running a town
Business: Macro-economics
Business: Trade routes
Business: Adjusting plans on the fly

Negotiation: Bending expectations
Negotiation: Using Mathematics for Impact
Negotiation: Working under pressure
Negotiation: Diverting attention

Loot: N/A

[Milana]

Thread Name: A Hot Searing Day
Location: Loras, Grimhold Territory in Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Leadership: Making connections
Leadership: Giving clear instructions

Business: Organizing a reception
Business: Making decisions based on resources
Business: Recognizing opportunities

Loot: N/A