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Players wishing to receive a review and be awarded Lore and EXP points for their threads should submit them here. Please include the following information in your request.

Post Reminders: Posts in Ransera must meet a minimum of 300 words. This is a literate website. Gross grammatical errors will be prompted to be corrected before any awards are given.

Solo: A solo thread should be approximately 1500 words. This is not a strict requirement but a general guideline. You are permitted to choose 6 Skill Lores. 5 EXP per Solo. 8 EXP if the thread receives a Mod-Bomb.

Collaboration: A thread involving two or more player-characters interacting with each other. You are permitted to choose up to 8 Skill Lores. 10 Skill Lores if a minimum of 5 posts is reached by a player in a collaboration thread. An additional lore can be granted for every 5 posts beyond that. 8 EXP per Collaboration.

Moderated Collaboration: A thread that is guided and narrated by a member of the staff. You are permitted to choose up to 8 Skill Lores. 10 EXP per Moderated Collaboration.

Magic Experience vs. Normal Experience: When seeking to gain magic experience points (XP/EXP) you must specifically request said experience points. When awarded experience points for magic, they can only be allocated toward the specific magic for which it has been requested. At which point in time all of the requested experience points must be devoted toward the requested magic XP. Normal experience points can be allocated toward whatever mundane skill the player desires.

As a courtesy to the people who will be spending time to review threads submitted, it is requested that threads do not exceed 2 pages. Once the 2 page mark has been reached, it is requested that players and staff create a continuation thread.

Mageblight: In any threads utilizing magic or requesting magical XP, the PC requesting magical XP must state their current Mageblight, and must add any tiers of Overstepping in accordance with the system linked: here. As an example, if you currently have a level of 0 Mageblight but were initiated in-thread, for Mageblight enter '0', and for New Mageblight enter '0+2'.

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[b]Location:[/b] (Where did it take place?)
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[b]Collaboration:[/b] (Yes? Who was involved? If another PC or Mod was not involved, it is a solo.)
[b]Magic Experience:[/b] (Yes or No?)
[b]Injuries/Ailments:[/b] (Has your character received any injuries or status effects?)
[b]Requested Lore: [/b] (What knowledge did your character gain?)
[b]Loot: [/b] (If applicable)

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Taelian Edevane
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Tue Dec 24, 2019 7:29 pm


Thread Name: The Unknown
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Summoning.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Summoning: Rituals
Summoning: Ritual of Binding
Summoning: Communing With Archetypes
Summoning: The Ebony Nightmare
Summoning: Ether is offered for a contract
Summoning: Be careful of who courts your offer

Religion: Veravend: Alive
Religion: Veravend: Extricated to the Mists
Loot: N/A
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Wed Dec 25, 2019 11:23 am


Thread Name: Binding
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Summoning.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Summoning: Archetypal Classifications
Summoning: Nahl
Summoning: Vrannik
Summoning: Tyrid
Summoning: Qe'zhod
Summoning: Hira'lotha

Loot: N/A
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Character Sheet: viewtopic.php?f=43&t=47
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Wed Dec 25, 2019 5:51 pm


Thread Name: The Ebon Waltz
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Summoning.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Summoning: The Vesj'vakar language
Summoning: Maintaining the Ritual of Binding with open eyes
Summoning: A Summoner learns the language of their Archetype
Summoning: Archetypes cannot hurt your aethereal self
Summoning: Mirdun
Summoning: Irothar

Loot: N/A
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Wed Dec 25, 2019 6:10 pm


Thread Name: Another Night
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Collab
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Riven
Elementalism: Drying oneself
Psychology: Alcohol to cope
Psychology: Shifting the blame
Investigation: Spotting a fake smile
Deception: Masking fear
Deception: Avoiding the question
Intimidation: Enraged yelling
Intimidation: Hurtful words
Persuasion: Heartfelt apology
Seduction: Dressed to impress

Taelian: Cleans up nice.
Taelian: Undying loyalty
Taelian: I can hurt him

Taelian
Seduction: Aesthetic cohesion
Seduction: The first step is what you wear
Seduction: Coming on too strong
Investigation: Catching onto hesitation
Persuasion: Convincing a lover to be calm
Persuasion: Tears can persuade
Negotiation: Proposing a romantic relationship
Negotiation: Making amends

Riven: I love him
Riven: Loves me
Riven: Hurt me, a lot

Loot: N/A
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Wed Dec 25, 2019 8:04 pm


Thread Name: Darker Than Blue
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Summoning.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Summoning: Marghozad
Summoning: Summoning multiple Archetypes
Summoning: Lower-tier Archetypes are replicas
Running: Jogging
Running: Breath Control
Blades: Predictive Riposte

Loot: N/A
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Character Secrets: viewtopic.php?f=20&t=152

Thu Dec 26, 2019 10:57 am


Thread Name: Unity
Location: Kalzasi
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Summoning.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Summoning: Ritual of Unification
Summoning: Unification can be used for formation, command and mode
Summoning: Reducing the necessary duration of a ritual through practice
Summoning: Nahl are very unintelligent
Politics: Atinaw's Royalty
Politics: What comes after a war?

Atinaw: Queen Luteria Rutheesee-Sil
Atinaw: The Queen is a Siltori

Loot: N/A
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Sat Dec 28, 2019 8:23 pm


Thread Name: Bad Man
Location: Daravin, the Imperial Badlands
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Sigilic Pyromancy.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Telepathically communicating to specters
Sigilic Pyromancy: Specters and how they work
Sigilic Pyromancy: Specters can easily be killed
Sigilic Pyromancy: Specters release aether to you when killed
Bodybuilding: Continuous physical exertion builds firmer muscles
Running: Chasing through a desert

Elindra: I killed her Wraith
Elindra: Wanted to see Arlain
Daravin: The Halamire
Daravin: The Valran
Daravin: The Imperial Badlands
Daravin: Lady Lieril Lorraine

Loot: N/A
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Sun Dec 29, 2019 9:22 am


Thread Name: The Emblem
Location: Daravin, the Imperial Badlands
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: Yes, for Sigilic Pyromancy.
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Sigilic Pyromancy: Emblem
Sigilic Pyromancy: Emblem weighs down your swings
Sigilic Pyromancy: Emblem does not cost aether
Sigilic Pyromancy: Emblem can be toggled on-and-off
Running: Weighing into your stride when running in sand
Blades: Swinging with a weightier weapon

Renfier: Halamire-Knight
Renfier: A good man
Renfier: Offered to add me to his... harem?

Loot: N/A
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Sun Dec 29, 2019 1:18 pm


Thread Name: The Flower
Location: Daravin, the Imperial Badlands, and Daravin, the Outer Marches
Notes/Warnings: N/A
Collaboration: Solo
Magic Experience: N/A
Injuries/Ailments: N/A
Requested Lore:
Politics: The Daravinic Entente
Politics: The Halamire's station
Politics: Daravin's Siltori Elite
Survival: Accepting the generosity of strangers
Investigation: Noting subtle cues
Investigation: Spotting a disdainful glance

Loot: N/A
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