Review Submission Thread v1.0

[Magna]

Thread Name: Why did Pacheco cross the river
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: Broke a tree to find my horse.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Raw hands, a few scrapes - cleaned.
Requested Lore:
[Bodybuilding] The proper lifting technique for a tree trunk.
[Bodybuilding] Alternating arms during manual labor for optimum gains.
[Bodybuilding] It's not as efficient to work out on an empty stomach.
[Bodybuilding] Stretching after exercise relieves tension and promotes recovery.
[Running] Performing a short uphill sprint.
[Survival] Utilizing rocks as tools for breaking wood.
Loot: +1 Medium tree

[Taelian Edevane]

Thread Name: Fleshless
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes - for Necromancy
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Necromancy: Can alter souls
Necromancy: Carving Hook
Necromancy: Practicing with inanimate meat
Necromancy: The Carving Hook can twist and manipulate flesh
Spycraft: Manipulating someone with blackmail
Rhetoric: Humor

Loot: N/A

[Patrick]

Thread Name: Breaking Bad Habits
Location: Lands of 8 (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: The Barnell Bros. begin their camping trip during Glade, as Connor suffers the withdrawal of his drug addiction.
Collaboration: Nah
Magic Experience: Nurp
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Skill

• Survival: Surveying A Place To Camp
• Survival: Scouting The Camp's Perimeter
• Survival: Pitching A Tent
• Survival: Setting Up A Campfire
• Survival: Nature's Bounty Helps One Survive
• Cooking: Using A Campfire To Make Meals

General

• Personal: Camping With Your Brothers
• Lands of Eight: The Wilderness of Atinaw

Loot: None

[Magna]

Thread Name: Finding Pacheco
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: I nearly drowned
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Muscle soreness in arms and legs, headache due to hunger and strain.
Requested Lore:
[Bodybuilding] Performing a barbell curl with a small tree.
[Bodybuilding] Performing a deadlift with a small tree.
[Hunting] The difference between running and walking in tracks.
[Swimming] Keep your body streamline to avoid sinking.
[Swimming] Efficiency > Speed.
[Swimming] Turning your head to the side to breathe while you paddle.
Loot: -1 Medium tree

[Magna]

Thread Name: On Pacheco's Trail
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: None really, sat around and ate berries.
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: A few pricks from thorns
Requested Lore:
[Bodybuilding] Berries and other fruits can grant small boosts of energy when eaten in moderation.
[Bodybuilding] Eating after a workout helps with recovery.
[Meditation] A peaceful walk through the forest can calm frayed nerves.
[Meditation] Revisiting the events of that day to help gather your focus when tired.
[Survival] Plants with thorns often harbor berries.
[Survival] Filtering river water before drinking it can reduce the chances of sickness.
Loot: None

[Taelian Edevane]

Thread Name: The Game
Location: Sil-Elaine
Notes/Warnings: Kinda gross.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Blades: Jabbing weak spots
Blades: Twisting a dagger
Blades: Backhanded charge
Running: Charging with a weapon
Unarmed Combat: Follow-up strike
Unarmed Combat: Punching a bone clean off

Loot: N/A

[Magna]

Thread Name: Pacheco!
Location: Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: I found my horse and all the stuff I lost here. Also, someone lost their arm.
Collaboration: I have no friends lol
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Sunburn, mild dehydration
Requested Lore:
[Bodybuilding] People can be used as weights in desperate times.
[Investigation] Determining the source of a slow bleed.
[Investigation] Keeping your suspicious to yourself until you're absolutely certain.
[Meditation] Keeping your cool when faced with a thief by focusing on the positive.
[Running] Running downhill is likely to end in injury.
[Running] Better to move at a steady pace if you're tired.
Loot: See the notes section.

[Patrick]

Thread Name: Coming Around
Location: Lands of 8 (Atinaw)
Notes/Warnings: Dominik introduces his brothers to the art of fishing.
Collaboration: Nah
Magic Experience: Nurp
Injuries/Ailments: Natta
Requested Lore:
Skill

• Fishing: Priming Your Rod
• Fishing: Baiting Your Rod
• Fishing: Using Live Bait To Catch Fish
• Fishing: Casting Your Line Appropriately
• Fishing: Snagging A Fish With Your Hook
• Fishing: Keeping The Strain On Your Line To A Minimum

General

• Personal: First Time Fishing
• Personal: First Fish Caught

Loot: N/A

[Milana]

Thread Name: Tick Tock I
Location: Loras, Grimholdt Territory in Atinaw
Notes/Warnings: This is my first Artificing solo, so the writing is kind of dense.
Collaboration: (Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, Artificing
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Artificing: Shroud Lure
Artificing: Programming Verbal Commands
Artificing: Teaching a Golem
Artificing: Golems only know what you teach
Artificing: Simple Pictographs for Simple Purposes
Loot: 1 prototype leather binding golem

[Saej Mirilla]

Thread Name: Drink and the Devil Had Done for the Rest viewtopic.php?f=29&t=648
Location: Alfsos, Silver Lion Inn
Notes/Warnings: Nope, just some good, wholesome contact with the dead
Collaboration: Yes, Athalos
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:
Saej
Animal Handling; Keeping a cold weather dog out of the hot sun
Animal Handling; Taking an animal into a crowded market
Business; Checking out the competition
Business; Local businesses vrs traveling merchants
Business; Choosing your stock
Business; The need to learn the local languages for traveling merchants

Althalos
Negotiation - Offering Meals for Knowledge
Negotiation - Getting All You Can Get From Someone
Storytelling - Avoiding Gruesome Details
Interrogation - Asking Big Questions First
Psychology - Some People Are Loud, Some are Quiet
Tracking - Stalking Someone Through a Crowd
Tracking - Foreigners Make Waves
Stealth - Staying At A Target's Back

Loot: None