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Sola
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Location: Tilema
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Wed Mar 08, 2023 5:25 pm


Thread Name: teach me magic
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: not really
Collaboration: yes - Luna and Ivar
Magic Experience: Yes - for Ivar
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Luna:
Teaching: It’s important to explain things simply
Teaching: Beginners should start with easy stuff
Teaching: Watching your students to make sure they’re not making mistakes
Teaching: Arranging a time for the next lesson
Leadership: Giving encouragement
Etiquette: Gracefully accepting payment

Ivar:
Mentalism: Lifting things with telekinesis
Mentalism: if you don’t focus your weave will disappear
Mentalism: pushing something
Mentalism: pulling something


Loot: Nil;

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Luna
Mageblight: Level: 0
New Mageblight: nope - only lifted a cup

Ivar
Mageblight: Level: 2
New Mageblight: reviewer's discretion
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Sola
Posts: 364
Joined: Mon Dec 26, 2022 3:47 pm
Location: Tilema
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Thu Mar 09, 2023 10:50 am


Thread Name: Target Practice
Location: Amoren
Notes/Warnings: a bunny dies. Also this is what I was intending to train in this thread:
"Journeyman Mentalists can also split their Weave into multiple different fractions that they can remotely manipulate, tending to move them by dispersing and reforming them at the desired location."
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes
Injuries/Ailments: No
Requested Lore:

Mentalism: Splitting the weave into multiple fractions
Mentalism: Controlling multiple weaves at once requires a lot of mental focus
Mentalism: Combining multiple weaves into one
Mentalism: Launching rocks at a rabbit
Mentalism: Using your hands to help direct the weave
Mentalism: Moving the weave rapidly

Loot: Nil;

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: Level: 0
New Mageblight: +1
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Arkash
Posts: 1060
Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=745
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Mar 28, 2023 2:10 am


Thread Name: Hooligan Hoe Down III Confrontation
Location: The Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Arkash has some graphic compulsions/visions
Collaboration: Yes, Luna Freya
Magic Experience: Yes, mentalism for Luna, Lucence for Arkash
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Arkash:
Acting: Gentaverse
Acting: Like a valran
Acting: Adopting an accent you're familiar with
Lucence: Resisting the compulsions by focusing on the stakes
Meditation: Withdraw into yourself to escape strong compulsions

Loot: N/A

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: None
New Mageblight: None
word count: 81
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Arkash
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Joined: Wed Jul 01, 2020 6:03 pm
Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=760

Tue Mar 28, 2023 9:51 am


Thread Name: A mark to bend light
Location: The Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Some swearing 🙈
Collaboration: No
Magic Experience: Yes, Lucence for Arkash
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:
Arkash:
Lucence: Summoning light
Lucence: Ray: Creates a small ray of light

Loot: N/A

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: None
New Mageblight: None
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Gloomcrest
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Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
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Sat Apr 01, 2023 6:47 pm


Thread Name: After the Fire
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes for Lucence (2 Exp)
Injuries/Ailments: Slight drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Lucence (Ray) - Manifesting candlelight;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Controlling intensity of softlight;
  • Stealth - Picking at doors in the open;
  • Larceny - Using standard-iron padlocks;
  • Larceny - Opening standard doors;
  • Investigation - Listening for footsteps;
Loot: Nil

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0 - Mainly use Divinity as Arcane Resource;
New Mageblight: 0 - Just require a some rest;

Notes: Open to Mod-bomb.
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Gloomcrest
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Sat Apr 01, 2023 6:53 pm


Thread Name: A Light within the Dark
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes for Lucence (5 Exp)
Injuries/Ailments: Significant drain on Divinity;
Requested Lore:
  • Lucence (Ray) - Manifesting an orb of silver light;
  • Lucence (Ray) - altering between harsh and soft light;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Dissapting light source on command;
  • Lucence (Bulwark) - Manifesting cloak of light;
  • Lucence (Bulwark) - Understanding the innate properties;
  • Investigation - Noticing places of interest from afar;
Loot: Nil

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0 - Mainly use Divinity as Arcane Resource;
New Mageblight: 0 - Just require a some rest;
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
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Sat Apr 01, 2023 7:02 pm


Thread Name: Nimble Fingers and Stubborn Locks
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo, Wage Submission
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Nil
Requested Lore:
  • Investgation - Conducting days of information collection;
  • Larceny - Identify the most effective lockpicking techniques to use for standard padlocks;
  • Larceny - Identify the personal style of picking locks;
  • Larceny - Figuring out the type of locking mechanism
  • Larceny - Feeling resistance of security pin;
  • Larceny - Troubleshooting security pins;
Loot: Nil

Note: Open for Mod-bombs;
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Arkash
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Location: Imperial Badlands, Daravin
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Sun Apr 02, 2023 6:20 pm


Thread Name: Hooligan Hoe Down IV Distraction
Location: The Imperial Badlands, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Blood, murder, death, strangulation, cruelty
Collaboration: Yes, Luna Freya
Magic Experience: Yes, mentalism for Luna
Injuries/Ailments: Luna is smelly
Requested Lore:
Arkash:
Acrobatics: Escape binds by changing form.
Lucence: Doesn't always punish you for committing acts of violence
Stealth: Merge with the shadows with your cardinal powers to become invisible
Stealth: Mass casting while invisible
Stealth: Melee while unseen
Sundering: Isotopic chamber
Sundering: Isotopic chamber: a compact, pyramid-shaped forge
Sundering: Scab

Luna:
Mentalism: Using an Obelisk to maintain the emotional state of satiated raiders
Mentalism: A mentalist's mind is capable of processing a lot more information than a non-mentalist
Mentalism: it's harder to manipulate the weave when Luna's hands are bound
Gunslinging: Guns are loud
Ranged weaponry: Longbow - shooting an arrow into the heart of a tied-up target
Bodybuilding: struggling against one's restraints
Seduction: Entertaining a camp full of raiders

Loot: +1 Chariot, +1 unlicensed Sundering kit (which was already paid for in a prior thread and doesn't need approval) for Arkash
+1 Chariot, +1 Arquebus, and ammo for Luna

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: None
New Mageblight: Maybe for Luna
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Gloomcrest
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Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
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Sat Apr 08, 2023 10:18 pm


Thread Name: A Thief's Search Warrant
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, Lucence (2 exp);
Injuries/Ailments: Slight drain on Divinity
Requested Lore: (What knowledge did your character gain?)
  • Lucence (Ray) - Conjuring a floating sphere of light;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Controlling the intensity of light for robbery purposes;
  • Larceny - Using a prybar to open crates;
  • Larceny - Attempting to obscure tampered goods;
  • Stealth - Light footwork on creaking staircase;
  • Stealth - Peeking from behind a door;
Loot: Nil;
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Sat Apr 08, 2023 10:50 pm


Thread Name: Loose Lips, Scattered Parchments and Sticky Fingers
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, Bypass (2 exp)
Injuries/Ailments: Slight fatigue and drain on Divinity;
Requested Lore:
  • Stealth: Sneaking by guards;
  • Stealth: Creeping through quiet hallways;
  • Larceny: Identifying the type of combination lock;
  • Larceny: Quietly opening a safety box while under guard supervision
  • Investigation: Finding suitable cover to avoid guard's vision;
  • Running: Moving quickly under guard's vision;
Loot: Nil
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