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Oliver
Posts: 76
Joined: Wed Jul 06, 2022 10:39 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2078
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2099

Thu Nov 10, 2022 3:33 pm


Thread Name: Star Crossed
Location: Grisic Empire
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
6 Generic Lores

Loot: (If applicable)

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Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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word count: 35
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Oliver
Posts: 76
Joined: Wed Jul 06, 2022 10:39 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2078
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2099

Tue Nov 15, 2022 3:49 pm


Thread Name: Nothing Lasts Forever
Location: Radenor, Nurin
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
6 Generic Lores

Loot: (If applicable)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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Salen
Posts: 452
Joined: Tue Jan 18, 2022 10:18 am
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1657
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1709&p=7409#p7409
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1686

Thu Nov 17, 2022 11:15 am


Thread Name: The Fall of Dahlia Senerite I
Location: Amoren's Underground.
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: Baptism for Hugo (First initiation), Mentalism for Salen and Nightfall for Jared.
Injuries/Ailments: (Has your character received any injuries or status effects?)
Requested Lore:
Salen
Remnant: Falsification - Altering the status of an engram
Remnant: Falsification - Logical events in a mind are required to initiate mind control.
Remnant: Falsification - Creating logical narratives in the mind.
Remnant: Mnemonic Impression - Using the mindscape to protect from nightmares.
Remnant: Junction - Activating an array of Engrams
Remnant: Voyage - Vulnerable whilst engaging in the act at master.
Mentalism: The Weave - Stopping a dagger in motion.
Mentalism: Overstepping - The Neurocrux is known to be sensitive to gravitational pressure.
Acrobatics: Lunging at a foe.
Unarmed Combat: Tackling a foe.

Hugo
Baptism: The Initiation
Baptism: Death is part of the initiation
Baptism: The magic of divination, water and it's isotopic states.
Baptism: The experience of dying and resurrection.
Baptism: Risen, a mage who has survived a Baptism ritual.
Baptism: A magic associated balance and neutrality.
Baptism: Concept - Greymage
Baptism: Concept - The Doors
2 Generic Lores.

Jared
Pending...

Loot: Trauma for Hugo.

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Current Levels.
Jared - 5
Salen - 4
Hugo - 0
New Mageblight: (If Any)
+2 for Hugo (Baptism Initiation) (He's on 2)
+1 for Salen (Mentalism Overstepping) (He's on 5)
+0 for Jared (He's on 5)
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word count: 234
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Sat Nov 19, 2022 4:39 am


Thread Name: When Ash Turns to Snow
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Simple lifestyle writing about dealing with Mageblight Recovery
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Cramps, muscle fatigue, radioether-infused bile;
Requested Lore:
  • Cooking: Rock-boiling;
  • Bodybuilding: Mild Recovery while Resting;
  • Bodybuilding: Resisting on-sets of Early Mageblight Symptoms;
  • Bodybuilding: Resisting pain from concussive force;
  • Bodybuilding: Moving while severely hindered by Mageblight;
  • Medicine: Treating fevers with cooling compress;
Loot: Nil

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 5 - Early Stage Mageblight
New Mageblight: Nil
word count: 87
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Salen
Posts: 452
Joined: Tue Jan 18, 2022 10:18 am
Location: Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1657
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1709&p=7409#p7409
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1686

Mon Nov 21, 2022 3:31 pm


Thread Name: Cat Gotcha Tounge?
Location: Boghadar
Notes/Warnings: Fat Scottish Cat,
Collaboration: Yes
Magic Experience: No (Ulgan has Skill Debt)
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Salen
Remnant: Phantasmal Reckoning - Disguising a crime scene
Remnant: Phantasmal Reckoning - Using illusions as a device of deception.
Blades: Backstabbing
Blades: Quick strike
Blades: Severing nerves in the neck
Acting: Feigning attraction
Acting: Creating a false identity
Acting: Getting into character.
Biology: The cervical nerve in the neck
Biology: Severing the cervical nerve is instant death.

Ulgan
Pending...

Loot: (If applicable)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: +1 for Ulgan due to the use of Embodying
New Mageblight: 1/10 for Ulgan.
word count: 106
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Oliver
Posts: 76
Joined: Wed Jul 06, 2022 10:39 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2078
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2099

Wed Nov 23, 2022 6:22 pm


Thread Name: The Collective of Scars
Location: Sil'Elaine
Notes/Warnings: Somewhat Graphic but not that graphic.
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: None (Skill Debt)
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Flash - A spray of fire from the gun
Sigilic Pyromancy: Flash - Closed range is more lethal.
Sigilic Pyromancy: Flare - Used to cauterise wounds.
Sigilic Pyromancy: Flare - A conjured bolt of fire
Sigilic Pyromancy: Searing - Used to see Dranoch in their hunting ground
Sigilic Pyromancy: Searing - Can be used to communicate to ghosts

Loot: (If applicable)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight:
 ! Message from: Treachery
+1 Level of Mageblight - due extensive use of Ether for Sigilic Pyromancy (Treachery)
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word count: 109
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Vinsue
Posts: 62
Joined: Thu Jul 14, 2022 8:37 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?t=2085
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2103

Thu Nov 24, 2022 6:57 pm


Thread Name: Nails and scrap

Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: no
Collaboration: no
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: no
Requested Lore:
Metalsmithing: forging a nail
Metalsmithing: cutting hot metal
Metalsmithing: use of a nail header
Metalsmithing: reading plans
Metalsmithing: using scrap
Teaching: encouragement through use of the students mind
Loot: 6 old rusted gears
For Magical Threads
Mageblight: at this point 0 (no stage)
New Mageblight:0
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Oliver
Posts: 76
Joined: Wed Jul 06, 2022 10:39 am
Location: Lorien
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2078
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2099

Thu Nov 24, 2022 7:19 pm


Thread Name: Going My Own Way
Location: Radenor, Nurin
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: None
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
6 Generic Lores

Loot: Nil;
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word count: 27
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Moop
Posts: 117
Joined: Sat Nov 07, 2020 8:21 pm
Location: Headed from Dagrun to you~
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1131
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=1405
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1173

Sun Nov 27, 2022 6:14 pm


Thread Name: viewtopic.php?f=154&t=2256 Nostalgia and Mushroom Soup
Location: Dagrun
Notes/Warnings: doot doot
Collaboration: solo
Magic Experience: no
Injuries/Ailments: no
Requested Lore: 6 generic lore


Loot: dress, mask, dog (in ledger, NPC approved)

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: (Current Level)
New Mageblight: (If Any)
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word count: 49
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Taelian Edevane
Posts: 1265
Joined: Sun Jul 14, 2019 5:23 pm
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=78&t=286
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Sun Nov 27, 2022 11:42 pm


Thread Name: Promise
Location: Kastran, Lorien's West End
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Yes (Taelian and Thomas)
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
x8 Generic Lores for Taelian, Thomas.

Loot: N/A
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word count: 36
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