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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
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Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Mon Sep 11, 2023 7:18 pm


Thread Name: Laying Low and Scheming from a Guise
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes (2 Points into Acclimate)
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Acting - Maintaining a guise of a chef;
  • Stealth - Hiding usage of Divinity in a busy environment;
  • Investgation - Checking if people are watching;
  • Negotiation - Talking to the Supervisor to leave early due to finishing all of the required work;
  • Etiquette - Respecting one's superiors
  • Etiquette - Maintaining composure under pressure;
word count: 84
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Sep 11, 2023 7:23 pm


Thread Name: A Thief in the Making
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes (2 Points into Bypass, 2 Points into Acclimate and 1 Point in Lucence)
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Larceny - Using his Draedan Ability: Bypass to open various doors;
  • Stealth - Quietly entering restricted premises
  • Investgation - Searching for valuables;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Conjuring a cone of light to search;
  • Larceny - Ransacking a home;
  • Stealth - Quietly exiting scene of the crime;
word count: 82
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Sep 11, 2023 7:32 pm


Thread Name: Villainous Vibes
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes (2 Points into Wildering, 2 Points into Acclimate and 1 Point in Lucence)
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Investigation - Seeking out weak spots to infiltrate;
  • Stealth - Moving under camouflage;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Creating a spark of light;
  • Stealth - Darting for cover;
  • Investigation - Identifying issues with larceny approach with trained hounds;
  • Stealth - Leaving the scene while others are distracted;
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2022

Mon Sep 11, 2023 7:44 pm


Thread Name: Showdown between Rats and Dogs I
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes (1 Points into Wildering, 2 Points into Acclimate and 2 Point in Lucence)
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Acrobatics - Guarding against sword-strikes with fluid movements;
  • Lucence (Beacon) - Firing bolts of light at enemies;
  • Lucence (Beacon) - Conjuring blinding bolts;
  • Lucence (Beacon) - Generating a large blast radius of light;
  • Running - Outpacing a group of guardsmen;
  • Stealth - Vanishing in the middle of combat;
word count: 87
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Mon Sep 11, 2023 7:51 pm


Thread Name: Showdown Between Rats and Dogs II - Daggers and Cloak
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Nil
Magic Experience: Yes (2 Points into Acclimate and 3 Point in Lucence)
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate drain on Divinity
Requested Lore (Jared):
  • Running: Sprinting away from patrol groups;
  • Climbing - Scaling up a wall while being chased;
  • Acrobatics - Maintaining balance while being pursued;
  • Lucence (Beacom) - Firing a volley of light at a group of armoured guards;
  • Lucence (Dominion) - Enhancing arms and legs with physical enhancement;
  • Lucence (Ray) - Creating a burst of dazing light;
word count: 93
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Volundr
Posts: 59
Joined: Wed Dec 29, 2021 2:11 am
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?t=1717
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=2404

Fri Sep 15, 2023 3:38 pm




Thread Name: An Idyllic Sort of Life...
Location: The Southern Marches (Daravin)
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Volundr + Vivian
Magic Experience: Volundr: Yes, Nightfall (3) ; Vivian: No
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:

Vivian

Mount: Learning to hold a rider
Mount: Size makes getting on difficult; a ramp helps
Seduction: Flirting to get out of something
Seduction: Drunk isn't sexy.
Seduction: Vomiting is even less sexy.
Persuasion: When someone sees you commiting a crime...twist your words.
Persuasion: Cmon, I'm too pretty to arrest.
Intimidation: Don't fuck with Ascendants.
Negotiation: Getting out of being caught red handed.
Negotiation: Tit for tat. You give me this, I give you that.
Hunting: Following prey by scent
Hunting: Flushing prey
Hunting: Swallowing prey whole
Teaching: About general matters, speak widely and frankly
Teaching: Sometimes, seeing is believing.
Teaching: Taking a student on a road trip

Volundr

Nightfall: Forming Umbraplasm into different shapes and structures
Nightfall: Giving weight to Umbraplasm
Nightfall: Using weight and form of Umbraplasm to mimic parts of the body
Nightfall-Compass: Keeping multiple compasses on hand
Nightfall-Compass: Compressing compasses to be smaller and more hidden
Nightfall: Using abilities for much longer periods of time
Nightfall: Overstepping and dealing with the consequences
Nightfall-Compass: Reforming used Umbraplasm back into Compasses
Nightfall: Restricting movement with Umbraplasm
Nightfall: Preparing Compasses to be used immediately
Nightfall: Creative uses of Umbraplasm
Cooking: Preparing food for babies
Cooking: Effective low-cost cooking
Cooking: General Lore x3

Loot: N/A

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0 for both
New Mageblight: +3 Mageblight for Volundr due to heavy overstepping
word count: 262
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Vivian
Posts: 342
Joined: Tue Apr 12, 2022 9:50 am
Location: Amoren
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1882&p=8295#p8295
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=16&t=2156&p=9611#p9611
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1891

Fri Sep 15, 2023 5:28 pm




Thread Name: A Glowing Fascination
Location: Amoren (Daravin)
Notes/Warnings: None
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: None
Requested Lore:

Vivian
Malformity: Imprint - Motyxia sequoiae, the Luminous Millipede
Malformity: Using a toxic substance
Malformity: Bioluminescence as a convenient tool.
Biology: Cyanide smells like almonds
Biology: Some insects excrete poison when threatened
Biology: Some animals generate their own light through bacteria.

Loot: N/A

For Magical Threads
Mageblight: 0
New Mageblight: None
word count: 72
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Gloomcrest
Posts: 271
Joined: Sun Jun 12, 2022 7:52 am
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=2017
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Sat Sep 16, 2023 10:03 pm


Thread Name: Maker of Keys
Location: Genteven, The Northern Marches, Daravin
Notes/Warnings: Nil
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: 2 Points of Bypass and 3 Points Acclimate
Injuries/Ailments: Moderate Drain on Divinity
Requested Lore:
  • Craft (Locksmith) - Making a draft of a key through Divinity;
  • Larceny - Creating a bump key;
  • Investigation - Checking the strength of his temporarily crafted items;
  • Investigation - Testing limits of using Divinity on his thievery tools;
word count: 68
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Vivian
Posts: 342
Joined: Tue Apr 12, 2022 9:50 am
Location: Amoren
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1882&p=8295#p8295
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=16&t=2156&p=9611#p9611
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1891

Sat Oct 07, 2023 5:35 pm


Thread Name: A Craving and a Robbery
Location: Jorikford, Radenor
Notes/Warnings: Old thread, partner will likely be submitting separately
Collaboration: Yes, Andros
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Vivian was pregnant
Requested Lore:

Persuasion: Mind talking before you attempt to kill me?
Persuasion: Take pity on me
Persuasion: No harm no foul
Seduction: Age doesnt bother me
Seduction: Handling rejection
Larceny: Can't give it back if its in your gut
Larceny: Prioritizing needs
Larceny: Getting caught isnt always a bad thing
Larceny: Sneaking is hard with dogs around

Loot: N/A
word count: 92
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Vivian
Posts: 342
Joined: Tue Apr 12, 2022 9:50 am
Location: Amoren
Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=1882&p=8295#p8295
Plot Notes: viewtopic.php?f=16&t=2156&p=9611#p9611
Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=1891

Sat Oct 07, 2023 5:47 pm


Thread Name: Matins
Location: Jorikford, Radenor
Notes/Warnings: Old thread, partner will likely be submitting separately
Collaboration: Yes, Hakon
Magic Experience: No
Injuries/Ailments: Vivian was pregnant
Requested Lore:

Meditation: Using your magic to focus
Meditation: Using another person' body as a touchstone
Meditation: Tap into your deepest self
Meditation: Malformity is about the body, and the structures in it, use those to lose yourself
Meditation: Coming out too quickly
Persuasion: A little gaslighting never hurt anyone
Persuasion: How dare you interrupt me! Feel guilty

Loot: N/A
word count: 88
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