Addendum for Ford: 5 XP in Lucence 5 Lore in Lucence: Lucence: Ray: Condensing the light into a visible, contained ball. Lucence: Ray: Maintaining the flow of Ether to maintain the ball Lucence: Ray: Extending and expanding the shape of the orb of light can change depending on intent. Lucence: Emoti...

Good edits. Approved!

NPC Application [hr] [hr] Notes: Strong backstory, and an interesting character. I'd like to see him be de-skilled a bit, however. Having him be ascended in Malformity seems a bit much, in particular. I'd focus on whether he's going to be more of an assassin for hire vs an intelligence gatherer. Hi...

This is just a little note to say that I read this and I think it's quite well thought out. Typically, I read business applications a few times before responding and think about them in my spare time a bit, but since the site has been slower, I wanted to give you an update that I've started that pro...

I agree with you on principle, here: Arkash had an interesting relationship with Degare and it's jarring to just pretend none of that happened because the man himself vanished. I'm not sure I really feel qualified to weigh in on the specifics of this plot, however. All of these NPCs are from before ...

I'm not sure I'm seeing a cohesion to these mutations. I think they would benefit from an underlying thematic write-up, and the inclusion of a paragraph or two on what the theme is, how it developed, and how it manifests. Once there's a thematic center, I think evaluating each mutation and how they ...

My one and only note here is that 48 seems a bit young to have had an entire first career, become renowned in her field, retired, then have an entire second career and become renowned again as a teacher. Other than that, though, I think she is well thought out and lore congruent. Please let me know ...

Closing this for now. If you change your mind re: Corvo and want to pick up where you left off, please let me know.

You are conflating two distinct requests here. A retirement is just stating "this character is officially no longer in use." I am happy to retire Ivar at any time, provided that you are truly ready to no longer post as him. Nothing other than making the request is required. If you wish for this to p...

It may take a while to get these reviewed and approved, as Lucence is a net-new magic, but I'm happy to take on reviewing these and coming back with a determination.